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Jodi pushed open Jane's door, knocking while it was already swinging inwards and waited until it had closed behind her before speaking."Next Tuesday at quarter past noon he'll have stopped Bob McKibbon's heart." The announcement was followed by a left-handed flick of fingers down her right forearm towards Jane's desktop, the bits of data that comprised the intel briefing making the leap across the office to the mid-air display where it hovered for review.
"Christ, that's the third one of these this quarter," Jane scanned the document top to bottom, making notes in an action plan as she went. "We're going to have to go back a few years on this one too, increase junk food intake, sugar, closet alcohol consumption, we can't bend the timeline in any way that will require affecting anyone else's," She pushed back from the desk, turning her attention to Jodi, "do you have any idea how much of a pain in the ass this guy's becoming?"
"As long as he's in the pole position, we retroactively justify his futures. That's the gig, nobody said it was going to be easy." Jodi softened. "Look, I know it's a shitshow, but you're the best at this, if anyone can restring his timelines so he doesn't destroy himself and the party, you can."
Jane pulled up a list of pending events, spinning the display around so Jodi could see.
"It was bad enough when he was firing intelligence staff," she started, "re-engineering the history of spooks who are trained to recognize when their timelines have been distorted was an invitation for disaster, but that just needed to hold up to administrative review. Retroactively creating health conditions to cover deaths, that has to stand up to coroner scrutiny, and that's an entirely different level of sophistication and detail."
Jodi surveyed the office, noted the absence of anywhere to sit and so stood shifting her weight from foot to foot as she replied.
"This can't go on forever, you know that. His term will expire, the mantle will be passed to someone else, hopefully, someone who isn't just another petulant child, and we'll get back to reworking foreign governments, and de-escalating conflicts in far-off countries, just like the good old days." She smiled, not entirely confident he wouldn't somehow secure another term before common sense and decency made an inevitable return to the administration.
An urgent action item popped to the top of the list on Jane's display, and both women studied it in stunned silence.
"He can't really think he can push this through," Jane's voice was clearly strained, "aren't there safeguards on rewriting electorate laws? He can't honestly think we can just eliminate the term limit without anyone noticing."
Jodi stood silently for a long time before leaning close and whispering in Jane's ear.
"You should go back a few years and increase his junk food intake, and sugar, he doesn't drink publicly, so you'll have to make him drink in private, excessively, maybe late at night. Nobody will notice if he's drunk then, he doesn't make much sense at the best of times."
She straightened, fixed her suit jacket and read Jane's face as the realization of what she was suggesting swept over her.
"If you prioritize this, you can save McKibbon's life while you're at it." She smiled again, a genuine expression this time. "There's already a death event on the timeline for next Tuesday at quarter past noon, maybe it's time we reallocated that."
Jane's mouth tightened into a line. She held eye contact for a long minute, then nodded once and turned the display back and started working.
If she was successful, McKibbon might be just one of the millions of lives she'd save this week.
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Comments: 53
SRSmith In reply to ??? [2019-02-04 01:28:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much! Iβm glad you did!
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denlm [2019-01-23 22:00:41 +0000 UTC]
How did I miss your DD? Congrats. I got one today, so it looks like the old gang is getting back together. LOL. Excellent work here, as always.
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SRSmith In reply to denlm [2019-01-28 05:46:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much! This was a wonderfully pleasant surprise!
Congratulations, again, to you as well - I'm horribly behind on reading and replying to everyone!
Happy Monday!
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Tinselfire [2019-01-23 19:06:43 +0000 UTC]
It is strange. Had this story in an open tab for soon three weeks now, and everytime I've tried to sit down and give it a thorough review, I've just ended up scratching my head.
Think the title may be part of it. When I first saw it pop up among the notifications, Gibson's The Gernsback Continuum immediately came to mind - with a title hinting at the future arriving late, but in force, how could it not? - but the moment the suggestion of actual time travel enters, the flying wings vanish from the sky. There is this gnawing feeling that, besides the obvious part about government agents engineering timelines, something very ominous is going on, especially near the very end. But cannot quite put my finger on it; feel the detail that solves the puzzle is there, but it is some subtlety or reference I am not familiar enough with to spot.
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SRSmith In reply to Tinselfire [2019-01-28 05:45:45 +0000 UTC]
It leans heavily on the current political landscape in America, so it's understandable that it may not be as immediately apparent what's happening if you, like us, aren't wallowing in this mess daily.
