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Srfgurl5 — Goodbye
Published: 2004-08-04 14:28:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 15
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Description He looks at her with questioning eyes
She reaches for him to say goodbye
He feels her frail body choke with a cry
He wishes everything she just said is a horrible lie
They stand together not wanting to let go
This was suppose to be their secret no one was suppose to know
Not understand why things happen this way
They hold each other still finding no words to say
She lets go, his arms still grasp
Not wanting to make her part of his past
She kisses his tears that fall on his face,
And it brings her back to a familiar place
Suddenly her heart is being ripped in two
As he softly whispers "I cant live without you"
They lay their broken hearts on the ground
Softly kiss, and let go of this flawless love they have found
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Comments: 10

SilentDreamer12 [2004-08-09 09:18:00 +0000 UTC]

wonderful poem! it's one of a kind

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Srfgurl5 In reply to SilentDreamer12 [2004-08-09 14:53:07 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks

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moretolifethanthis [2004-08-06 01:53:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow...this is awesome and the oictures is sweet/

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Srfgurl5 In reply to moretolifethanthis [2004-08-06 05:14:21 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks

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girlwithabrokenheart [2004-08-04 20:01:12 +0000 UTC]

wow... kelly, its beautiful...

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Srfgurl5 In reply to girlwithabrokenheart [2004-08-06 05:16:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks shan your awesome

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awesomesauce [2004-08-04 18:52:31 +0000 UTC]

wow....
you...

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Srfgurl5 In reply to awesomesauce [2004-08-06 05:15:51 +0000 UTC]

hey miss u buddy

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KateHughes [2004-08-04 14:30:58 +0000 UTC]

thats beautiful, but sad...

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Srfgurl5 In reply to KateHughes [2004-08-04 14:40:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks :smile:

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