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Published: 2016-07-30 01:21:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 27306; Favourites: 165; Downloads: 29
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Sorry it took so long to submit this page, I had many problems but is finally here. I'll be working on next pagePrev. page
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i love how you just copy pasted the papayrus cooking thing
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I might you could say I copy-PASTA.
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GAH!Β THAT WAS THE WORST PUN I EVER HEARDΒ Β PLS STOP!
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Oh dear. I hate to be a bother saying this so many times but this also appears to be missing the link to the next page.
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don't worry, I like the attention you give to my comics
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Bubbles two and four have grammar issues. I think what you're trying to do for the second bubble is 'could you keep going until I've finished cooking?' and the fourth one 'if you have any problems just call me for help." I'm looking forward to seeing more pages
(Oh and bubble 3 say might be changed to said but that's not a big deal)
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Thank you, I'm gonna re-submit the page.
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