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The auditorium surged as thousands of people packed together like sardines were jumping, dancing, and singing to the music that erupted from all around them. The bass and sound were thumping through the crowd as if it were their own hearts beating in time to the music, vibrating their bodies. The adrenaline that throbbed through those assembled was positively electric. There was an energy here. People screamed and applauded while other jumped up and down. Kid Rock and Ted Nugent both were here, playing to the nearly sold-out arena. Many celebrities were in attendance as well such as Ben Trek, Chuck Norris, and Kelsey Grammar. The Patriots political movement had financed the entire event, from the sets and lighting to the dancers that now took to the stage to the delight of those assembled. All of them were visions of perfect, down-home American beauty, dressed in bikinis baring the stars and stripes or emblazoned with red, white and blue. They paraded across the red carpets as fireworks exploded into the night sky behind them, vibrant and brilliant explosions of the American flag. The gigantic HD television monitor behind them began to show images of their hero and champion, American Hero as she fought crime from various images captured by news footage. This only seemed to excite the crowd even further, sending them into a chant of "Hero! Hero! Hero!"
As if summoned, Jane Smith flew down and descended into the middle of the stage as the clapping All-American Dancers moved to the sides. Her name was flashed all over the monitor behind her as she touched ground. The amazonian woman struck a pose and flashed her perfect smile as the crowd ate all of it up. Thousands of cell-phones and digital cameras flashed almost simultaneously. The blonde haired girl from Georgia basked in it for a moment, waving her hands and winking at them, her adoring fans. A techie rushed up low and brought her a wireless microphone before moving quickly off-stage bent-double. Smith brought the microphone to her lips. The crowd stifled it's noise, waiting to hear what she had to say.
"I'm back Angel Falls!" she shouted as the crowd erupted once again in applause and screaming delight. Jane began to pace back and forth as she waited for them to die down again.
"My opponents have tried their best to have me prosecuted and even tried to have me arrested...". At this the crowd booed and hissed, shaking their heads.
"...BUT I'M STILL STANDIN'!" she yelled out into the microphone, causing the crowd to react with another enthusiastic display of support.
"But I'm not here to talk you about them. You know all about our enemies. They're all around us. They want you and I to pay for them to have sex. They want you and I to support their seven children and their crack habit. They want you and I protect the rest of the world with our money rather than our own nation. They want to take the God out of this great nation and replace him with a pedophile. Yes, I think our enemies have shown themselves and we all know who they are and what their agendas are."
Those assembled shouted back their anger and frustration like sweet music to her ears. One angry man somewhere in the audience screamed out: "KILL THEM ALL JANE!", which was met with thunderous applause and nods of agreement.
American Hero held out her hands and shook her head. "I can do better than that my friend. This year, I am going to beat them at their own game and be running for governor of this great state!"
This statement made the crowd go positively beside itself. Flags were waived and the once again her namesake was chanted all over the arena. Once again she had to wait several moments before she could speak again.
"That's right! Angel Falls by itself has literally dozens of costumed heroes to assist law enforcement, some of which I support. What it really needs is someone to create brave new laws, laws to protect each and every one of you. Laws that even our out of control Meta-human populace would have to accept, such as possible registration...being held accountable for the damages caused by their careless rampages. You also need things that they simply cannot provide, such as jobs and freedom from religious persecution. I will never take the Christ out of Christmas or the Ten Commandments out of our courts. These are the fundamental cornerstones of our society and it is imperative that we stop our nation's descent now. The Patriots movement was born of this urgency. It's the same sense of urgency that propelled the Sons of Liberty during the Revolution. It's the same sense of urgency that propelled the abolitionists before the Civil War and the civil rights movement during the 20th Century. The Patriots movement is part of this noble American tradition. Make no mistake: This is not a political war. This is not a cultural war. This is a spiritual war, an attack on a good, decent, powerful, influential country - the United States of America.β
"Thanks to all of you, there's reason for all of us to have hope because last November, you went to the polls, and you voted out the big-spending politicians and the godless liberals and you put in their place great men and women with a commitment to follow our Constitution and cut the size of government. Even someone as popular as Mindy Marvel was ultimately defeated, right here in this great city! I believe that we're in the very early days of a history-making turn in America and I want to see the momentum continue. We have a lot of work ahead of us: we have high unemployment, devalued housing prices, and the cost of gasoline is skyrocketing...but I believe in this country and I believe that when I am elected governor, I will make the necessary sacrifices and commit myself to taking our country back. We will push forward. We will proclaim liberty throughout the land. And we will do so because we, the people, will never give up on this great nation. God bless you, and God bless the United States of America!"