I do appreciate you reading, and taking the time to comment. Thanks also for reminding me that I'm long overdue to revisit Burning Chrome, and all of Gibson's short stories therein!
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Tinselfire In reply to SRSmith [2019-03-12 20:13:16 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... Having taken a while to try understanding the political landscape, it would almost seem as if time travel is already a reality. Or at least time manipulation. The last time I was actively keeping up with politics - sixteen years ago, in senior high, when grades depended on it - the average time a politician could be held accountable for their statements was 4-6 months. Now it is down to as low as two hours o.O
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SRSmith In reply to Tinselfire [2019-03-13 02:54:12 +0000 UTC]
The current political landscape in North America is like nothing I've seen in my lifetime. My only hope is that it returns to something I can not care about as quickly as it's turned into something that I watch intently like a train derailment, it's nauseating, nearly terrifying, but I can't look away.
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Tinselfire In reply to SRSmith [2019-03-13 07:30:08 +0000 UTC]
Know that feeling well. In hindsight, should've listened more to Gibson: He has been repeating for thirty-five years that sci-fi authors are overall very poor at predicting the future - and this is certainly not how I expected the dark techno-future of the 2020's to turn out.
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SRSmith In reply to Tinselfire [2019-03-14 13:51:18 +0000 UTC]
There are days when I long for the simplicity of robots roaming the streets masquerading as humans trying to wipe humanity out.
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Tinselfire In reply to SRSmith [2019-03-14 15:09:15 +0000 UTC]
Mmm. So familiar.
One of my first tastes of cyberpunk was a review of Syndicate in a then-reknowned Swedish computer magazine: Four men walk briskly through the crowd. Few know they are cyborgs, and under their trenchcoats is the firepower to fight and win a small war.
"NaΓ―ve" is not the right word, but the dystopia envisioned in classic cyberpunk certainly had a promise to it that the threats of the future could be faced in a concise, physical way. For example Wintermute may send flying lawnmowers to kill people but won't skim their passwords, and if you suffer identity theft from a terminator - well - your problems are in the past.
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SRSmith In reply to Tinselfire [2019-03-20 18:38:23 +0000 UTC]
Writers definitely underestimated the subversive side of technology in favor of the exciting and splashy possible futures, perhaps to our peril!
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Tinselfire In reply to SRSmith [2019-03-28 14:26:23 +0000 UTC]
All too true. Speaking of being engulfed in politics and the issues of technology not quite resulting in the future presumed, considering just walling up and hibernating until the article 11 and 13 teacup storms blow over.
Do people really not learn this sort of crisis has been semi-annual since 1995?
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LindArtz [2019-01-22 21:40:05 +0000 UTC]
Very nicely done!!
Congratulations on your much deserved DD! Β
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SRSmith In reply to LindArtz [2019-01-28 05:39:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, for this and collecting it too!
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SRSmith In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-01-28 05:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, and thanks for collecting this too!
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onetwistedpoet [2019-01-22 17:51:46 +0000 UTC]
A nice dose of Tarantino-level justice porn today!
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SRSmith In reply to onetwistedpoet [2019-01-28 05:38:28 +0000 UTC]
ThankΒ you, for the comment and the collection! I do love Tarantino!
Happy Monday!
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LiliWrites [2019-01-22 17:26:47 +0000 UTC]
I am so down with this. Great piece. Love the slow build. Congrats on the DD, Steve.Β
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SRSmith In reply to LiliWrites [2019-01-28 05:36:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, for the wonderful comment, and for collecting this!
Happy Monday!
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xlntwtch [2019-01-22 10:41:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh, please let this become fact.. ..In the meantime, congratulations on the DD! It's very well done. (:
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SRSmith In reply to xlntwtch [2019-01-22 16:22:30 +0000 UTC]
I'm crossing my fingers so hard they hurt!
Thanks very much!
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ikazon [2019-01-08 03:08:10 +0000 UTC]
That reveal was clean. Very nice as always, and good to see more writing from you!
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SRSmith In reply to ikazon [2019-01-11 16:57:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, both for the wonderful comment and collection!
It feels good when I get back to writing, I really need to do that more!
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DC-26 [2019-01-06 19:45:52 +0000 UTC]
This would be so much more funny if it were a bit less true.
Seems like it could work, though.
