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Tikay peered reluctantly into the eyes of the young torchic. He was so young and oblivious to the conflicts of the world he was hatched into. Tikay longed for that sense of bliss; she hated to be the one to shatter this one moment of peace for someone else. She let out a deep sigh and turned away from the young torchic and started to walk towards the direction of Tao village.“Come, Will we're going to see the village now.” The wind started to pick up as the torchic, which had been playing in the snow, stood up and eagerly fallowed the riolu. A kirlia, who had been standing near the entrance of team star seekers base, ran to shut the door and rushed to catch up with her teammates who had already started their journey to the village.
Tikay was used this kind of weather, having been born and raised in the peaks of the mountains, but this abnormal cold was bugging her. Fog was slowly descending around the plains, obscuring Tikay view of what lay ahead. She as slowly making her way were she hoped Tao village still lay.
“Why is everything like this? Why is it so cold? My feet are cold! Are we there yet? Can I see the purple kecleo- no wait I want to see the big old gabite you were talking about! I don’t want to see Devi… Devionsy… Devonshipe? I don’t want to see him he sounds scary…” Tikay continued walking as she turned to glance at the young torchic. He was doing a little skip as he jumped and plowed through the snow. His little body was generating enough heat to melt most of the snow he came into contact with. Tikay couldn’t help but smile as she watched him frolic and talk to himself innocently. If only this situation were not so serious, she would be having fun with her new team mate. “Oh Will...” Tikay shuddered and turned back to the direction of Tao village. Tikay wanted only to focus on what lay ahead.
“ Tikay! I think I see Tao village!” Gabi, who had been silent up to now, called out from behind. Tikay squinted and peered into the fog and sure enough the dim outline of Tao village could be barely seen. Tikay started to sprint towards the village; she had to know what was going on. “Hay Tikay wait for us” The kirlia was forced to remain back with Will as the agitated riolu took off towards the village. The fog lay heavily upon the buildings, covering them in a veil of white. Tikay could not make out a single Pokémon walking through the village square as she approached. Tikay came to a halt and scanned the area around her. The fog here was very thick and she could only make out the faint shadows of the buildings around and the large tree that towered above her. Something unfamiliar laid ahead, a large shadow that was out of place among the buildings. Tikay shivered, the cold here was more intense then it was in the fields in which she had just previously arrived from.
A large wind swept across the village whipping up the newly fallen snow across the ground. The fog lifted just enough to let Tikay see what the large shadow was… A very large and seemingly dangerous gray dragon sat in the square. Fierce blasts of cold emanated from his body as he sat still, unmoving as the terrified riolu ran behind the large tree that housed the rescuers club.
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Since these events are just for fun I want to practice writing because I absolutly suck at it! Please any corrections, tips, good refrences would be really wonderful
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Comments: 23
SeriesArtiststarter [2011-10-26 18:51:22 +0000 UTC]
That Team Soft Spooks and this truely add to something all mightly awesome and truely terrific! and this picture of Kyurem and your Riolu character, I must say just simple a spectacular peice with a great reaction
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gusfromholland In reply to Srarlight [2011-09-27 15:13:49 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I love things like this!
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gusfromholland In reply to Srarlight [2011-09-28 14:49:42 +0000 UTC]
That's a good thing right?
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CyndersAlmondEyes [2011-09-25 10:14:54 +0000 UTC]
You don't suck at writing at all! The only thing I can see that can be corrected is that at the start where Tikay's speaking it should be 'now' instead of 'know', 'peeks' is actually 'peaks', 'hay' is 'hey', and 'barley' is 'barely'. I love the way you drew this by the way, Tikay looks like she's having a heart attack :3
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Srarlight In reply to CyndersAlmondEyes [2011-09-26 01:41:09 +0000 UTC]
Oh! Thank you! I'm concerned with typos more then anything else! I lack the ability to sound out words But I'm glad to see that my actually ability "to write" is not as bad as I thought it was!
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CyndersAlmondEyes In reply to Srarlight [2011-09-26 14:21:42 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!
If you're struggling to spell a word, why not google it? It won't help with things like 'know' and 'now', but it'll help with the longer words :3
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Srarlight In reply to lonemaximal [2011-09-26 01:34:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Hope you will enjoy it
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Mad-Zazzy [2011-09-24 20:00:31 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! Your writing dosent suck!
Awesomeness picture toooo! I love Kyrem! (I think thats his name X3) The frosty background looks amazing! Great story to go with it too!
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Srarlight In reply to Mad-Zazzy [2011-09-26 01:38:16 +0000 UTC]
I beg the differ, but I can suck at times! Kyurem Is so very awesome! I still love reshiram more though XD And Thanks! I've never been given the opertunity to draw snow till now
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HierroTatsu [2011-09-24 17:07:42 +0000 UTC]
love this so far ... All of her reactions have been great... "WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN?!"
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Srarlight In reply to HierroTatsu [2011-09-24 17:18:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! "Yes the world as you knew it ended, like three days ago"
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TheMagicCat [2011-09-24 17:03:42 +0000 UTC]
This is very cute! Curio the gentlemanly Skitty says "Remember that you also need to link your team's application to all of your pages before submitting them!"
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Srarlight In reply to TheMagicCat [2011-09-24 17:17:59 +0000 UTC]
Ah thank you and yes I do tend to forget to link it but I always put it on the first page
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