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StanelyJava — To Hate, And Love
Published: 2004-01-08 22:51:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 9
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Porcelain Tanned Manikin Of Fulfilled RageResting In A School Desk To Learn
Hate, Hate, Hate.
All Lost.
Dripping Through Lips That Emotion Had Kissed
Liquid Caught In The Throat
Choke. Choke. Choke.
All Cold.
The Rag doll Enters Falling.
Rest Upon The Lap OF A Fag
Whore. Whore. Whore.
All Sorrow.
Broken Mind Rest In The Nape Of His Neck
A New Age Romeo And Juliet
To Late. To Late. To Late.
All Black.
Stomach Bleeds Onto A Promised Coat
Another Suicide Is Found.
Together, Together, Together.
Death, The Only Way.
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Comments: 9
wow, i REALLY like this poem, very well written. i ADORE this line especially " Dripping Through Lips That Emotion Had Kissed" 
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Oh wow! Thank you so much!!!!!!! 
This poem is one that I wasn't sure I was going to post on Dev.
Comments like these make me glad I did.
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Oh wow! Thank you so much!!!!!!!
This poem is one that I wasn't sure I was going to post on Dev.
Comments lik these make me glad I did.
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no problem ^_^ its an amazing piece
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its so interesting...but not bad. Its just very different. Dreams or small visions are hard to explain sometimes. But I pretty much get what you are expressing here, so thats pretty well done by on your part. *smile*
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Thank you. I still feel like maybe I should revise it though? I'm not happy with parts of it. But I think I should advise most of my poetry. So whatta I know? Lol. Oh well. Thank you for looking at my poetry though! Means alot.
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not a problem at all, I love it when people (like you) read my work!!!
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Crap crap crap. I hardly expect anyone to know what I'm talking..but I wrote this for me...about something I'm going through..or was..something I dreamed....and so much more.
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