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SpellboundCanvas — Fall Time Friends
#hat #applejack #autumn #bench #fluttershy #leaves #scarves #chibicutekawaii #mlpfimmylittleponyfriendship
Published: 2017-12-17 21:16:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1384; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 12
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After a month and a half of inactivity, I present to you, a simple picture of two friends enjoying an autumn sunset.Related content
Comments: 7
Vision: 3.5/5 (7/10)
two characters with a nice chemistry together on a bench. standard stuff, not bad.
Originality: 3.5/5 (7/10)
similar to how i feel about the vision, but the design of the characters in comparison with the color choices do give this image its own feel.
Technique: 3/5 (6/10)
the character design, while perfectly serviceable, are a little iffy on my part. something about this character design looks a little bit too juvenile, too young. apart from that, there isn't much else to complain about in regards to the process.
Impact: 2.5/5 (5/10)
To me, this feels just sort of generic. while that isn't in it of itself a bad thing, it's something i can't offer excessive amounts of praise. it is, nevertheless, a perfectly substantial piece of artwork, and I think with some fleshing out, you could make something exceptional.
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This piece is amazing. I love the expression in the eyes. The freckles on AJ are also spot on, so props on that. The eyes are deep and that adds to the depth of the characters. Fluttershy's tail could be a little bit longer, like have it flow over the bench a little bit. The tree to the right side could be a little bit brighter as it comes off as muddy. The bench is well done. It looks like it is popping off the page, which I have trouble doing, so I applaud you for that. Keep up the good work. You definitely have skills worth sharing with those around you.
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This is very adorable. It's nice and peaceful.
About the vision, Fluttershy's hair isn't curly enough and it took me a few seconds to see her wing. The ponies and the bench's shadows should be slightly darker and warmer colored because of the trees and overall warm colored environment. And maybe some shadows created from the leaves on the ground would be more impactful. But don't but shading all around each leaf cuz then it'll look like they're floating. Also if the ponies are in the same situation, they should have the same eyeshine. And Applejack's freckles seem a little big.
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