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Published: 2017-06-15 23:10:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 1697; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 12
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Description Surprised it's not done yet xD This was something I was thinking about within days of the episode and I was apparently not the only one ^^

So what if Past Sins would be retold but with Daybreaker instead of Nightmare Moon? I thought it'd be an interesting idea.
I tried not to copy Nyx exactly but there are some things that might be taken from her design, especially the natural design. With the disguised form I thought it'd be cute with a little hairpin with a sunflower xD

The name Helia comes from Helios, the god of Light or Sun and seeing Nyx is an entity of darkness and night, I thought it'd be just fitting ^^

Tell me what you think oh and get your ass to writing xD

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Eli-J-Brony [2019-05-12 13:21:25 +0000 UTC]

She looks very cute and sweet.

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Holy-Angel-Mithos [2017-08-19 11:11:38 +0000 UTC]

I hit a wall with the fanfic, I am at the part where her disguise is being made and I need the exact term for her dress/shirt thing. If I don't phrase it right I will make Coco Pommel look foalish.(Also I need the exact coloration scheme I think its Salmon with a rose pink trim at the collar but I need to know for sure.)

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SpokenMind93 In reply to Holy-Angel-Mithos [2017-08-19 13:32:27 +0000 UTC]

I think that kind of shirt is a polo? I don't exactly know the term either as I'm not English originally. The trim is salmon pink and the rest is a sunset orange.

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Holy-Angel-Mithos In reply to SpokenMind93 [2017-08-22 11:09:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the tips, it was SUPER helpful and I should have the next chapter out soon(Life has been getting in the way.)

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Holy-Angel-Mithos [2017-07-25 05:09:03 +0000 UTC]

I finished the prologue chapter and am about done with chapter 1. ;3

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DarthWill3 [2017-07-16 04:00:34 +0000 UTC]

This is too cute!

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Holy-Angel-Mithos [2017-07-03 05:54:40 +0000 UTC]

I am working with SaturnStar on a fanfiction called Primordial Crimes, keep an eye out for it. ;3

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fmallque32561 [2017-06-27 19:46:59 +0000 UTC]

do a fanfiction for her

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SpokenMind93 In reply to fmallque32561 [2017-06-27 20:40:46 +0000 UTC]

I would if I had the slightest talent for writing as Penstroke does ^^"

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fmallque32561 In reply to SpokenMind93 [2017-06-28 20:36:46 +0000 UTC]

maybe ask him to do it

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SpokenMind93 In reply to fmallque32561 [2017-06-28 20:58:21 +0000 UTC]

I don't have the right to ask him that

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Zahnny In reply to SpokenMind93 [2017-06-29 22:06:08 +0000 UTC]

Not to be a jerk, but neither of you seem to like requesting or asking others. (you and Penstroke I mean)
On what grounds do you not deserve to not ask him? You've been making these comics for years. You're kinda the longest running content creator that hasn't stopped making Nyx content that I'm aware of.

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SpokenMind93 In reply to Zahnny [2017-06-29 22:22:52 +0000 UTC]

I guess it's because we kind of still have a humble side? ^^"
I don't know, I feel like I'm just sucking off of his popularity and the story's fame. Anyway, this picture was just made out of fun I'm not expecting Penstroke to do anything with Daybreaker, I think he has done a lot already.

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Zahnny In reply to SpokenMind93 [2017-06-29 22:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Unfortunately I just feel like everyone has kinda abandoned Nyx altogether besides a few individiuals such as yourself. If we never made anything because we felt it might mooch off of something else I don't think we'd ever get anything done.

Apologies for bringing up Undertale but if you're involved aware of that fandom, the "Disbelief Papyrus" AU (alternative universe) had its 'ownership' given away to another after an amazing animation for it and also because of the original owner losing interest in their fandom.

What I'm trying to get at is it's much better to spread a story or to extend upon it than to let it go because no one wants to feel bad using it. I always hate myself for using "memes" in serious discussion even if I'm using the original meaning but it's spreading a meme I suppose. If it stops being spread, it well dies. I'd just rather not see that happen. Every other major 2011 fanfic is seemingly more relevent than Past Sins has been these past few years. Most noticably Fallout Equestria has several dedicated games and is still pumping out content in large scale such as animations or art.

It seems Past Sins only ever attracts critism now anyway. Unfortunately it has become a 'joke' and that's what makes me the most upset.

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SpokenMind93 In reply to Zahnny [2017-06-29 22:57:44 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean... I've seen Nyx being abused on Derpibooru more than one time...
It's pretty upsetting indeed.

