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TW: physical and emotional abuse
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Welcome to the Miracleverse! AKA, the Disliked Ships AU, but I don't use this as a platform for hate. While the universe is slightly... twisted, they are all options that could have happened in the main TFIMverse. They're a chance to do things with the... standard ships that people have, and using them in new ways, as well as a platform for interesting characters. I want to do some different things with the designs, so I may note the standard designs I tried to avoid with each design. These designs have been done for... an embarrassing amount of time, so expect a lot of the designs at once, I finally decided to upload them. But, since this is a canon character, and I did it today and yesterday, that doesn't quite apply. So instead of 'what I did different' with their children, I'll explain my design choices for each of them!
Zephyr Breeze is the father of Angelica Glauca, Evenkite Pie and Misty Mizzle , with Saffron Masala, Limestone Pie, and Rainbow Dash. He is married to Limestone Pie
Zephyr's whole look hasn't changed from his design in canon, and this was highly intentional; he's not changed much since he was in canon. His hair comes from when he tried to 'make it on his own' in the wilderness, as is the stubble, and his tail is from when Rainbow Dash zapped the heck out of him. All in all, he's pretty much the same pony we met back in 'Flutter Brutter' in more ways than appearance.... well, if we had met him in 'Flutter Brutter'... because, remember, 'Flutter Brutter' came after 'The Crystalling'.... which means, it never happened... or at least, didn't happen the same way as in canon.
In this case, it didn't happen at all; Fluttershy never decided to go ahead and say hi to her parents that day, everyone was too busy. So Zephyr continued his cycle; the cycle of living with his parents, only to end up choosing a brand new 'calling' that he'd 'been destined to do his whole life' and... well, the cycle continued for years, just like it always did.
And one time, around 17-18 years ago, his 'true calling' was to be a chef, and, well.. the only restaurant willing to hire him was a restaurant that was only just getting back on its hooves after the death of Zesty Gourmand (Don't worry, it was of old age/natural causes, she's a lot older than she looks and yes that's saying something/possibly aided by malnutrition that comes from exclusively eating only one subset of foods prepared to an exacting standard and not very much of it) that kind of released the entirety of Canterlot from her strange standards of what is 'good'.
He joined the team, while the mare who now ran the place took care of her aging father, (who insisted on still helping in some way but old people taste buds aren't as good but he'll be damned if he quits just because he's getting a bit old.) hired many other ponies, Zephyr stood out from the crowd... not because of any talent, far from it; he was pretty mediocre, but by personality. A smooth talking 'artistic' type...
Saffron Masala may have fallen a bit hard; not entirely out of her rebellious teenage phase (even if she was well into her 20's), even though her father said that it was definitely a bad idea; no guy with that attitude is up to anything other than no good. But Saffron didn't listen, and... well, Zephyr admitted, she sure wasn't Rainbow Dash, but she certainly was exotic. (Yes, I did feel gross writing that) And that excited him. So they had a whirlwind fling of a romance, but... well, as always, his 'free spirit' called him to another job, leaving her in the dirt.
He went back to his parents for a continuation in the cycle, his parents still not able to say no to him, and his next calling came and went, but when his calling went and he returned home to begin the cycle again... well, there was a basket at the door. A basket and a very angry mare with a foal in said basket who had gone around looking for Zephyr Breeze, finally tracking him down... and a VERY VERY angry older sister, who was the one to help Saffron find him.
He was... not in for a good time. Fluttershy hadn't exactly kept up with her deadbeat brother, having more important things to do with her life than keep tabs on him; it wasn't her job to fix his life. Maybe if she didn't have the obligations she did, but no. If her parents weren't willing to stand up to him, they had to live with it. But this?... This was different. Saffron was just a mare that had the bad luck of knowing Zephyr, she was the one abandoned... and the foal he had inadvertently brought into the world, too. Zephyr had failed in such a major way she had to step in. And so did She . Zephyr Breeze done fucked up.
Saffron Masala was unable to run her restaurant and take care of her father while raising a foal, and she didn't have faith in the Equestrian adoption system to take care of her foal. So Zephyr Breeze would have to take care of their daughter, whether he wanted to or not, damnit.
