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Published: 2004-01-22 04:23:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 115; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 18
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Description I’ve never truly realized the effect of time, until i watched my grandfathers hands. Those same hands have been to war, work everyday; so it’s understandable how I could confuse them for strong hands. At age Seventy Two, he refuses to just be still. Going to work every day, and taking care of his morning and night. He’s suffered lose. My grandfather has felt the affect of time, but I never knew until I saw his hands. The hands that work in the garden during summer, and shovel snow during winter. Cradled babies, and grand babies. I saw those hands....Callused, wrinkled. I’m not sure why I was so surprised, but I couldn’t get over my Grandfather’s hands.  That night I realized even the young grew old...As he prepared for the morning, with a certainty that there would be another sun. I saw his withered hands, quiver with age. Now I see an old man’s body, instead of a pillar of strength., with a deep reality of time.
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raggy-doll [2004-01-24 22:56:08 +0000 UTC]

life is a very very short things like people one day appearing 22 then turning 72 it's a frightning matter of the change we all take..you captured this perfectly i really well written piece dear well done.xtake care.x

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StanelyJava In reply to raggy-doll [2004-01-24 23:05:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.
Change..I suppose something I'll have to get used to..

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raggy-doll In reply to StanelyJava [2004-01-24 23:19:36 +0000 UTC]

hmm change is never good with anything but i hope you find your way dear you sound lost but i have been told that why not try to live today rarther than thinking about tomorrow or how your gonna be in 10 years me presonally i live in the past but just try and live each day at a time and enjoy it rarther that just waiting and waiting for things that wont happen for years like ageing hands dear take care of you.x

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StanelyJava In reply to raggy-doll [2004-01-24 23:30:51 +0000 UTC]

-nods- I miss the past...but closer my birthday comes the more I miss and worry.
I miss being a little girl, and I worry about growing old. But your advice it good. Something I will try to do. Honestly. Thank you so much, and take care!

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raggy-doll In reply to StanelyJava [2004-01-24 23:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Anytime dear if you ever wanna talk note me but for now i really want to watch your preogress so dev watch me thinks dear.x

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poundpup [2004-01-22 19:20:00 +0000 UTC]

it is really touching that you care so deeply abouthim and that you noticed the little details in life... people forget... and here you remember..

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MissStorms [2004-01-22 16:40:58 +0000 UTC]

perfect

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allaroundblueartist [2004-01-22 15:16:59 +0000 UTC]

wow. with the dawning of time, hands grow older. good job on this. i really like it.

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polojojo [2004-01-22 04:32:59 +0000 UTC]

-huggles- I told you...

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StanelyJava In reply to polojojo [2004-01-22 04:47:00 +0000 UTC]

-huggles back- And I listened.

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