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Published: 2005-04-14 05:11:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 186; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 15
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Chained down to this mælstromThat we call this sea
My feet stand uncertain
Somewhere in the sand beneath me
As the clouds swirl overhead
Emulating the thoughts of the dead
Blasts of wind whip up my hair
Enraging the tides of despair
A glance into the mind and a glimpse of a kiss
I just wanna break free
From this chilling darkness
That is enthralling me
Chained down to this mælstrom
That we call hell
Flames lick at my only weapon;
My power to yell
The fiery inferno approaches rapidly
As this hatred burns inside of me
Beat me with heat and I'll scream
For liberation from this hellish dream
Won't let this fire steal my time
I just wanna break free
From this incinerated state of mind
That is ensnaring me
Chained down to this mælstrom
That we call peace
I know it's false freedom;
A sickening madness that will never cease
But with all this hate and alienation
A manic need for your intoxication
A putrid hate for all but your own seed
How can we really say that we are free?
We've got nothing but our boredom to lose
So please tell me - why don't we choose?
I just wanna break free
From this out of control "reality"
That is enslaving me
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Comments: 7
joiyua [2005-05-31 11:14:38 +0000 UTC]
It's very good. I tried to decide which "part" I like the most but I can't..
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Splic In reply to joiyua [2005-06-01 03:28:35 +0000 UTC]
Haha thank you .
Personally.... I think I like the dark beaches the best.
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enigma-tyck [2005-04-15 04:48:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow.. I do believe this is your best.. It's amazingly beautiful and imaginative. I can see it all in my mind as I read it.
I love it and I must fav it.
Again.. Great job..
Oh.. Do you have a guitar part to it?
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Splic In reply to enigma-tyck [2005-04-15 06:07:26 +0000 UTC]
Ahh thank you very much
And no, actually I plan on writing the full rhythm and a guitar line to it whenever I get the time, hopefully soon.
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enigma-tyck In reply to Splic [2005-04-15 16:32:36 +0000 UTC]
You should let me hear it when you're done
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morbid-demon [2005-04-15 04:22:25 +0000 UTC]
i love this.
i don't really know what else to say.
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