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The art is very lovely. As for the writing, the last line is uber cliche and doesn't give your character much definition or voice compared to the hundreds of others like him. On a page like this you can really define a characters, but nothing gave the reader an imagine or feeling of who your character is. The art is a hooke, it's really wonderful and high quality--I would reword the script.
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Thanks for the thoughts. However, I don't really have too much say as far as the writing. I illustrate the book for Superhuman Experiment. I'll pass it on. Thanks for the art comments.
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