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SRSmith In reply to DC-26 [2019-01-11 16:55:43 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes we have to laugh just to keep ourselves from crying!
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alapip [2019-01-04 18:14:27 +0000 UTC]
Oh-ho-ho... good one, Steve.
Not 'this' of course, but I've hoped
weΒ have some quiet safeguards in
place 'in-case-of-emergency'. The
25th amendment being useless to
an unfortunate degree. Of course,
there was a day when the CIA had
clearance to solve these problems
proactively?Β pip
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SRSmith In reply to alapip [2019-01-11 17:00:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much pip!
I feel like the only 'checks and balances' anyone in power cares about lately are the ones they can cash, and the ones of their Swiss bank accounts.
I hope someone fixes the system soon before we're irretrievably broken.
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alapip In reply to SRSmith [2019-01-11 21:03:15 +0000 UTC]
In the meantime do what I do: When Trump
appears on TV, point the remote and repeat,Β
"DIE! DIE!" It seemed to work on Billy Mays,Β
that irritating high-tenor product hawker. I do
still feel [maybe] a bit guilty about him though.
Or not... :smirk:
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nielsfechtel [2019-01-04 13:31:46 +0000 UTC]
phew. Scary thought really, manipulating time(lines) like this.. The past isΒ usually seen as inviolable...Β Β Cool idea!
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SRSmith In reply to nielsfechtel [2019-01-11 16:55:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, both for the comment and for collecting this!
What could possibly go wrong with something like this?Β Β
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Rafellin [2019-01-04 00:36:41 +0000 UTC]
Tidy alternate timefix work, that man. If feckin' only.
While they're at it, I can recommend a few politicians over here for reallocation. It'll probably take more than one to balance returning Terry Pratchet and Lemmy, but hey - it'll be worth it.
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SRSmith In reply to Rafellin [2019-01-11 16:58:10 +0000 UTC]
I imagine we could put together a list as weighty as a NYC telephone directory without even having to take on borderline cases!
Thanks very much, as always!
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denlm [2019-01-03 18:52:17 +0000 UTC]
Your best work in a while... and I have been a fan a long time. Have to fave this. Also have to confess I see a metaphor here. Or maybe it's a futuristic prototype of a contemporary despot. You summarize my fears in just 500 words or less. Amazing.Β
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SRSmith In reply to denlm [2019-01-11 16:54:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the wonderful comment and !
Clearly there's a parallel here to something, if only I could put my finger on it...
(If only I could figure out how to make this technology work!)
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denlm In reply to SRSmith [2019-01-11 17:20:13 +0000 UTC]
If you figure it out and need help, let me know.
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SRSmith In reply to denlm [2019-01-11 17:49:21 +0000 UTC]
If I figure it out, the first thing I'm going to do is go back a few years and help myself to figure it out sooner!
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neurotype-on-discord [2019-01-03 15:26:20 +0000 UTC]
Ha
Ahahahaha it took me a minute because your reveal is subtle (which I like) but that's beautiful. Although, well, the party's been trending in that direction since the Bircherists bought it out.
Will admit it was somewhat confusing on the first read until I reached that point where what's happening is clear. I absolutely don't think you should change the gradualness of the reveal here, but I would clarify their actions a bit more, or even remove some of the extraneous details and use that space to establish more setting. For instance in paragraph 2, I think all you need to say is she flicked her fingers and the data were transferred.
Anyway though, "Nobody will notice if he's drunk then, he doesn't make much sense at the best of times." Hahahahahaha truth.
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SRSmith In reply to neurotype-on-discord [2019-01-11 17:12:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! This was a pretty cathartic thing to write, and being subtle went against a very visceral need I was having to smash something, so I'm pleasantly surprised that it didn't come across as too heavy handed!
The more I'm unable to avoid listening to him, the more I wonder what the hell is going on in that bag of cats he has for a brain box - it's a little terrifying!
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neurotype-on-discord In reply to SRSmith [2019-01-11 17:17:25 +0000 UTC]
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CalleighCaineWriter [2019-01-03 11:17:25 +0000 UTC]
Yes!!! You're back! Annnnnd, reminding me that a certain megalomaniac won't always have power. Nice job!
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SRSmith In reply to CalleighCaineWriter [2019-01-03 16:59:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, for the comment and the !
All things come to an end, this one can't come quickly enough!
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