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starg691 β Out Cold
Published: 2013-04-29 15:25:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 4211; Favourites: 232; Downloads: 0
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Where do I go now?The doors are closed, the windows locked,
the night is falling and I got no direction.
But there's a certain kind of freedom to this solitude
The raindrops on my skin awake my pores
The wind in my face defog my brain
The coldness in the air burned my skin alive...
Theme 98/100 - Out Cold
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My first impact is a very positive one! The colours you chose are great and I love the sharpness of the drops and the blurred part at the right! So I have to give you five stars regarding to the technique!
The only thing that disrupts a bit is the white beam at the left...it gives the feeling of a window but still I would have considered not to include..in my opinion it doesn't fit to the rest of the pic, but that's just my taste e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
I also like the poem you wrote under the pic, which adds a lot to the overall feeling the photo gives!
Regarding to the group, the concept is maybe not a 100% visible so maybe you create a stronger one the next time. All in all I have to say it is a great picture which deserves a lot of views!
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Featured in my "PICTURES AT AN EXHIBITION 2014 - PART II" - I hope you like it...
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*bizarrely late, but THANKS for your words!
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Out cold.....But so much warmth in your heart...
The beauty behind the cold raindrops on glass---Wonderful image..
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate all of your support!
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And you're welcome for welcoming me...mmhh that sounds so confusing in english... but yay!
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awwwww thank you so very very much!! 
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thank you! I appreciate your words 
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I really like this one, the rain on glass and the coloring! And the model too of course as well
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Thanks! It was pretty hard to get this one, so i'm happy you appreciate it!
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I do appreciate all the work you do to make these very cool and very lovely shots!
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love the emotion in this shot. It's captured so perfectly
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Thank you so very much
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