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stalker-in-training — Entropy by-nc-nd
Published: 2007-10-18 11:02:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 606; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Description With a sarcastic laugh
She turns back her heel
Holding back tears
As if it’s no big deal.

Out of their sight
Her armour is gone
Shattered in silence
At lost and beyond.

As she walks on
It starts to rain
Soon her soul cracks
Absorbing the pain.

Images flash
As voices mock loud
Shivering for comfort
And no longer proud.

Replaying over and over
Mind a film without sound
For once it’s her in agony
Not the other way round.

A headache forms
She blinks back tears
Not sure why she’s feeling
Like cutting short years.

The damage is minimal
But one scar cuts deep
Misery wells up cruelly
Whilst consciousness bleeds.

Step by baby step
She walks down the line
Self destructing in silence
Dumb, deaf but not blind.

Difficulty inhaling
In broad daylight she breaks
Lost for the moment
No more smiles to fake.

Bloodshot eyes blink slowly
Her lips open to scream
So fast her world has fallen
Only it’s not a bad dream.
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Comments: 8

mouseymousey [2007-10-19 05:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Why did you call this poem Entropy?

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stalker-in-training In reply to mouseymousey [2007-10-19 05:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Entropy means from order to disorder in a short amount of time and her life just fell apart in a few seconds... Hence entropy.

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BurningRosesOnAStick [2007-10-19 02:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Last line is weak.

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stalker-in-training In reply to BurningRosesOnAStick [2007-10-19 02:29:47 +0000 UTC]

I know. So make a suggestion.

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BurningRosesOnAStick In reply to stalker-in-training [2007-10-19 02:33:57 +0000 UTC]

I know nothing about poetry.

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stalker-in-training In reply to BurningRosesOnAStick [2007-10-19 03:27:55 +0000 UTC]

...-.-

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Unwritten00 In reply to stalker-in-training [2007-11-07 04:53:23 +0000 UTC]

great poem

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stalker-in-training In reply to Unwritten00 [2007-11-07 06:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! n_n

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