American Hero placed her hands on her lips and blew a kiss to the frenzied crowds as they cheered loudly and furiously. She stepped down off the stage as the music pumped back to full volume with a hard rock version of "God Bless America" and the dancers went back to work gyrating their bodies. Dozens of fans rushed towards her, some to thank her, others to have her sign her autograph to a photo, some just to touch her costume. She smiled and did what she could to please them as she made her way to the side aisle then on and up the stairs to one of the boxes overlooking the stage.
Several men in suits waited inside, all them clapping their hands as she entered the room. The president of the Patriots organization, Harrison Fontaine, stepped past several of them to shake her hand. He was shorter man, in his late forties and overweight. His pudgy face beamed at her from behind spectacles made tinier by his jowls. Originally a Houston-based lawyer, Fontaine was the primary driving force behind the fund-raising and conception of the political movement. He had been her lead defense attorney at trial and was soon to be functioning as her campaign manager. After the handshake he led her a few feet away where they could talk with some privacy as the other chair-members of the Patriots discussed the future of the campaign.
"A triumph my dear." he said in a quiet voice, moping the sweat off his brow with a handkerchief. "You've become too political a beast for the Organization to contain. I have just received word that they are distancing themselves from so public and outspoken an individual. You are too much in the public eye for their taste."
Jane shrugged. "It doesn't mean they are going to just give up all at once."
"Believe me when I say that they would rather cut their losses this time. They didn't invest much because you were a risk to begin with and apparently one they no longer wish to continue pursuing. They have some egg on their faces to be sure, but I am sure they will recover and find someone else to lead their little international strike team. They'll keep their mouths shut on your history and anything else they had on you so long as you pay them the same courtesy I'm sure."
"What about Matthew?" Jane said in a whispered voice.
Fontaine shook his flabby face. "Dougherty? Now that the Organization has no interest in your former paramour they cut him loose."
"I don't like loose ends Fontaine." Jane said, boring into him with her cobalt-blue eyes. It took him a moment before he realized what she was suggesting.
"Ah, er, of course my dear, consider it tied up. I simply have to make a phone call." he said nodding, wiping his brow again. "Anything else my dear?"
"I want a spot with an interview show...Trek or even that gutless liberal mouth-breather Barnum. Someone that a lot of people watch. Soon."
Fontaine continued nodding. "Anything else Jane?"
Smith smiled, taking off her mask to let out her flowing, golden locks. "Make sure I win Harrison."
To be continued...
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A colossal thanks to my old friend for coming through with this amazing image of an American icon! Thank you so much my friend!
American Hero and the story are my creations and property.
The mentioned Ben Trek and Mindy Marvel are both creations of the incredibly talented
This tale takes place in
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Comments: 91
theflyingdutchman84 [2012-03-18 08:33:26 +0000 UTC]
I think the thing that I find interesting is the Organisation would sponsor her in the first place. I'm suspecting that they prepared for this eventuality in some way. Couldn't imagine they'd be stupid enough to let her roam free without having some sort of restraint in place to control her more wild activities.
I also agree with Stick-bag on this one. It amazes me that characters like her can have a fanbase for all the wrong reasons. Makes me wonder what she'd think of Fenton Furkas and whatnot...
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summertime-killer [2012-03-08 04:05:12 +0000 UTC]
Marsha Richfield
Ah, just hearing her speak makes me want to run for the Senate. Has a nice ring, Senator Richfield, doesn't it?
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Stick-bag [2012-03-06 18:22:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh f*** no. Her mind-boggling popularity is getting way out of hand. I'm really starting to think that the Angel Falls public are even worse than the Marvel public...
On the other hand, correct me if I'm wrong, but wasn't Madame Darkness an unseen contributing factor to Mindy Marvel's loss? I wonder what she'd make of Smith...
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to Stick-bag [2012-03-07 02:54:47 +0000 UTC]
Lots of people helped to sabotage Mindy: Ultrawoman, Dark-Star, the mob...I do believe Mdme. Darkness had a hand in it as well.
I've been driving you crazy with my stories of late haven't I?
