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Description 17th March 2014 Update
This is an old design. To see more of Biggen and Pinwheel you can
visit my Biggen folder on deviantART here: squeakytoybox.deviantart.com/g…

Experimenting with a simple walk animation for Pinwheel from my
Biggen series :3

In future I would love to make a Biggen and Pinwheel flash adventure
game so this is a small step towards that goal.

(I'm working on two adventure games at the moment for you guys in
actionscript 3.0 and I am so excited to finish them!)


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Biggen and Pinwheel (c) Kirsten Rayner / Squeaky Toybox 2013
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Comments: 20

CutieKittie999 [2013-09-30 21:23:24 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Ok, this is my first critique and i hope it'll help you e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Vision: A very good representation of an adorable little bunny walking in the meadow, you can see how happy he/she is ^^

Originality: Almost everything is original including the character, but the art style is kinda common between some artists who like to draw cute little animals just like you do e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Technique: The animation is ok, but it kinda bothers me that the only thing that is moving are the bunny's legs (oh, and the blinking) while the rest of the picture is like a statue, but it's still ok

Impact: The first time i saw this i just couldn't help but smile, this is really cute, charming and maybe inspiring for some people ^^

That's all i can say! hehe, i hope it helped and keep up the good work! <3

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SqueakyToybox In reply to CutieKittie999 [2013-09-30 23:40:01 +0000 UTC]

Ahh wow thank you so much for the critique!!

Do you think there is any way that I could improve on the animation? At the moment I have his ears, body, legs and arms moving but you said that the bunny still looked quite static? Maybe i could emphasize the movement a bit more ?

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CutieKittie999 In reply to SqueakyToybox [2013-10-01 02:12:00 +0000 UTC]

The bunny is ok and i actually like your idea! But i personally think it'll look cuter if you make the things that are around the character move, for example the ballons~ I wish you good luck for your flash game ^^ and i should ask, What animation program do you use?

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SqueakyToybox In reply to CutieKittie999 [2013-10-01 03:27:30 +0000 UTC]

ahh okay! so maybe some more exaggerated movement for

the balloons, ill give that a try thankyou!!
hehe sure, i use adobe flash cs5.5 ^^

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CutieKittie999 In reply to SqueakyToybox [2013-10-01 19:33:47 +0000 UTC]

Wish you good luck! it doesn't have to be exagerated, but it's ok, it's your art and your welcome  

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staticwind [2013-10-01 08:18:12 +0000 UTC]

Lookin cute!!
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SqueakyToybox In reply to staticwind [2013-10-01 09:21:00 +0000 UTC]

(\__/)
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iYoonaRawrx [2013-09-30 22:32:23 +0000 UTC]

Aww! It's so cute! ♥

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SqueakyToybox In reply to iYoonaRawrx [2013-09-30 23:40:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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iYoonaRawrx In reply to SqueakyToybox [2013-10-01 00:03:47 +0000 UTC]

no problem! hehe~

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Cappippuni [2013-09-30 17:13:16 +0000 UTC]

Awww adorable little bunny!! <3

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SqueakyToybox In reply to Cappippuni [2013-09-30 23:40:36 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you! hehe <3

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LuliTheBunny [2013-09-30 16:22:35 +0000 UTC]

this is so cute Kirsten!!

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SqueakyToybox In reply to LuliTheBunny [2013-09-30 23:40:30 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you bunny ^^ <33

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Jadekyy [2013-09-30 08:41:27 +0000 UTC]

This is soooo cute! Can't wait till the game comes out! >v<

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SqueakyToybox In reply to Jadekyy [2013-09-30 08:44:50 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you very much! ^A^ hehe me too, i would love to

do a biggen adventure game. once i finish my other game

projects i should start working on it! 

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Jadekyy In reply to SqueakyToybox [2013-09-30 08:47:00 +0000 UTC]

That'll be great! i'll anticipate it. x)

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darkc3po [2013-09-30 08:19:45 +0000 UTC]

aww,that is really cute my buddy.

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SqueakyToybox In reply to darkc3po [2013-09-30 08:44:59 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you!!

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darkc3po In reply to SqueakyToybox [2013-10-01 07:29:07 +0000 UTC]

^_^aww,your very welcome my buddy,
how are you,have a great day my buddy.^_^

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