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Published: 2018-02-23 03:04:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 5708; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 12
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Guess what, we found Sonic! And he's getting that ocean breeze, but he doesn't seem to be scared...Good news! I was able to get all my homework done this week, so I've decided to upload the next page early, if it makes anyone happy. I hope so.
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Sonic Sunshine Issue 1 Page 4
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Sonic Sunshine Issue 1 Page 2
Throughout the entire comic creation process, SBoomSonicspeeder and Iamkingdomhearts1000 are helping me out. And if you haven't already, check out their DeviantArt pages!
Edit: I'm updating the comic pages because wisp2007 is helping me out with the dialogue and speech bubbles.
Synopsis:
Tails congratulates Sonic for saving the world after many tiring, yet thrilling adventures. Sonic is standing in the balcony of the yacht where Tails finds him and brings him back inside to watch a video advertisement on their destination for vacation, Miracle Island. However, Sticks spots two mysterious figures in the video and assumes they might be plotting an evil scheme. However, some of Sonic's friends find this hard to believe. Tails announces that they have arrived on Miracle Island, but the island is not what they expected...
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Comments: 8
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Heart to heart between besties, my favorite kind of dialogue!
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Okay the artwork for this comic is beyond awesome, And the storyline is interesting. The title however gets me wondering if Mario isn't gonna show up for some kind of crossover.
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Thank you! If it’s Sonic, Mario shouldn’t show up.
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First panel; "Whoa, that's a big one!"
I just love how you draw these two - the dialogue too was nice how Sonic's taking a break to be with friends
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Your art and coloring are very good. I particularly like the sort of style you're going with that looks rough but is actually quite polished.. I must say, though, the word balloons and text need work. The dialogue itself is fine. But 95% of your progress is A-ok. But that's just my own thoughts.
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I appreciate your critique. I love it when people give me constructive criticism so that I know what to work on when designing my work.
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There are good tutorials online for comic balloons and lettering that could help you.
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