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Published: 2003-10-11 02:12:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 106; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description I think this poem is crap..I'm not ever sure it's finished..but I can't finish it now..-slaps self- Crap! -.-
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Comments: 5

Kinala--Shaggy [2003-10-12 23:11:06 +0000 UTC]

Hey-- I likes you poem exspeciallly the ending line. whether you think its finished or not. Your Deep Boo. never lose your inner mind.

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MissStorms [2003-10-12 12:14:16 +0000 UTC]

tut tut, girl, all your poems-so negative! cheer up....it's not a crap poem at all

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StanelyJava In reply to MissStorms [2003-10-12 17:05:44 +0000 UTC]

I one!....Count em one! Happy poem....Isnt that enough? ..Happy ish so hard.....Hey! Your are..not happy too...o.o Eh, I'll make a happy journal entry. ^_^ But first I need to go to your page..o.o

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sto67 In reply to StanelyJava [2003-10-14 13:16:05 +0000 UTC]

happy isnt hard
its a state of mind, and your mind can be tricked
think about it

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dispositioned [2003-10-11 02:24:01 +0000 UTC]

This is really sad... Cheer up! Surely you can make things better for yourself. I think this is very good. You are able to express yourself very well.

And by the way, you can still edit this if you don't think you are satisfied with it. Just go to the little icon of the pencil and paper underneath the image.

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