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Zahnny [2017-06-23 21:11:48 +0000 UTC]

If my mythology is correct

Nyx is the night and Selene is the moon

Hemera is the day and Helios is the sun

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SpokenMind93 In reply to Zahnny [2017-06-23 21:17:30 +0000 UTC]

Could very well be :3 But I liked the sound of Helia. Sounds just as cute as Nyx.

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MagicaITrevor [2017-06-22 18:31:07 +0000 UTC]

This is just me, but why would he write that story? I don't see how or why anything would really change all that much. The story has already been told in Past Sins, so why write a story that's rather similar?Β 

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SpokenMind93 In reply to MagicaITrevor [2017-06-22 18:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Eh I don't know ^^ It was just a joke when I said he had to write it.
Was just a fun idea I had and perhaps it would be an alternate universe where Luna was the big sister and Celestia the envious one.

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MagicaITrevor In reply to SpokenMind93 [2017-06-23 00:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, and I didn't mean to sound so... Was just saying, not many story elements would really change, since everyone would still have similar mindsets, personalities, etc. A fun idea, sure, but not very practical unless there were other things to change as well.

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SpokenMind93 In reply to MagicaITrevor [2017-06-23 06:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps instead of being shy like Nyx, Helia would have more of an attitude like Diamond Tiara? I think that would change some things.

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tigreanpony [2017-06-16 12:05:19 +0000 UTC]

Really cute, Not sure if he will write it though.

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RoyalFeline [2017-06-16 11:35:26 +0000 UTC]

She's really cute~ x3 Would you mind if I drew her when I get a chance~? >3<

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SpokenMind93 In reply to RoyalFeline [2017-06-16 15:59:26 +0000 UTC]

I'd love it >w<

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RoyalFeline In reply to SpokenMind93 [2017-06-28 05:58:09 +0000 UTC]



Here you go Sorry it is on my other account xD

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SpokenMind93 In reply to RoyalFeline [2017-06-28 09:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Very nice commented on it

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RoyalFeline In reply to SpokenMind93 [2017-06-28 23:06:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3

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ChickLoki [2017-06-16 05:10:25 +0000 UTC]

I saw it and whit out reading I saw lynx but helias is beautifullΒ 

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Uber-Dan [2017-06-16 03:26:31 +0000 UTC]

That is a very interested concept.

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Hotspot-the-626th [2017-06-16 01:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice
Nothing against Nyx, she'll always be #1 Twilight daughter, but I bet Twilight would gush over having essentially a child Celestia to raise

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PrincessAshley91 [2017-06-16 01:40:05 +0000 UTC]

thats adorable, love the concept

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ndedwards224 [2017-06-16 01:38:22 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful.
You made a fan comic based on penstroke's work. Now I hope penstroke does something based on your work

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ToastyTop [2017-06-16 01:14:40 +0000 UTC]

So its basically Nyx, but Daybreaker instead of Nightmare Moon.
Oh godΒ 

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Flower-Horse [2017-06-16 01:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Funny, Nyx is a roman goddess and Helios is the Greek god of the Sun...

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Zahnny In reply to Flower-Horse [2017-06-23 21:12:23 +0000 UTC]

Nox is the Roman counterpart, Nyx/Nix is the Greek.

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EmerWarriorDeer [2017-06-15 23:44:19 +0000 UTC]

She is adorable

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ComfyDove [2017-06-15 23:33:00 +0000 UTC]

I like the new OC.

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SpokenMind93 In reply to ComfyDove [2017-06-15 23:34:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ heavily inspired by Nyx from Past Sins

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ComfyDove In reply to SpokenMind93 [2017-06-25 14:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice. :3

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ChibiFox12 [2017-06-15 23:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Awww that could get totally adorbs!
Cute design btw :3
Would you mind if I drew something with your Helia design (with credits of course)?

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SpokenMind93 In reply to ChibiFox12 [2017-06-15 23:28:58 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to Wow, she's not even an hour old and already gets fanart xD

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ChibiFox12 In reply to SpokenMind93 [2017-06-15 23:31:40 +0000 UTC]

She's just adorable^^
It'll probably take a while tho I'm so slow .3.

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SpokenMind93 In reply to ChibiFox12 [2017-06-15 23:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Eh no prob ^^ Already glad the idea is in your head

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MLP-Hot-Rod [2017-06-15 23:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Cool idea! Why didn't I think of this? Also, I'd love to see her with Celestia being all cuddles. X3

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JARK-585 [2017-06-15 23:16:03 +0000 UTC]

That is a very interesting concept indeed, Saturn!

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