She could send them money if she had to, that she had plenty of, but she couldn't spare the emotional energy and attention... perhaps she was naive to think Zephyr would, but she had made her decision, and Fluttershy very much supported this decision. And after being chewed out by both his sister and her alter (in varying levels of intensity), he had little choice but to agree to it. Fluttershy stayed at her parents (and Zephyr's) house and gave up a not insignificant amount of her time making sure Zephyr wouldn't accidentally kill his unicorn daughter or fuck up in major ways before returning to her own child and her own life, hoping for the best.
The best wasn't much, but Zephyr did keep checking up on Fluttershy (mostly to ask 'WHAT DO WITH BABY HOW TO BABY') to make sure he wasn't screwing up... but most of the time, it fell to his parents to be their granddaughter's caretakers, which they did, because.. well, they were really, really quite pushovers. They may have been getting on in years* and not as spry as they once were (being retirees by the time of canon and all), but they did their best and took care of Angelica when her father was... busy. After all, he couldn't take care of a daughter if he didn't have a job, and he swore he was gonna get it this time, this is really his true calling!.. It never really was, or it never would be, not as if he tried hard, but at least he tried?
About 10-11 years before Miracleverse canon, Zephyr Breeze was visiting his sister for his bi-annual 'HOW DOES I CHILD???' checkup when he found Rainbow Dash already there, seeking counsel from his sister too.. it was, an opportune moment, let's just say. A very opportune moment. You see, Rainbow Dash was having marital issues... how convenient~. Rainbow Dash was not only frustrated by her husband's lack of drive in pushing himself with the Wonderbolts training, but also feeling... unfulfilled, in a way that Zephyr definitely could help her with. *eyebrow waggle*
She resisted, but she felt very angry at her husband, and figured that she could get back at him in her own way by being with Zephyr; if Soarin' couldn't fulfill her needs, somepony else could, and if Soarin was so inadequate that Zephyr Breeze could fulfill them, all the better... It was a form of revenge just as much as desire, but Zephyr didn't care. He'd had a crush on her for his whole life, and finally he had the chance to do what he had only dreamed of for years; be with Rainbow Dash.
She left and refused to acknowledge it ever happened, and when Fluttershy found out... well, Zephyr had already heard that talk. And when Misty Mizzle was born, he expected a repeat of Angelica's birth, but instead, nothing happened. Rainbow Dash had decided to hide their relationship on her side. He had no responsibility to take care of another child.
But that's skipping what had already happened; he had a girlfriend again, just after Rainbow Dash and Zephyr had been together, before Misty was even born, two months after that, Sprinkle Pie (that was her name, right?) was holding Rainbow Dash's baby shower, and invited everyone, even relatives. That's when he found out Rainbow had decided to not let Soarin know the foal wasn't his (she took him aside and threatened to geld him if he ever said anything, to be specific).
But that's when he met her. The beautiful sister of Sprinkle Pie; Limestone. The damn sexiest girl he'd ever seen. Toned, strong, everything he loved about Rainbow Dash, playing hard to get, tough, rough, smart... she was the complete package. And she'd never met him before (strangely, that seemed to limit his dating options if ponies had heard of him... I wonder why?..), so it worked out even better. Plus, maybe this 'rock farming' thing was his calling?.... I mean, it's not like rocks could be particularly hard to farm, right?
So he took Angelica with him this time, since Limestone seemed to find 'responsible' stallions attractive, and when she heard he was a single father, she go the (VERY WRONG) idea that he would be one. So he moved in with Limestone, and... well, he definitely didn't regret some things, (the sex), it was harder than he ever could have imagined.. especially since her parents had this insane idea that he was going to marry her and settle down??? And so did Limestone?.... he may have bitten off more than he could chew. And while Pegmatite Pie, Limestone's other child didn't require raising (already an adult), she was happy to have a dad for the first time.. he was screwed.
And then Limestone said she was pregnant. And by this point, she had an idea of what Zephyr was like with responsibilities, so she made an ultimatum; they were going to be married, and if he so much as thought of leaving, she would break his wings in half and then rip them off. And suddenly, the fact that she was into wingplay and wing-restraints in the bedroom became... sinister.
