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Published: 2008-03-20 05:23:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description You look at her
The way you used to look at me
You laugh and joke
And I think of how we used to be
And now I wonder if I was wrong
In ending things between you and I
And suddenly I see what I had all along
Now I’m struggling not to cry

I wish I could just move on
And forget we ever were
But everything comes rushing back
And I imagine me as her

I know I could never explain
How terrible I feel
How I’m sorry for causing you all this pain
And not giving things time to heal

I see now more clearly
My thoughts are steady and sure
I know I miss you dearly
And would do anything to be your girl

So here I’ll wait and here I’ll stay
Waiting to hear what you’ll say
Clinging to each word that escapes
Each thought you express
Watching each move you make
Counting each breath
Until you decide
Do you love me too?
Or is it over?
Are we through?


I have no idea what I should do.
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Comments: 4

anedz [2008-03-21 01:38:40 +0000 UTC]

wonderful

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LadyLazrus [2008-03-20 21:44:15 +0000 UTC]

maybe you could take out some punctuation and morph this into a prose-spoken-word poem.
see lostNsilence 's work. she is a deviant master of prose poems

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swallowmydoubt [2008-03-20 06:56:06 +0000 UTC]

o so good, like always...

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Liberty-Virtue-Life [2008-03-20 05:32:39 +0000 UTC]

very good...

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