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Published: 2003-12-23 23:58:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Virginity Is Split Open Like A WoundAs The Weapon Seeps Into It’s Rightful Spot
Diving Itself Into A Wound That Will Never Heal
But Bleed Far After Death.
With One Decision , Virginity Is Killed
And Mourned Over As Some Do Regret.
An Early Death, For A Dying Breed
Virginity Is Killed With Lust, And Speed.
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Comments: 5
Bundlebee [2004-01-13 19:44:46 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is good. Its short, but true i guess. Well true in some instances
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StanelyJava In reply to t0adsins [2004-01-12 10:35:24 +0000 UTC]
Hmm..Over-rated? I can't say this is my favorite thing I've ever written, but could you explain why you think this is over rated? Im not upset, you stated what you thought. Now I would like to know why you would think that. One word comments are nothing to grow from.
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poundpup [2004-01-06 18:16:30 +0000 UTC]
good descriptive words and just feeling.. nice piece!
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Meranchirie [2003-12-24 15:44:59 +0000 UTC]
o.o;;;; So true..So very true..+Whimpers slightly and gives Java-chan a biggggggg huggie!+ ^-^
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