One night after they had their fun, she 'forgot' to take off the restraints, and the magic they had (made for the fun) made it only come off when the dominant player said the safe word (they recalled this model soon, after realizing they had made a mistake with which party said the safe word, but not before Limestone bought one).... He couldn't fly away. And so he was grounded.
And that attitude she had that he had found so sexy... turned out to not be so fun in the long run. She was rough, nasty and demanding of things that he simply wasn't capable of doing, even if he wasn't a deadbeat, and she wasn't afraid to punish him for failure.. and not in the fun way. But he still found her incredibly attractive, even if (or even because) of this... and eventually, he gave up on escaping... at least the other ponies in the family would be able to take care of their kids instead of him?... it wasn't so bad... it's not that bad.
Evenkite was born healthy, and Zephyr hoped that meant she would finally let his wings go.. but as you can see, that never happened. He's honestly forgotten he has them, sometimes. And sure, she takes them off for 'play', but he doesn't have the will left to fight it, and it's the only time he gets to feel his atrophied wings, so he loves that. It feels good. Or.. it feels. And that's good, right?... Zephyr made his bed and is lying in it... but is that entirely right?
In the end, Zephyr Breeze is just a child, mentally.. at least, in some ways. With parents that never disciplined him, that never stopped him, that coddled him every day, accepted his failure, never pushing him to do anything or overcome any adversity... When he failed, they would comfort him, encourage him, but never push him to keep trying even though he failed, if he failed, it was ok... he didn't have to try. So he grew up with no idea how to work; he just isn't emotionally capable of work because he just couldn't understand that failure isn't some kind of permanent sign that you should give up. If you're not good at something, you can't get better. He's never gotten better at anything in his life, and his cutie mark is a fluke, a meaningless one, since he doesn't have a clue what it's for or what it means. Fluttershy likely only managed to escape his fate by being adopted (See this ) and having lived 7 years with parents that encouraged her to continue and keep pushing herself. Zephyr... was damned from the start. That doesn't mean that he's not responsible for his own actions; you always have a choice, you can always be better, and he had many chances to turn himself around... he just never did, and that's on him. But he certainly didn't have much of a chance on his own. In canon, he was lucky to have Fluttershy take pity on him and help him learn how to survive on his own, but without it.. he shares my uncle's fate.. just without alcohol.
*As I explained in Spike's description, ponies live longer than humans, but what I didn't mention is that Pegasi are on average the least long lived of all ponies, while Unicorns live to around 120-150 on average and Earth Ponies can live up to 200 years if they're very lucky, with 150-180 being their average lifespan, Pegasi live up to 100-120 years old, meaning that Fluttershy's parents (who are around 60-65 in my headcanon in canon) would be 69-74 when Angelica was born.
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bronybyexception In reply to StarryOak [2024-12-25 03:21:38 +0000 UTC]
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StarryOak In reply to bronybyexception [2024-12-25 17:17:10 +0000 UTC]
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Viist [2019-06-30 16:25:06 +0000 UTC]
Going back to this one too, is this like, a crime? Could Limestone go to jail if someone figured out what she was doing? Cuz it really does feelk like a crime. Or well, it merits like, a restraining order... I just don't think Limestone should get off scotch free from this
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StarryOak In reply to Viist [2019-07-02 07:14:01 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, it is. I havent forgotten to give her just desserts either.
i feel really bad about just not being able to work on this. For some reason, I’ve lost the will to art. I’ve never really felt like this before, and it’s not even ‘I have no ideas’ or ‘I just don’t feel like drawing THIS”, it’s any art at all. I’ve never felt like this for so long, either. I’ve been making steps towards making it happen recently and it’s doing better, I guess, but it’s still... hard.
I know I’d choose my continued happiness over making myself miserable doing this, though, even if it’d make me sad to give up.
