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Published: 2011-09-29 01:06:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1731; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 5
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Tikay was breathing in heavily. In truth, Merlot was a lot larger then this dragon, but the sheer size of it still caused Tikay to panic. The brittle wind, which had picked up moments earlier, slowly came to a stop. The thick fog that was lifted momentarily, slowly descended once more atop of the frozen village. Tikay scooted to the edge of the tree and peered around it. The thick fog was concealing the dragon from her view again.The riolu let out a sigh of relief as she began to shift her view back towards the plains. Tikay let out a shrill cry as she came face to face with Gabi, who had silently approached Tikay while she was distracted. “What the… Gabi don’t Sneak up on me like that!” Tikay gave a light shove that pushed the kirlia far enough away to give her some space. “Oh! I’m sorry is something wron…” The startled riolu pressed her paws into the face of the kirlia. “Shhhhhhh! don’t make a sound there’s a gigantic dragon in Tao square…” Tikay released Gabi’s face and turned around back to face the direction of the dragon. “Ok I don’t think it saw me earlier and… ware is Will!?!” Tikay ceased in mid-sentence and began frantically looking around. “I thought you were watching him!” Gabi started back for a moment before letting out a small chuckle. “He’s right beside me Tikay! Now what this about a dragon?” Tikay searched hysterically in the area around Gabi. The snow was very deep here, but there wasn’t a sign of the torchic any ware. “Gabi I don’t see him! Oh Arceus! We lost him!”
“HERE I AM!” Tikay screeched and fell backward smacking her head against the tree as a rather giddy Torchic burst out of the snow. The torchic landed on top of Tikay and started giggling as the extremely disturbed riolu panted frantically “But… but you… ware did you come from!” Will gave Tikay innocent look as he sat on happily on Tikay’s chest. “I was digging under the snow. I wanted to practice some more like you told me to! Did I do a good job? Gabi said I should show you how good I’m getting at digging!” Tikay shifted her gaze over to Gabi who was doing everything in her power to hold back a laugh. “What the heck Gabi! Why would you do this of all times?” Gabi snickered as she approached Tikay and helped her get up. “I didn’t think Will would come up and scare you like that!” Tikay brushed herself off and faced her team mates. “Well never mind that now I need to find chill.” Tikay grabbed a rung of a semi iced ladder and began to climb. “Tikay be careful that ladder must to be slippery!” Gabi called as Tikay ascended up the ladder.
Tikay could tell right away that something was wrong. She began to call out as she approached but no reply came. "MIKE! CHILL! Anyone home?!” Tikay began to frantically shove the door while keeping a firm hold on the ladder trying her hardest not to slip and fall. With one final shove Tikay managed to jar the hatch open and she quickly pushed her head inside. There before her laid an unconscious charmander whose disordered hat lay beside him. Sweat and heat emitted from his body in a torrent as he lay still, unmoving. “Mike!” Tikay called out but received no response from her guild leader.
A small movement came from farther back in the club. A red bean-bag shifted as a minccino, whose eyes were hidden by a pair of point shades turned to look at who had so rudely interrupted his little nap “Say what? Is that you Maple?” Tikay was relieved to finally see another leaving soul as she turned to address the minccino. “Oh Chill I’m so glad to see you! I need-” The unsettled chill let out a loud groan and sank back into his bean-bag. ‘’For the last time I told you Pokemon I have no Idea when the medicine will be done so just chillax ok!” Tikay paused for a moment confused by what chill had just stated. “Medicine? What no, no that’s not it! Chill I need to know what the heck is wrong with everything around here and who in the world is that dragon sitting outside in the square?!” The minccino bolted from his chair and turned to face Tikay. “How could you not KNOW!?!?” Tikay flinched as the minccino started to yell into her face. ~Well he’s obvious mad~ Tikay thought to herself as chill began to puff. Randomly both Will’s and Gabi’s head appeared next to Tikay; somehow they had managed to find their way up the ladder and cram themselves into the small entrance. “That stupid Pk got to her alter first and her stupid dragon froze my freaking stone! Now sorbet sits around all day long freezing everyone! People are getting sick and that stubborn lizard won’t make it leave; to make matters worse… MAPLE HASN’T GOTTEN BACK YET!” Chill was ranting and his continual cries of rage were splattering Tikay’s face with saliva. Chill paused, silencing his train of thoughts for a moment. “You guys look all fine and dandy! Why don’t you and your team go help the doctor INSTEAD OF STANDING HERE BEING USLESS!?” The random outburst from Chill shocked Tikay who shrank back away from his words. Faintly Tikay replied under her breath with a yes sir and started back down the ladder fallowed by nervous Kirlia and a questioning torchic.
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Srarlight In reply to Avalanche1337 [2011-09-30 12:07:18 +0000 UTC]
[link] you can read the story
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CyndersAlmondEyes [2011-09-29 19:36:45 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! You're great at writing, and I can't really see many spelling mistakes this time. You just mixed 'ware' and 'where' up a few times, and towards the end you put 'yo' instead of 'to' :3
I love the image too, you're great at expressions! Chill looks really mad xD
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Srarlight In reply to CyndersAlmondEyes [2011-09-29 23:15:34 +0000 UTC]
thank you for your compliments and help I appreaciate it! XD I don't know... writing stuff kills my brain
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CyndersAlmondEyes In reply to Srarlight [2011-09-30 21:04:13 +0000 UTC]
Aww, you're welcome, and how come it kills your brain? D:
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Srarlight In reply to CyndersAlmondEyes [2011-10-01 02:14:56 +0000 UTC]
because I lack the ability to put the epic scenes that fill my head into words D:
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CyndersAlmondEyes In reply to Srarlight [2011-10-01 18:29:40 +0000 UTC]
Ohh, hard xD You're doing a good job of it though so far!
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Mad-Zazzy [2011-09-29 16:13:54 +0000 UTC]
Awesome work! I love Chill's expression!
Great story and writing!
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Srarlight In reply to Mad-Zazzy [2011-09-29 23:33:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I've been practicing
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Srarlight In reply to lonemaximal [2011-09-29 23:35:40 +0000 UTC]
awww yes but alas we all lose our temper from time to time.
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