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Stick-bag In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2012-03-07 03:34:41 +0000 UTC]
What's crazy is that it seems like the majority of your stories just make me a combination of angry and depressed (but then I tend to take fictional stuff a litle too seriously/personally), and yet I keep coming back for more. I guess you're just too damn good a writer.
It's mainly the ones involving Jane Smith, though. R.I.P. Angels Falls is mostly just me being shocked at the sheer curbstomping the heroes are being put through rather than just being angry. I don't know, something about Smith just pisses me off way more than other Angel Falls villains.
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to Stick-bag [2012-03-07 03:46:11 +0000 UTC]
Well R.I.P. is my version of the (albeit-cliched) comic-book, everyone-dies-storyline like Kingdom Come, Age of Apocalypse, Old Man Logan, or Days of Future Past. Dystopian future marred by the deaths of it's greatest champions, with the survivors becoming something different than what they were.
As for American Hero, it still amazes me how some people are positively driven up a wall by her and others love her to death. Some people think she is a patriot and a hero and others find her completely reprehensible...with one person telling me that at least Ilsa Hauppman had the disadvantage of growing up in post-war, depression Germany and was taken in like the rest of her nation by Hitler's madness. I have fun writing her primarily for such diverse reactions and the fact that I really enjoy writing for SSW's adversaries.
I am incredibly flattered that you keep coming back and I hope I continue entertaining, even if it does raise the blood-pressure.
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Stick-bag In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2012-03-07 18:33:00 +0000 UTC]
On the subject of Ilsa, I think that a lot of people might be a bit less bothered by her simply because she's a Nazi. We as a society expect Nazis to be evil scumbags and possibly Complete Monsters. Having such a blatantly racist and, regardless of what she says, near-Nazi American patriotic super"hero" on the other hand is a lot more jarring. Especially when you consider the personality of the most famous patriot superhero in comics today (I refer of course to Captain America).
I can understand how people might like her as character, causing drama and all that, but I find it very hard to imagine people actually thinking she's a true hero and in the right. Sure, she's a patriot, but from what we've seen so far her patriotism seems to be primarily driven, and seemingly surpassed, by her own hatred, bigotry and selfishness. In other words, the bad kind of patriotism. I think I can remember her saving a few people in a really early story (right before killing that criminal and setting charges around the city to aid her in fights and chases Β¬_Β¬), but since then all her actions seem to have been either vengeful (fighting Olga), selfish (abandoning her dimension and putting innocent people in harm's way just to get revenge on Olga), or making hate speeches about anyone who isn't a straight, caucasian, christian American. And now in the possible future of R.I.P. Angel Falls she's letting countless innocent people and fellow superheroes get hurt just to get another shot at Olga. She doesn't even care that she's basically acting as Ilsa's puppet, despite hating to be compared to Nazis. I don't see how any of that stuff can fit anyone's definition of a hero. Except her own.
Oh, and another thing is the fact that she hasn't really gotten any kind of come-uppance yet, IMO. Aside from a couple of stints in Tartarus (which seems about as effective a punishment as Arkham Asylum, tbh) and some beatings from Olga (which she can easily and quickly heal from), she still has everything going for her. She's really powerful with the potential to become even stronger and more dangerous, she's got her hair back, she's got the backing of some secret organisation, and the idiot public of Angel Falls can't get enough of her. And as a result, if anyoe tries to take her down, they'll look like the bad guys. As far as I'm concerned she has yet to face any real justice.
...Wow, this reply wound up being a lot longer than I expected...
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ekwood In reply to Stick-bag [2012-06-26 11:48:03 +0000 UTC]
No I think your response is pretty typical. Here we have a character who sells themselves as good yet apparently does cruel and depraved things to get their way. Things that are by general definition considered to be not good. This dichotomy creates a sense of frustration that demands resolution in the reader's mind.
It's like if you were watching someone on a talk show say something that you know in your mind to be false. You are immediately rooting for the host to call them on it. The stronger you feel about the issue, the stronger your response is going to be. Most people feel a certain way about good/evil justice/injustice so it is a pretty safe bet that it's gonna push their emotional buttons.
It's a fairly common ploy to pull the reader in emotionally, particularly in modern fiction. Fiction consisting of grim dystopian worlds with rampant corruption and injustice where nearly everyone with a functional moral compass is made out to be either incompetent or powerless. Worlds where crime most definitely does pay. Worlds where the task at hand is not save society as we know it, but rather unf**k society as we know it. A far more emotionally charged and edgy world than classic super hero fluff, but just as, if not more, devoid of subtlety.
