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SpokenMind93 — Past Sins: Once A Crusader P5
Published: 2018-07-19 17:16:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 19512; Favourites: 203; Downloads: 0
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Past Sins and Nyx (c)
MLPFIM (c) Hasbro,
In honor of because he made a very awesome fancomic after the facts of this story
but he sadly left DA or changed his account
I'm actually pretty glad to finally have to vector Twilight again ^^
And she's not hurt all over anymore! Damn, my heart broke when I had to do those pages.
Oh and: I. AM. A. DIRTY. TRACER. (Not that people will care)
<<Prelude
<<Chapter 1
<<Chapter 2
<<Chapter 3
<<Chapter 4
<<Chapter 5
<<Chapter 6
<<Chapter 7
<<Chapter 8
<<Chapter 9
<<Chapter 10
<<Chapter 11
<<Chapter 12
<<Chapter 13
<<Previous - Next >>
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This is beautiful. How long did it take to make this?
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It's gonna get worse before it gets better Twilight.
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You've Always had a choice here Nyx, too bad you never even gave yourself a Chance.
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I'm guessing that collar around her neck can be used to immobilize her if she tries to escape; much like in the Star Trek episode The Gamesters Of Triskelion? :/
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A magic inhibitor would've been my second guess.
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I’m guessing this was before magic suppression rings were well known
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I won't fight you but I will help you. (repeating it indefinitely)
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Really nicely done, I loved the fic, and I appreciate that you are illustrating it, keep up the great work.
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That's what you get for trying to have a social conversation with a prisoner.
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um I have a suggestion... in the last pictures you forgot twilight's cutie mark. But your comic is the best! I love it, good work!
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Woops! Fixed it!, thanks for the good eye!
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You missed one, panel 17 still doesnt have the cutie mark
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I thought it could be overlooked as it is a bit of an angle.
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Eh it looks out of place to me. Its a good enough shot of her flank that you should be able to see the mark
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Hey no ones perfect, a mistake now and again just proves youre human. You are human, right? XP
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She might be a pony. X) It's internet, you can never tell.
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Thats exactly what i was implying xD
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*le gasp* Spoken you are a pony!?
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when someone that powerful give no answer that in itself is an answer. or something like that i forget.
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Past sins is by far my favorite MLP fanfic. Thank you for taking the time to illustrate all of this.
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