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StanelyJava — Just Five More Minutes
Published: 2004-02-04 22:12:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 251; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 7
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Description Wrap me in your instability
And hold me in your flaws.
Transform me into a lesser version of myself
With no modesty at all
Let me take in the five minutes of love
Five minutes of your time.
To let me bury your my face into your chest.
Inhale your cologne and pretend everything's sublime
Public Displays of affection
Losing all morals I held close...
But I promise it will only take you five minutes
to get bored and let me go
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Comments: 16

S-m-o-K-e [2004-05-09 17:48:48 +0000 UTC]

I really like this poem. Very touching, and I think everyone deserves 5 more minutes. Funny how so little can mean so much isn't it

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raggy-doll [2004-02-12 22:34:19 +0000 UTC]

awww my dear this is truly beautiful

'But I promise it will only take you five minutes
to get bored and let me go '

I know this to well i just keep reading it
well done dear trluy well done.xoxoxox

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Roobitz [2004-02-08 03:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Crap? Nooo... its a little short, but not crap. It starts to pull at your near the end...

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StanelyJava In reply to Roobitz [2004-02-08 17:46:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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flutter-of-wings [2004-02-05 19:53:48 +0000 UTC]

very well written! all the words i wish i could have said
xxx

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StanelyJava In reply to flutter-of-wings [2004-02-05 20:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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thecozmicfull [2004-02-05 04:38:13 +0000 UTC]

wow thos culd almoste make a uber good song (wishes I culd play a instrament...well I can play the trombone ummm well sorda)(wishes I culd play a COOL instrament) and on a side note is it me or affter I start commenting on peoples stuff do they use the word uber more offten? or am I thinking in to this to much

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StanelyJava In reply to thecozmicfull [2004-02-05 15:15:38 +0000 UTC]

I don't know...My friend Rosalie uses uber to death...>-> I think it's an epadimemic. ...sp?
Anyway...Song? I donno. I don't even like this...
If it was some one else poem..I'd go "ew" > ->
But I guess if it was sang by..o-O Someone who could sing..it'd be cool?
I donno. Thanks for commenting.

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lost-soul-forever [2004-02-05 03:45:40 +0000 UTC]

awwwwww 5 min doesnt seem like a long time but when the 5 mins are up you will want another, unless thats just me!! lol i love this poem its very good!

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StanelyJava In reply to lost-soul-forever [2004-02-05 20:42:30 +0000 UTC]

I don't know?
I might..who knows? All in future.
Anyway! Anything that happens was ment to happen....Fate.
Anything that happens to me..I deserve. Karma.
Thank you!

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polojojo [2004-02-05 02:47:50 +0000 UTC]

-Blinks and tears- I am strong! -sniffles and clings- 5 minutes would be nice... :hugs:

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StanelyJava In reply to polojojo [2004-02-05 20:09:41 +0000 UTC]

Yes you are!
-wipes her tears away-
Yeah..just five minutes. -huggles and clings back-

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Kinala--Shaggy [2004-02-05 00:31:59 +0000 UTC]

thats kinda sad...

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StanelyJava In reply to Kinala--Shaggy [2004-02-05 00:46:31 +0000 UTC]

Sorreh...
Venting..sorta about what we talked in the car.
I didnt go to his match.
Rosalie did.
She's going to tell him everything.
My five minutes are up, because I'm a dramatic bitch.

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allaroundblueartist [2004-02-04 22:28:14 +0000 UTC]

wow................... *tear. if only.... i want my five minutes..... i screwed up any chance of that so far. stupid stupid! *kicks self in head. its a definate fav!

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StanelyJava In reply to allaroundblueartist [2004-02-04 22:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...Just five more minutes..-sighs-
All we're asking for?
Not alot..even though five minutes can seem longer..
Le sigh. Thanks

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