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to Stick-bag [2012-03-08 20:32:39 +0000 UTC]
Nah, I like long replies and appreciate the input.
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Stick-bag In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2012-03-08 21:38:20 +0000 UTC]
Fair enough. I just don't want it to seem like my only comments are to bitch about your stories or characters.
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Feredrone [2012-03-06 12:16:46 +0000 UTC]
From the sound of things she was preaching to the choir in this story. I wonder what will happen when she starts talking to people she actually needs to persuade to vote for her?
Regardless the registration would be a good idea if she wasn't the one in charge of it (good news is that I believe I can see ways around it), and I really have to roll my eyes at Organization 52. Well that's not quite fair, this was all Idol's idea and everyone else tried to warn him how stupid it was. Hopefully he'll get what he deserves as well.
It will be interesting to see how this works out. At least one of my characters is planning to get into politics at some point.
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dagame2578 [2012-03-06 11:47:22 +0000 UTC]
Countessa--I cannot believe this insane CHILD would promote hate & then she has the gall to call herself running for governor? ABSURD!!!"
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Zespara [2012-03-06 08:28:13 +0000 UTC]
You've got the wheels turning inside my head once again, my friend. This is very intriguing to say the least.
Very nice piece by HR, also. I almost didn't see the "American Hero" logo in the background.
Z
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Swamphulk [2012-03-06 04:52:45 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to see an election between this character, Cougress, and Progressive Patriot.
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hotrod5 [2012-03-06 03:43:11 +0000 UTC]
I know Jane Smith can bring a good change as govenor. Of course America won't be completely saved until it become the Ultra States of America.
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AKATP [2012-03-06 03:07:31 +0000 UTC]
She's running for governor? Glad I don't live in that state.
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Knight3000 [2012-03-06 03:03:38 +0000 UTC]
Who`d of thought that Jane would have political ambitions and run for governor!
Judging by the turn out just to this rally she`s going to be tough to beat!
HOWever before we get all cozy of that possiblity, There IS her past and her dirty little secrets. Like destroying the cruise ship when she arrived to our dimension, Killin snake in cold blood abandoning her home dimension and NOW killing her O52 liason!
Right now though she could very well WIN despite all that she`s done!
Be interesting to see what type of laws she`ll enforce!
I like this arc it`s a very good in-between arc My Dear!
Awesome render by Hotrod! Dude you`re TOPS
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Shuma-Gorath [2012-03-06 01:57:47 +0000 UTC]
This Cannot be allowed for it will herald the end of the world as we know it.
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to Shuma-Gorath [2012-03-06 02:15:04 +0000 UTC]
Yikes, that's a bit heavy.
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Shuma-Gorath In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2012-03-07 01:44:12 +0000 UTC]
I know... I actually meant.. the End to all really Popular Television Shows
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MarshalAdmiralQ [2012-03-06 01:09:57 +0000 UTC]
whoa, super hero registration, that isn't American what is she thinking.
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to MarshalAdmiralQ [2012-03-06 02:02:34 +0000 UTC]
How so? One could argue that, given whenever a person applies for anything, such as a drivers license, social security, a checking account, most of that IS a form of registration.
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MarshalAdmiralQ In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2012-03-06 15:12:14 +0000 UTC]
however she appears to be extremeist right and very anti communist and regisrating is very communistic
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to MarshalAdmiralQ [2012-03-07 02:44:55 +0000 UTC]
What she mostly is is hypocritical, wanting to enact regulation on the superhero community for the collateral damages they cause...
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MarshalAdmiralQ In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2012-03-07 15:27:18 +0000 UTC]
that i can agree with.
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BelRhaza4017 [2012-03-06 00:02:08 +0000 UTC]
Omni-Drive: Nano, put American Hero on full watch alert. I am not about to watch that psycho become governor of an American state. Also, contact this Organization (52 it is, I believe?), and tell them that if they want help, I can smear her name with the best of them. Pull up all the files on her again, and let's get all our ducks in order. I especially want to know who many people were injured or killed because of her rampages.
Excellent work, my lovely tovarisch
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Woodclaw [2012-03-05 23:25:34 +0000 UTC]
Well, I can't say I saw this one coming, but somehow it was expected. After all, Mindy set a precedent for having political-minded superheroes, it was only a matter of time before someone tried it again.
