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SoUr-MaNtIs — The Orphan

Published: 2012-05-11 06:46:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2233; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 32
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Description Why haven't I done anything with Cheena and Sharza's parents? X3
Well, at least I made something with them in it. The story of Sharza being adopted is not like Darwin's, who apparently got bought from some pet store, then started to grow limbs and whatnot. I have always made Sharza an abandoned and abused kid. Marky, Nicole's brother, and Anna, Richard's sister, adopted her, after listening to her rough story...

Marky and Anna have been strolling around their town of Mossberg. They are waiting for their 4 year old child Cheena to come home from Kindergarten.
Marky: Well, just a few more hours till Cheena comes home from school. What do you want to do?
Anna: I don't know Mark, what about we just take a stroll?
Suddenly, it begins to rain quite a bit. Anna gets quite irritated by this.
Anna: Ugh, it's raining...
Marky: Oh well, we might as well just quickly get home.
???: You stupid girl! Why didn't you get anything from begging?!
Anna: What was that?
Marky: I don't like that noise...
Marky whips out his gun, Anna is quite startled.
Anna: Honey?!
Marky: Look, I'm a cop, I'm allowed to do this...
Anna: Let's ju-just be careful...
Marky and Anna approach the shouts and cries coming from an alleyway, and discover a man whipping a defenseless girl on the ground.
???:Useless! Useless! I might as well kill you now!
Marky: Hey you! Stop hurting that kid!
???: What are you some kind of detective?!
Man sees Marky's badge, and revolver.
Marky: Yes. GET OUT.
Afraid, the man quickly drops the whip and high tails it.
???: O-o-o-okay! Don't shoot me, I'm outta here!
Marky holsters his gun, and him and Anna approach the girl, being a shark on a closer look. She cowers a bit from them.
Marky: Hey, are you okay?
Shark: Get-get away from m-me!
Marky: Hey, hey, please calm down, relax, the bully's gone!
Shark: I don't care, leave me alone!
Anna: We won't hurt you...
Anna gently embraces the girl.
Shark: Who-who are you?
Anna: Relax... What are you doing here in the alleyway, all by yourself? It's raining, why aren't you inside?
Sharza: ...I...
Marky: Do you have parents?
Shark: No...No...I...Yes...but...
Anna: What's wrong?
Shark: I used to have parents, but they didn't...didn't love me... I don't know...then they sold me out the streets to some bullies...
Anna: Honey, please let it all out on us...
Sharza: I was forced to do whatever they wanted to...They forced me to beg for money...they nebver fed or gave me money or anything...they beat me for no reason...
Marky: Well...you can come live with us if you want
Shark: What?
Marky: Right honey?
Anna: Yes. We can't just leave a poor orphan like you out on the streets like this.
Shark: Thank-thank you sir, thank you mam!
Marky: I don't want to hear you say sir, please, call me Dad!
Anna: And call me mom!
Marky: What's your name?
Sharza: Sharza...Sharza Bethany Orville...
Marky: Let's go home, Sharza.

Yes, Sharza is about 3 years old when she got adopted. The story of what happens when Cheena met her is...well another time to tell ^^

Style belongs to Ben Bocquelet.
OC's belong to me.
Art by me.
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Comments: 20

racotaco [2012-11-06 19:23:28 +0000 UTC]

awww cute

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Lewamus [2012-06-07 20:41:58 +0000 UTC]

awwww

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coolmanjms [2012-05-11 20:59:54 +0000 UTC]

wow, can't believe sharza had abusive parents, but at least she is with a better family now.

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CartoonDude95 [2012-05-11 20:01:20 +0000 UTC]

Aw that's so sweet TTwTT

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voidless-rogue [2012-05-11 08:40:28 +0000 UTC]

The back story of Sharza is so touching and sad at the same time, nice work on this bro

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SoUr-MaNtIs In reply to voidless-rogue [2012-05-11 09:52:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. It's why she got a bit insecure at times in the present.

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voidless-rogue In reply to SoUr-MaNtIs [2012-05-11 10:02:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh

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Unded-Punk [2012-05-11 06:54:36 +0000 UTC]

:') ..... wow man, u know how to put up one hell of a touching story dude

BRAVO DUDE! BRAVO!!! T_T

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SoUr-MaNtIs In reply to Unded-Punk [2012-05-11 07:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks bro ^^

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Unded-Punk In reply to SoUr-MaNtIs [2012-05-11 07:02:30 +0000 UTC]

anytime man :')

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Alifabro70 [2012-05-11 06:53:29 +0000 UTC]

Awww...

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TannerxDelia [2012-05-11 06:48:25 +0000 UTC]

Saw this on the front page.

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SoUr-MaNtIs In reply to TannerxDelia [2012-05-11 06:55:33 +0000 UTC]

Do you like it? 0_0

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TannerxDelia In reply to SoUr-MaNtIs [2012-05-11 07:04:40 +0000 UTC]

It's cute.

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SoUr-MaNtIs In reply to TannerxDelia [2012-05-11 07:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks mate ^^

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TannerxDelia In reply to SoUr-MaNtIs [2012-05-11 07:16:49 +0000 UTC]

Requests open?

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SoUr-MaNtIs In reply to TannerxDelia [2012-05-11 09:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Yup. What's in mind?

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TannerxDelia In reply to SoUr-MaNtIs [2012-05-11 10:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Will you do Mallory crying while Nicole comforts her and is saying something soothing to her. I want Nicole holding Mallory. Here is what Mallory looks like [link]

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SoUr-MaNtIs In reply to TannerxDelia [2012-05-11 10:13:18 +0000 UTC]

I'll see what I can do ^^

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TannerxDelia In reply to SoUr-MaNtIs [2012-05-11 10:19:15 +0000 UTC]

Okay.

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