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Published: 2014-06-14 02:36:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1327; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 20
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Everything comes back to the place it began.Film Flick is not an exception, when she returns to the city that abandoned her, Heartbeat.
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Comments: 12
Mr-Tektite [2014-06-15 03:06:24 +0000 UTC]
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Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Over all its a nice picture but it lacks a few things to make it seem realistic.
What I mean by that is for vision for for instance. You have snow flying by yet you picked a non snowy map. so it doesnt really fit as well.
As for originality well I don't think I have seen anything like this before so it looks original to me.
As for technique facial expressions are all great so id say you have great technique that and the snow flying by is a nice touch in it self. Along with the light coming forth from the lantern.
Impact. I can see that there all sad and worried and it makes for a good impact.
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SourceRabbit In reply to Mr-Tektite [2014-06-15 21:32:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique Tektite!
The ''map'' actually was dark room, what you see here is a complete scenebuild made by yours truly, even though I get your point, there should be more snow in the ground if there was snow there to begin with.
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MollyTheMoopy [2014-06-14 17:50:16 +0000 UTC]
Not enough filters
01/10 would not fanfic it.
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Keonwolf96 [2014-06-14 03:47:13 +0000 UTC]
flilm flick doesnt look so good and everypony else is scared, i wounder whats going to happen. o.o
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deadmanwalking289 [2014-06-14 02:40:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh man this does not look good i wounder what happened in the pastΒ
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SourceRabbit In reply to deadmanwalking289 [2014-06-14 14:43:56 +0000 UTC]
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deadmanwalking289 In reply to SourceRabbit [2014-06-14 16:22:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks now i know what happen now i feel badΒ
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