The story is great and now we have just to wait and see what comes of it.
A little idea for thee future: I can't help but wonder if Jane can legally run for governor. As far as we know she was born on a parallel Earth and she never applied for citizenship in this version of the U.S.A. (opposite to Olga, who got the citizenship by marriage ).
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to Woodclaw [2012-03-06 02:07:14 +0000 UTC]
Fontaine
"That accusation is libelous slander concocted by the Soviet Superwoman. She tried that attack on known terrorist Ilsa Hauppman as well. Exactly how many people managed to escape from her so-called 'annihilated' dimension? Ten? Fifty? Hogwash if you ask me. We will release the long copy of Jane Smith's birth certificate soon just to combat this type of nonsense."
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Woodclaw In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2012-03-06 11:33:11 +0000 UTC]
Dear mr. Fontaine,
I would be glad to examine such document as soon as you can produce it, but I must ask you to include a complete psychological profile of ms. Smith compiled by a neutral third party.
Since ms. Smith has publicly stated that the nature of her feud with the Soviet Superwoman is based on actions performed in this alleged alternate dimension, this creates a complex legal problem. Either ms. Smith isn't from this world or is delusional. Both these conditions makes her unfit to occupy any goverment related position.
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MaragrizX [2012-03-05 23:17:39 +0000 UTC]
Lady Liberty
why stop there? Rick Santourm is gonna need a running mate. You two would be perfect togehter
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to MaragrizX [2012-03-06 01:59:43 +0000 UTC]
Somewhere Fontaine is now making a phone call...
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MaragrizX In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2012-03-06 02:46:16 +0000 UTC]
Lady Liberty
Oh, did the light bulb go off?
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MaragrizX In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2012-03-06 23:43:33 +0000 UTC]
:Flagus:Lady Liberty I'm starting to regret giving him the idea
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JamesE82 In reply to MaragrizX [2012-03-05 23:58:38 +0000 UTC]
Connie: βAnd you, Double-L, would be a perfect running mate for Ron Paul. Slap a tinfoil hat on your head and join him in his fight against the Zionist Illuminati who secretly brought down the Twin Towers, or whatever hooey heβs babblinβ aboutβ¦β
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MaragrizX In reply to JamesE82 [2012-03-06 02:40:03 +0000 UTC]
Lady Liberty
Atleast Paul doesn't want to nationalize my vigina, I'm not keen on the idea of me and or my partner filling out a 16 page form to have sex.
And why not me as vice president? I'm Lady Liberty! Besides, even with a tin foil hat I still look hot.
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JamesE82 In reply to MaragrizX [2012-03-06 02:47:20 +0000 UTC]
Connie: βIf you ainβt smart enough to see that made-up contraception non-story for what it is, ya may as well stop tryinβ to be a superhero and just sit at home watchinβ MSNBC all damn day. Oh, I see the problem: Youβre goinβ through rubbers so quick that you need the American taxpayers to subsidize you, huh?β
(A little rough, but Connie still has Sandra Flukeβs testimony on her mind.)
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MaragrizX In reply to JamesE82 [2012-03-06 03:32:40 +0000 UTC]
Lady Liberty
My job as Vice President of Mathro-Industries Cybernetics division pays me enough to buy my own rubbers, although I'm allergic to latex, so I use the pill.
You know, you should be Jane's Campaign manager.
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JamesE82 In reply to MaragrizX [2012-03-07 04:23:06 +0000 UTC]
Smithβs campaign manager? I think she might demand I tone my rhetoric downβ¦
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JamesE82 In reply to Shuma-Gorath [2012-03-06 02:10:48 +0000 UTC]
Connie: βMake me.β
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Shuma-Gorath In reply to JamesE82 [2012-03-07 01:43:13 +0000 UTC]
Girls...... Get the Feathers!
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JamesE82 In reply to Shuma-Gorath [2012-03-07 04:20:44 +0000 UTC]
Connie: βIβll be good!β
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U1trawoman [2012-03-05 23:16:26 +0000 UTC]
Governor eh? Interesting. This has...possibilities
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Zespara In reply to U1trawoman [2012-03-06 08:24:24 +0000 UTC]
Dr. Hauptmann
We are on the same wavelength, protector.
Z
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