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Description
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Name: Kiyu Aedros (In Eden)
Age: 18
Height: 4'2
Weight: 143 lbs.
Strengths: Agile, battle experience, and telepathy.
Weaknesses: Small stature, not very strong, no weapons.
Likes children, animals. Dislikes fighting, killing and trouble in general.
History:
Kiyu is a member of the kamen species who was abducted as a child by Terrans in charge of the Uperlian System Project.
She was raised as UP3.0, and trained as a super-weapon for most of her childhood, until her power kicked in at the age of 17.
Her superior mental strength overpowered the control-safe chip in her brain, and she fled her captors while in possession of billions of dollars in Terran weapons technology, as well as proof of such a well kept secret from the native races of the planet. Terrans had been using kamen for experimentation of the program for years in secret.
Kiyu had been running for her life for a year now, constantly pursued by the Humans.
The Uperlian System (inactive)
Outside of Eden, Kiyu 's experimental body is made of metal, and equipped with a very large assortment of weapons. She was nearly invincible.
In Eden, she is free of the System, but also, far weakened by the lack of it. However, Kiyu is still headstrong and likely still thinks she can take anyone in a fight.
Abilities:
Kamen race specs.
- Agile
- Good balance
- Claws (usually used for climbing, but are ok for self
defense)
- Good vision in the dark
Super Spy training.
- Multiple martial arts (adapted for kamen use)
- Multiple languages
Telepathy.
In kamen, higher brain power is an only slightly uncommon occurrence. One in every million is born with a power that manifests as telekinesis, or telepathy.
- Kiyu can read most minds like a picture book. Normal people tend to think in multiple fuzzy images. Easily read, but lacking detail.
When a person focuses on a task, their mind tends to show one crisp, clear image.
Some entities are capable of multiple crisp thoughts. Creatures that have lived hundreds and thousands of years tend to possess this ability. Minds like this hurt to read... They have too much information that is straightforward.
-She is also capable of forcing thoughts into people's minds. It requires a physical touch though, and usually a lot of concentration.
Needless to say, Kiyu has developed a few bad habits. She hardly ever asks anyone their name before she remembers her manners.
In Eden, Kiyu is a wife and a mother. She will do anything she can to keep her world, and is VERY defensive of it.
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Comments: 49
Spirogs In reply to Xynztr [2012-06-03 18:02:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad! That's my intention =]
words should be extra anyway... If I cant demonstrate a character just with pictures... I'm not trying hard enough =/
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Tofubeast [2012-06-02 18:08:42 +0000 UTC]
Lots of movement examples in this version, I like it.
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Art-Zealot [2012-06-02 17:00:55 +0000 UTC]
Adorbs, as ever! Good to see some action shots of her!
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Spirogs In reply to Art-Zealot [2012-06-02 17:01:50 +0000 UTC]
Hah, glad you got to see the "better" version =]
Ended up taking Tofu's advice after all kinda
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Fox-Frost [2012-05-29 22:35:12 +0000 UTC]
Hm... I take it humans aren't exactly the good guys in this world? XD
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Spirogs In reply to Fox-Frost [2012-05-29 23:03:29 +0000 UTC]
Not really. But they aren't the "bad guys" either.
Human colonizers in my story are basically the neutral of the neutral. They just don't care.
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Xynztr In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-30 08:12:38 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I just like saying that xDD
Interesting Character!
You're gonna be in for sure, no doubt. Double postive.
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Spirogs In reply to Xynztr [2012-05-30 16:51:05 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you I hope so...
I also hope more people submit stuff soon... last I checked we had 19 people trying out for 16 spots. The odds are pretty good, but I hate good odds in competitions...
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Xynztr In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-30 17:03:39 +0000 UTC]
Why hate the good odds?
I was supposed to submit my entry, but I'm too lazy to finish my audition. Haha, Procrastination. xD
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Spirogs In reply to Xynztr [2012-05-30 17:32:50 +0000 UTC]
Good odds make competition too easy. I like to be able to say I achieved soemthing even when it was harder than usual
Do it! do it!
I have 4 pages left to finish...
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Xynztr In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-31 01:18:48 +0000 UTC]
Well, you are right. What's the point of a competition when there's no hardships and challenges?
Mehh, alright xD
We still have a lot of time.. Or do we?
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Spirogs In reply to Xynztr [2012-05-31 02:00:35 +0000 UTC]
Just got my pages done =]
We have a week and a half. Still plenty of time.
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Xynztr In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-31 10:05:28 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I've seen Awesome back story. Oh, and did you submit the finished entries first before you finished all the pages?
Whoa, whoa, whoa. Only a week and a half?? I've been working for a month with the reference sheet.. Meh.. .. I'm screwed.
