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Published: 2004-01-27 06:31:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description -=fragile hands clasp around a flask filled with red elixir. Elixir of life for the few like she, timeless creatures. The same liquid that was pumped through every humans heart , slipped through the painted lips, and trickled down the throat. Stopping it her steps, the creature closed it’s eyes, as though to the thick blood. Still slightly warm, due to the fact she had only filled it up...but blood grew cold so quickly...Lowering the flask from her mouth, her hand was placed back at her side. No drops of red were sprinkled across the chin of the girl. None that could be seen behind the thick black hood she wore. Opening her eyes , black gems danced about the surroundings...absorbing each detail carefully.  There wouldn’t be a need to play...not at this moment at least.=-
-=Removing the hood, left the face revealed. Miss Vedette Eglantine’s face was soft...though not flawless. Just under the eyes red, purplish lines were stitched into the pale skin. Under the black eyes, were shadows dark purple fading into pink...then vanishing into white. The same pink could be found in the blush on her cheeks, and a gray color tinted her upper eye lids. Full lips were painted with a rich brown, with red like hues. Those some lips curled into a child like smile. Along waves of auburn flowed down the back to the waist, and gracing the head was a halo of roses...splashed with soft pinks and creams. From the hood Vedette removed the cloak entirely. A wedding dress was shown now...dusty and old. Aged with the time that glimmered in Vedette’s eyes.=-
-=Fitting perfectly as thought she were poured into the dress. The creams of the silk matched the beauty of the roses that graced her head. Pearls and laces decorated the wedding gown, as did dust. It didn’t have the same glow to it has it once had so long ago. Long sleeves were now shorter, and tattered, revealing the red lines of stitching. The skirt though still had it’s trail, and the rims were yellowed with time. Tattered as well...Vedette looked like a young girls doll...one that a grandmother might have owned when she was younger. A child  like sigh left her lips, as she made sure the bell of the skirt swayed with her movements.=-
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Comments: 10

Roobitz [2004-03-01 20:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Ever see Underworld? This reminds me of that movie. I love that movie.

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allaroundblueartist [2004-01-29 16:49:19 +0000 UTC]

its kinda creepy, but i wanna read more. i read the "dont play w/ food" 1st and got confused, so i came back and read this to understand her more. its good. you kinda got me hooked even tho i dont normally read scary stuff like this....(i get scared easily! lol!)

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StanelyJava In reply to allaroundblueartist [2004-01-31 06:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Eh..don't expect anything new for a bit...I'm having problems getting inspired. Maybe if I watch the reruns of Carmen Electra and Dave ( I can't believe I forgot his name) Show Til Death Do Us Part..SOmething will happen..But I wrote don't play with your food during Finding Nemo so go figure.
I'm really glad you like this. Your one of the people who I was worried about not liking it. Because I know you like children..and I wasn't sure how you felt about horror..So..-nods- I didn't want to offend you with Dont play with your food. I'm so glad you like it.
Wee! I'm obessed with Horror. Even if it arises a phobia or two. I've loved it for as long as I can remeber...kinda like coffee. Lol. But when I was really little,like diaper doing. My sister said she, she'd be watching Steven King movies, and I'd just watch the whole thing with her. Never crying or anything....expect for IT. Family Joke oN Mandy. She let me watch it..and the clown went after kids. I now have a servere phobia of clowns. Creepeh...Lol.

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allaroundblueartist In reply to StanelyJava [2004-01-31 14:39:30 +0000 UTC]

lol, ya it was kinda creepy b/c i like little kids, but i mean, it was good. i have seen some horror movies, like darkness falls (but ya know, that is the scariest movie ever b/c it deals w/ my phobia, so it was like way scary!!!!) but im also afraid of vampires. (i had a nightmare when i was little, but it caused an unknown fasination in them....) im the biggest scardy cat i know, but it was great!

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StanelyJava In reply to allaroundblueartist [2004-01-31 20:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Nah..I'm afraid of clowns and water. o-o a scardy cat too in denial-

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thecozmicfull [2004-01-28 04:42:01 +0000 UTC]

wow all thoght out and horribly detailed kinda paranoid affter reading oh the visulization ch im gonna fav you cus all the stuf iv read on your page is uber heh, I like useing that "slang" to the fav button

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StanelyJava In reply to thecozmicfull [2004-01-29 00:25:53 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Bah..This needs a lot of work. New wording but basicaly the same feel. I repeated dusty and tattered a wee bit to much. Varity in words is what I need.
x-x Anway! Thank you for the dev-watch though!!!! I'm glad you like what I write! !!!
Your art's great too. I think I already have you dev-watched?

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thecozmicfull In reply to StanelyJava [2004-01-29 04:50:48 +0000 UTC]

mmm yeah caffin withdraw when that is written ment to say whatch not fav heh my bad

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toxic-scars [2004-01-27 07:40:10 +0000 UTC]

One critisicm: you repeated the term 'child like'. For me, it destroys that wonderful little termination you've got there.

You've done that very well. I didn't want her to look like that, but you've forced a vaguely distressing image of her(I don't know why, it just is). You've pressed her as you see her, no mistakes.

And for the category that this is under, that's good.

I'm just going to check your user page now. Any more of this stuff kicking around?

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StanelyJava In reply to toxic-scars [2004-01-27 20:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Hm, the reason this is a chara intro for roleplay game. I have to type out every little detail of her, so the other players can see what I want her to look like, and see her actions. I have a little habits of repeating..I'll maybe revise this..
Thanks for the comment, and taking the time to read.
Another reason why I made her look how I did, was Vampires are always made graceful..and beautiful. Dead, but still alluring. A vampire is the living dead, the undead. I wanted her to look like that...but in my mind she is still beautiful.

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