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Published: 2005-12-02 14:53:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 790; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 42
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What I did was justified. I don’t expect you to believe me. You’re all alike. So high and mighty, in control of your world with its norms and laws. You high and mighty people CREATED me. You call me evil for what I’ve done. You say I’ve killed for no reason. It was wrong. What justifies taking someone off the street and using him as a science experiment? Isn’t that wrong too?No, no, I see— you’re above your rules and laws. So then am I. A monster, psychopath, homicidal maniac—that’s what you people call me. But I can see, oho, I can see— you, my dear creators, are the monsters.
You have given me eternal pain. A hollow ache in my chest that will always exist. Emotions. I can sense them now. Your FEAR. I savor your PAIN. When I kill you your pain, for a moment, echoes my own. Funny… for although as many times as I have killed it’s never enough. I need more. You will all pay for what you’ve done to me. From mech to smallest child. Revenge… Sure… if that’s what you want to call it…
Yes, yes, go on and run if you must! But you can’t escape my face of terror…
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The passage is something I wrote for creative writing class. We had to write something with an "unreliable narrator".... I used one pic from Beast Wars International, one screenshot from transformersforever.com, and my Rampage toy for reference.
I started him at the beginning of this week cuz I wasn't doing too well and I needed a distraction. Over 6 hours must have been spent on him.... I found it extremely ironic that all I wanted to do was
But there are a TON of mistakes and goof-ups everywhere....
Rampage:
Star:
Rampage:
Star:
Rampage: Ha! Sounds like a good idea! *wanders off*
Star: Just don't kill anyone, and YES, heart attacks COUNT!
Rampage: ..... Slag...
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Comments: 20
bioniclemaidenofligh [2012-05-19 15:05:01 +0000 UTC]
Effie thinking* Rampage=crab crab=sushi sushi=dinner*
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Aeroblade [2007-01-17 00:16:17 +0000 UTC]
shit i thought I faved this...oh well *favs anyhow*
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Night-Blizzard [2006-12-27 13:00:21 +0000 UTC]
This is so BADASS! He was (and still is) my favorite transformer in Beast Wars! I was very pissed when he died
, 'cause all my favorite 'cartoon' characters always end up dieing (ex. Starscream, Naraku, Sidways) the only one that has managed not to be affected by the curse of 'death' was Sesshomaru....and i still have my worry that even he wont
ANYWAY
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Starath In reply to Night-Blizzard [2006-12-27 20:10:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I didn't know I could make anything "badass" lol...
And yeah, I didn't like it when he died either. To me he's one who must live on, since he represents the dark side of humanity and stuff like that... It's all in my fics... >_>
Anyways, YAY for da scary crab!
And thankies for the comment and fav!
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Psychos-Girl [2006-09-05 14:06:57 +0000 UTC]
RAMMY! Sorry. Big Rampage fan....hehehehe....*Glomps the bot*
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HteadMai [2005-12-18 19:21:24 +0000 UTC]
OMGoodness!!! *Hides under bed* That is so awsomely scary....Cool.
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Lady-Of-Ice-Chaos [2005-12-04 02:06:11 +0000 UTC]
O_o
o_0
O__O;;
holy slag Starath you're going to give us a run for our money if you keep popping things as good as this out......*looks at her next Rampae pic* o.0
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Starath In reply to Lady-Of-Ice-Chaos [2005-12-05 14:31:48 +0000 UTC]
Thankies much, Omie. That means a lot to me cuz all I can see are the mistakes in this pic.
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O-O-P [2005-12-03 03:57:17 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, Starath! You rock! ...Hm. Why does everyone draw Rampage with a head-on view? LoL Even I find myself doing that. I need to draw more Tfs. I'm deprived.
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Starath In reply to O-O-P [2005-12-05 14:31:09 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... perhaps people draw him face-on cuz he's more terrifying that way? Or more likely, the guy is so hard to draw that the front-view is the easiest one to do....
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SilSolo [2005-12-03 02:51:09 +0000 UTC]
I like the way you shade. I think I've just lost my taste for seafood... no wait, all of my taste for meat of any kind is still in that Zoology classroom.
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-karen- [2005-12-03 01:16:49 +0000 UTC]
That is so awesome. O_O I love the shading!
... I should draw some more BW fanart.
This is going in the favorites!
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Sapph-Fire [2005-12-02 20:36:45 +0000 UTC]
That's excellent, Starath! Really, really good! I love it! *squee*!
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Tainted-Petals [2005-12-02 19:29:54 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap that's a great Rampage pic!! So freakin' realistic! Gah! *drools*
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Darkshadow14 [2005-12-02 16:44:58 +0000 UTC]
WOW!? Awesome Starath, that's going in my favorites! *Huggles Rampy*
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UltraMatt [2005-12-02 15:30:40 +0000 UTC]
now I'm hungry for seafood....
great job though ^_^ always wonderful! keep up the great work!
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