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Published: 2018-09-23 12:34:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 23671; Favourites: 292; Downloads: 39
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For context this is supposed to take place just after the Kids find out about the Aliens and they each get assigned a guardian.
Features shattered glass Airachnid and Jack.
My main SG comic- > fav.me/dcu2892
Prequel Mini Series -> fav.me/dcxlaj0
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So I finished this thing...
I'm not very happy with it to be honest, but you get to the point where it probably isn't a good idea to keep editing something.
However, this is the first mini-comic I've done that I think is of a suitable quality to upload.
As I'm not the most confident with my writing, I'd appreciate any critiques or advice people might have.
Shattered Glass is the transformers version of the classic Sci Fi mirror-verse trope, where the Decepticons are the good guys fighting against the evil Autobots.
Here's a link to my other shattered glass pictures .
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i meant that to be an original comment, sorry
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honestly? the writing is alright, and I'm looking forward to more of these SGP comics and pics and stories, tho I Airracnid with a Bike mode kinda feels odd, but that's probably cus of her namesake with the whole "air" thing and it would be completely out of the whole "robots in disguise" kinda thing. and is the whole story just gonna be an inversion of the TFP cartoon? or will there be some stories that mirror the show and some that don't? this came completely out of nowhere. great work as always, Cathy.
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Yeah, quite a few people have said that, and I get it 
I've had a bike mode in mind right from the beginning (there's wheel's on the legs of the first SG Airachnid picture I uploaded almost a year ago now), as you surmised it was to suit the 'in disquise' thing as I thought Jack flying a helicopter to school might attract attention, and I wanted to reduce the number of flyers on the 'con's side.
I'm hoping to make it its own thing rather than a mirror, so yeah it'll probably be a mix of both.
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ah I see where your going with this, since the cons most notable stuff would be their flight (ever since G1) it make sense for them to be land base.
so do you have an entire story planned out or your improsing it on the fly?
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Well partly that, its also to give them a more equal playing field with the 'bots considering if they could all fly they'd immediately have a huge advantage over the usually flightless Autobots.
I've got the major story beats pretty much decided on now, the stuff in between's a bit hazier.
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I and my friend by wanna want more comic or pages like this. We seriosly LOVE IT.
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You welcome. And we canot wait
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I think your writing is just fine! My only issues - sorry to be a grammar Nazi - is some very minor spelling errors (I think it's supposed to be 'Sentio Metallico' and you missed out the 'l' in 'fleshlings'), but besides that I have nothing else to critique story-wise. A nice way for the two of them to meet, and I can tell that in your SG-verse Jack is more enthusiastic - kinda like Miko - while SG Airachnid seems more level-headed and wary. Interesting personalities you've given them. Great job!
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Ah stupid me! Thanks a lot for spotting those mistakes! I've corrected them.
Yeah, he's supposed to be a more Miko-like character, I'm glad I managed to get that across
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No problem
Feel free to submit your previous SG works into the group as well~
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I didn't want to fill the group with my pictures, but I'll submit some of my better ones.
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