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Published: 2004-01-24 23:48:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 33
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Description If people say that life is a dream, then whose to say that I am all that I seem? Layers of illusion
you’ll have to cut through, to see me staring at you. The repulsive you, and seemingly death, that has replaced your shadow, that kisses  your neck. Merry laughter, of insanity lies telling you, that you’ll make it by. All life is a dream, a nightmare too. If life is a dream, I wouldn’t like to wake up, would you? Or rather you stay with me, till death do us part. Mocking your shadow, stealing your heart. Ripping your soul from your body, the blood from you vines...Waking up would be the smarter thing
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Comments: 8

shattered-lives02 [2004-04-30 17:19:24 +0000 UTC]

whoa this is amazingly done. pain, sorrow and mayb a hint of love. interestinly put 2gether

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Kinala--Shaggy [2004-01-26 00:24:19 +0000 UTC]

wow..it may be an old poem..but its pretty good I think. Good job on it. (NIFTINESS! ^_^)

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StanelyJava In reply to Kinala--Shaggy [2004-01-26 05:36:55 +0000 UTC]

^_^! Thank you!

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Kinala--Shaggy In reply to StanelyJava [2004-01-27 22:00:57 +0000 UTC]

YOUR WELCOME!!! HAPPY B-DAY!

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StanelyJava In reply to Kinala--Shaggy [2004-01-29 00:22:08 +0000 UTC]

Well, I wish it was a happy one. But thanks. -hugs-

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Kinala--Shaggy In reply to StanelyJava [2004-01-29 00:32:59 +0000 UTC]

*gasp* NO Happy I sowie...(is your sis ok?????) I've got somthing for you anywayz. :hugs: wuv ya

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deadicedj [2004-01-25 14:18:00 +0000 UTC]

anger-makes some of the best poems out there
this one is a prime example. no shame in what ever emotion you use to write.

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shotputtinflirt [2004-01-25 04:10:06 +0000 UTC]

Musta been angry! LOL! I like it.... I am favin this one...

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