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ExMedal [2012-05-29 08:27:52 +0000 UTC]
wow she looks like an interesting person to see in acshon
[DAO- hay...hold the short stick I reconise you! your the same speashes as that guy I meet outside The City! do you know him? green armor, blond hair kind of an atitude?]
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Spirogs In reply to ExMedal [2012-05-29 17:28:28 +0000 UTC]
Hahaa~ Kiyu DOES know Hido. They have met a few times, and neither of them enjoyed those meetings.
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ExMedal In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-30 09:53:34 +0000 UTC]
[DAO- tehe that dosint suprise me...hay cute kids by the way :3]
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Spirogs In reply to ExMedal [2012-05-30 16:49:47 +0000 UTC]
Kiyu- Thank you. I've... been trying to remember their names... The girl I know starts with an A, and the boy with a T....
Kamen names only have two syllables in them... the reason she cant remember is because I havent really named them yet...
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ExMedal In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-31 07:56:05 +0000 UTC]
[DAO- OK you take care of your self out there ]
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0tacoon [2012-05-29 02:47:23 +0000 UTC]
Entering another OCT I see. This looks like it's going to be fun. I'll be sure to follow you along in this adventure. ^7^
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Spirogs In reply to 0tacoon [2012-05-29 02:53:56 +0000 UTC]
That I am
I'm glad you're coming over =] I enjoyed my round against you, but would very much enjoy a rematch
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0tacoon In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-29 02:59:20 +0000 UTC]
Eh? Oh nononono, I didn't mean actually come into Eden. I mean't watch you do it. I don't think I could balance two OCTs at once. ;3; Sorry to disappoint. I to would enjoy a rematch, but alas I'm still stuck in The City. I almost lost if it weren't for a double forfeit, so I'm still technically in.
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Spirogs In reply to 0tacoon [2012-05-29 03:01:34 +0000 UTC]
Aww haha well then in that case, the watching shall be mutual.
I don't read journals much, as you can tell
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0tacoon In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-29 13:54:30 +0000 UTC]
It's understandable. ^_^ It's hard to keep up with it when you have other stuff to do as well. lol
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Tofubeast [2012-05-29 02:19:11 +0000 UTC]
LOTS OF WORDS.
Interesting story idea you have with her, though. Hopefully I'll see you in eden-OCT.
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Spirogs In reply to Tofubeast [2012-05-29 02:54:58 +0000 UTC]
Hehe yeah. I tried to keep it to a minimum, but she's just one of THOSE characters...
What she used to be is a big part of her personality.
I look forward to it Tofu =]
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onewhoisalwaysbored [2012-05-27 03:25:40 +0000 UTC]
Why do I have a feeling that I'll die when I see your characters?
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Spirogs In reply to onewhoisalwaysbored [2012-05-28 16:45:42 +0000 UTC]
I don't know
This one is really friendly
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onewhoisalwaysbored In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-29 05:09:48 +0000 UTC]
Seems like it. XD But she's still a fighter. LOL page 8
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Spirogs In reply to onewhoisalwaysbored [2012-05-29 06:46:07 +0000 UTC]
haha what do you mean by that?
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onewhoisalwaysbored In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-29 07:57:41 +0000 UTC]
XD I can't stop laughing at it. Her face is blushing mad!
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alucinarae [2012-05-26 23:30:46 +0000 UTC]
It is Kiyu!
I am looking forward to seeing how this comes to be in Eden~
You've always kept most of the Uperlian system somewhat secretive, too. Are you going to reveal a bit about it?
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Spirogs In reply to alucinarae [2012-05-26 23:55:22 +0000 UTC]
A little bit =]
I've only kept it quite because I didn't have a place to demonstrate
And again... she wont be using it. But flashbacks are always cool...
Also, dA keeps saying my file (for the comic) is corrupted. And I KNOW it's not. DA uploads anything else I send it, but even on other computers, and other browsers, it's denying my posting of it =/
This ever happen to you?
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alucinarae In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-27 00:18:21 +0000 UTC]
hmmm.... no, it hasn't.
What form of file is it?
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aly-zimm [2012-05-26 16:41:06 +0000 UTC]
Aw, man, Kiyu! This gives us a lot of insight into her own thoughts and feelings.
She's married, eh? Think I can guess who her husband is?
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Spirogs In reply to aly-zimm [2012-05-26 16:51:32 +0000 UTC]
hehe you might
I intended to post the first 9 pages too... but my computer is being ridiculous.
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aly-zimm In reply to Spirogs [2012-05-27 14:36:03 +0000 UTC]
YAHOO, I am super excited to see it!
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