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Published: 2012-02-07 01:59:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1222; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 5
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spoilurs, da next poke-rogue is guna be ivyyyIf there's anything horrifically wrong here, feel free to point it out. Redlines always appreciated.
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I felt like it was one of those "spot the difference" games I would play with those stupid magazines I would get when I was a kid....
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Given this is highly stylized things are proportionally correct on the right, assuming you actually draw the hands. The real problem is that unless this bitch is sitting, bitch is gonna fall over. If she's supposed to be actually standing you need to reposition the weight so she's solidly standing on the "ground". Basically just drop a line down from the suprasternal notch or chin straight down and that's where all the strain from gravity and balance will be.
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Bitch is sitting, haha
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Good, then bitch won't fall over.
But should exaggerate tension in the sitting pose.
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I love how you refer to Ivy XD
"unless this bitch is sitting, bitch is gonna fall over"
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All my ladies be bitches.
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This entire thing needs to be redlined. It's hideous.
You cant anatomy.
AT ALL.
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Well, I think the butt is a bit pointy, so it looks like there are no hips. Other thank that, it looks pretty nice! I like that way you did her chest (boobs) c:
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flip the image and you'll see that the left eye might need to be bigger
maybe
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A miniscule amount, but it still looks better now, haha
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Nope, I'd say everything is spot-on. It's like I'm looking at a photograph.
But if you're really asking for critique...hm...her left arm's perspective is a bit off, check the angle at which it's coming from the shoulder and also the bend in the elbow; her right arm looks a little odd perspective-wise as well, I think it's too far forward; her legs almost seem too long for her body and, again, the perspective of the one behind seems off.
Uh.
I'm sorry for sounding pretentious.
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This would be helpful, if I had an example of what would be not-wrong for the arms
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Did you look at yourself in a mirror or use a reference photo?
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I still think the feet are a little small. Feet are as long as your forearm.
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What the hell?! *compares my feet to my forearm*
Oh my God OnO
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hhahaha isnt that bizarre?
i had to test it myself too when i heard about <:
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Oh yeah, I've never been very good at titties. Is that better? ^
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I don't know if it's just me, but her feet seem a little small.
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Time to rip its clothes off and make sweet love to it-
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I would say something about the elbows, but she doesn't appear to really have any which I suppose is okay hahaa.
Looks great, though! I like how you did the hair and face and all
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I'd agree with the elbow thing-- not only include the crook (rather than having noodle arms), but also include the elbow itself. Also, perhaps, make the shoulders a little more known? Like round them out. I wish I could redline, but my tablet pen doesn't work and I don't have a mouse orz Also, I hope this isn't picking on you because this is a sketch, perhaps include the collar bone? Unless you'll do that through shading. Either way. One more thing, I don't know if she's like half-sitting or what, but her thighs look a bit short, compared to like...the second half of her legs. Yeah. I could probably get you a picture or two to show you what I mean...idk. Sorry orz /bad at explaining. Also her mouth/nose looks a bit high. Again, if that's perspective, then ignore me.
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