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We met on the busWe didn’t know a hello would lead to the start of the story of us
It was the first day, the morning quite gray.
I sat beside him, since no other seats were open
All we spoke were a hello and a goodbye, only small tokens.
A day went by, then the next and another.
Then again, we sat by each other.
A hello moved to what is your name
From there on out it was all the same.
We met on a bus, again the next year.
The story of us, beginning to appear.
Hellos could be passed in the halls
Though frankly, we shared no classes at all.
Again on the bus, we continued to chat.
Neither knowing what could come of that.
This year was better, a few more facts.
Not much for a need to overreact.
We met on a bus, last year of middle school.
The story of us, starting to take control.
Together most days, talking all the time.
I was beginning to wonder if he might ever be mine.
A class finally, never seated together.
My heart being seized by an imaginary tether.
I left the year impatient for the next
Our glorious relationship becoming sort of complex
We met on a bus, the eve of that day.
The story of us, never going astray.
I sat beside him, assigned seating that is.
I swear I saw happiness in those brown eyes of his.
We talked and became closer than friends.
That's when the longing suddenly ends.
For that year, he asked me to dance.
This was the day our relationship advanced.
We met on a bus, the next years a blur.
The story of us, the one I prefer.
This year I realized was worse than the rest.
I thought it was going to be one of the best.
For the white dress hangs in my closet to this day.
Waiting for the bus to return.
The one that took my love away.
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Comments: 3
Crazy-Hyper-Artist [2013-09-09 11:53:45 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I LUV IT *tackles* You are really good at writing poetry! <3 Moar! Moar! ;D
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talkativegrape [2013-09-02 15:57:54 +0000 UTC]
Love it! Fabulous poetry!
Hats off to you for not doing free-verse and legitimately rhyming, which is fairly tricky.
Loved the emotion in this <3 keep up the good work!
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SpiritWolfShadow In reply to talkativegrape [2013-09-02 16:34:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks I'm glad you liked it!
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