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Published: 2015-02-27 00:11:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 12576; Favourites: 77; Downloads: 204
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Description Wow creating dialogue for a character who has 20+ Int is more difficult than I imagined lol.Β 
You can clearly see who is winning this argument!
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Sailor-Touko667 [2018-10-29 01:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Too bad he's evil.... such a handsome face and a nice pose.

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SozokuReed In reply to Sailor-Touko667 [2018-10-29 16:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Why are the evil ones such cuties? XD actually I just like to draw everyone in my story attractive haha

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Sailor-Touko667 In reply to SozokuReed [2018-10-29 16:49:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm a sucker for attractive people, guy or girl. And how do you know how to make attractive GUYS?

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SozokuReed In reply to Sailor-Touko667 [2018-10-29 16:53:54 +0000 UTC]

Well it helps that I model most of them after me and I'm quite attractive!

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Sailor-Touko667 In reply to SozokuReed [2018-10-29 17:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Got photos? There are photos of me in my gallery.

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SozokuReed In reply to Sailor-Touko667 [2018-10-29 17:37:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, plenty of photos of me in my cosplay section in the gallery! Looks like you know a little about cosplay

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Sailor-Touko667 In reply to SozokuReed [2018-10-29 17:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Not much.... I don't know a thing about making a costume.

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OutlanderAshton [2017-06-21 18:44:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice! She is sassy

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LudedWolf [2017-03-07 23:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Nice!!!!!!

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348joey [2015-11-21 09:43:54 +0000 UTC]

You can't be both worried sick about Raya and certain that she's coming for him.

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SozokuReed In reply to 348joey [2015-11-21 16:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Awwww this is a fantasy story, you know Raya wouldnt just abandon her sister, besides that what all captives say to comfort the situation even if is clichΓ©

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thormemeson [2015-03-06 01:17:55 +0000 UTC]

nice

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SozokuReed In reply to thormemeson [2015-03-06 19:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Devious-Drake [2015-02-28 17:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh Dang, Laurel certainly has quite a sharp bite to her words doesn't she?Β  I knew she was a B.A. but I thought that side of her would come out in dire need.Β  Well you did say there'd be little tweeks and edits from the original story, and I will admit I'm finding her snappy strong attitude amuzing lol.

Though if she keeps mouthing off, I have a feeling this Wizard will soon grow frustrated and.............well I'm sure I don't have to continue lol.Β  Oh boy, you're getting me anxious for the next pages here lol.

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SozokuReed In reply to Devious-Drake [2015-02-28 19:39:02 +0000 UTC]

I wanted to have her be a little more spunky and full of life, but she will settle down (for the most part) still the cute and submissive girl we have grown to love =3

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Devious-Drake In reply to SozokuReed [2015-02-28 19:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Lol, oh you've certainly succeeded in that.Β  Quite curious how that side of her will be shown.Β  Keep up the good work

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SozokuReed In reply to Devious-Drake [2015-02-28 19:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhhh Ive got that covered lol, *shifty eyes*

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MetalBeowulf89 [2015-02-28 07:38:08 +0000 UTC]

I imagine he either considers her stronger than she appears, or is just paranoid, to put such heavy chains on her...

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SozokuReed In reply to MetalBeowulf89 [2015-02-28 19:37:59 +0000 UTC]

Or.... maybe he is just into that stuff!Β  I mean they are obviously girl sized since they are so tight on tiny Laurel XD

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darth603 [2015-02-27 15:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Let's make sure I know what the issue is. Arcane wizards use life energy (shorten their own life) to use magic?

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SozokuReed In reply to darth603 [2015-02-27 18:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Thats the idea, he thinks he can tap into magic without the cost of life force

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Meeowy [2015-02-27 06:47:58 +0000 UTC]

level up on dialogue skill

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SozokuReed In reply to Meeowy [2015-02-27 18:33:12 +0000 UTC]

Du na na naaaaaaa, thats the Zelda tune

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OakEgg [2015-02-27 06:28:23 +0000 UTC]

That's a really good series

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SozokuReed In reply to OakEgg [2015-02-27 18:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you my friend

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OakEgg In reply to SozokuReed [2015-02-28 07:10:32 +0000 UTC]

Why not thank me?
You're very welcome

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Wife-Napper [2015-02-27 05:28:24 +0000 UTC]

I like the explanation of the different kinds of magic. And now I'm assuming Raya must be the lady who was sprinting through the woods - straightforward enough, until you toss in Mr. Reed and Miss. Sam, I'll bet.

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SozokuReed In reply to Wife-Napper [2015-02-27 18:33:48 +0000 UTC]

That would be her, I'll have proper introductions for everyone shortly!

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KatMiLo [2015-02-27 04:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Nooo he is explaining his evil plans- he did not watch his Bond movies. tsk tsk
Next time he will just lie and say he just wants to bake her a cake or something.

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SozokuReed In reply to KatMiLo [2015-02-27 18:35:30 +0000 UTC]

I think badguys just have to have that level of arrogance, I know its a little overdone, but at the same time it sounds better than 'Shut up and deal with it' XD

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KatMiLo In reply to SozokuReed [2015-02-27 19:01:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh for sure, and I guess it creates a little suspense knowing their intentions too. I just yell that whole James bond thing at every movie I see when the bad guys get chatty xD

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SozokuReed In reply to KatMiLo [2015-02-28 19:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Well living by yourself just studying magic can be totally boring! Since he has a guest over its only polite to chat not like Laurel has much of a choice in the matter!

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KatMiLo In reply to SozokuReed [2015-03-01 00:58:50 +0000 UTC]

Just likes to show off how smart he is when he speaks xD Poor laurel :<

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SozokuReed In reply to KatMiLo [2015-03-01 19:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Thats a good way to get the little one mad XD or frustrated, that might be a better word!

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DeeTwenty [2015-02-27 01:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Nice closeups of Laurel there Reed and as for 20+ int. did you know by standard D&D terms a score of 10 represents your everyman?! O_o

Anyway. from so experience it's hard to write a character who is a super genius when you yourself (as a general sweeping net aimed at all who write RP's plays movies....) are not a super intelligent criminal mastermind bent on world domination. but its atleast good to give it a excellent try

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SozokuReed In reply to DeeTwenty [2015-02-27 02:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Well yea, 10s are average for commoners and heroes that min-maxed their stats, but you dont get to be high level without having some sort of absurd stat because of magic items!
I do feel your pain though, not only how he would talk but how he would fight being that smart.

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13th-madman In reply to SozokuReed [2015-02-27 07:15:18 +0000 UTC]

I'd always thought of that as a matter of pragmatism. Setting traps everywhere or some such, only attacking directly when victory appears assured, and that kind of stuff. Smart villains are a lot of fun in that sense, since the plan invariably goes wrong just in time for them to panic...

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SozokuReed In reply to 13th-madman [2015-02-28 19:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Of course its been overdone to death, but yeah its the sign of someone who knows what they are doing, and I think readers like that.Β  It just wouldnt be the same if the villain was stupid

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finex666 [2015-02-27 00:22:44 +0000 UTC]

i think he knows she is lying her teeth out in her last plead

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SozokuReed In reply to finex666 [2015-02-27 02:44:51 +0000 UTC]

Well actually she is telling the truth!Β  All will be revealed in the NEXT PAGE!

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finex666 In reply to SozokuReed [2015-02-27 03:12:34 +0000 UTC]

haha ^__ i am sure he is expecting it so i am sure he has plans

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