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Viist In reply to StarryOak [2019-07-02 18:04:42 +0000 UTC]
I mean, as you said, you don't have to force yourself to do anything you don't want to do, especially if trying to do so would make you miserable. If anything I'm really glad you've been feeling great lately
I apologize if my comments made you feel pressured, I just like re-reading the story and I like commenting little things
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StarryOak In reply to Viist [2019-07-02 18:49:19 +0000 UTC]
I’m not forcing myself, don’t worry ^-^. I just have a bunch of ideas I’d love to do if I could only get my muse to stop being so fickle, so getting even the littlest things done is nice.
Also, don’t worry about pressuring me either, I love knowing people still read my stories! The only time I ever stopped enjoying getting responses was when that one person started harassing me to continue The Peanut Gallery. I’d love to get feedback on that again if it wasn’t just ‘please update’. That one is the only one I’ve abandoned completely for personal reasons with no hope of return. Well, that and the other thing but I’m not gonna talk about that.
Also, even if I ever gave up on this, I’d absolutely release all the pre-made content I’ve done and I already have everything planned out, so at least it’d never be a ‘what was going to happen? It ended on a cliffhanger!’ situation
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Viist In reply to StarryOak [2019-07-02 19:09:57 +0000 UTC]
Oh! That's great to know. (Apart from the weird stalker from the Peanut Gallery of course)
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StarryOak In reply to Viist [2019-07-02 19:24:01 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Right now I'm deciding on who should voice Misty Mizzle in the Voice Actor meme I'm working on. I've got most of the Mane cast down, though.
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Viist In reply to StarryOak [2019-07-02 19:53:26 +0000 UTC]
That sounds cool, personally I've always sucked at describing
the voices of my oc's lmao
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StarryOak In reply to Viist [2019-07-02 20:05:06 +0000 UTC]
I’m having trouble cause I got Miracle’s down so easily, but Misty’s a hard character to pin down voice wise cause she’s so quiet.
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prometheushunter2 [2019-05-18 21:43:45 +0000 UTC]
Is it weird that I want to blow his brains out just to bring him some peace
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StarryOak In reply to prometheushunter2 [2019-05-18 23:04:24 +0000 UTC]
A little extreme, but not exactly weird
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prometheushunter2 In reply to StarryOak [2019-05-20 01:46:00 +0000 UTC]
People have told me I have a tendency to be “extreme” , I prefer to think I’m unrestrained and direct
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StarryOak In reply to prometheushunter2 [2019-05-20 02:18:48 +0000 UTC]
Well, I have to agree, shooting him would be extremely unrestrained and direct
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DaemonBomb-Inc [2019-05-04 08:46:05 +0000 UTC]
Hey... Zephyr, uh don't take this wrong way.... But you look like sh!t
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PurpleWonderPower [2018-09-06 16:02:11 +0000 UTC]
Gotta admit, he doesn't look quite so handsome like that.
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Miss-Barker [2018-04-12 14:14:18 +0000 UTC]
*reads the tumblr post*
Sounds like you have a very interesting family.
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StarryOak In reply to Miss-Barker [2018-04-13 01:33:13 +0000 UTC]
Yep. Why i headcanon flutters and zephyr as native american adopted by white as fuck parents
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MightyMewtron [2018-04-08 04:46:56 +0000 UTC]
i love zephyr as a character (probably in the minority on that?) and i love this tragedy.
random weird curiosity though, what was their safe word?
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StarryOak In reply to MightyMewtron [2018-04-08 06:21:06 +0000 UTC]
Clastic Rock
i believe any attempt at saying it by Zephyr would likely be 'classic rock' so even if he could he would mispronounce it.
I like Zephyr in a different way and already view him as a tragedy so... you know.
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Pandoramouse In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-28 00:28:35 +0000 UTC]
Hopefully Pinkie might visit with or without her family and notice something is amiss.
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Pandoramouse In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-28 01:32:27 +0000 UTC]
Honestly I think Fluttershy made a REALLY bad choice on forcing Zephyr to take care of his baby. Not only did he not mean to have one, why force someone who clearly doesnt want children and has no experience to raise one?! That`s just terrible for the child, growing up with a parent who sucks ass at parenting, doesnt actually want them, what if the kid somehow died due to mistake, neglect, or god forbid since I`m sure Zephyr is above this, abuse! I know she was trying to hold him responsible, but why not make him actually get a job and pay child support?!
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StarryOak In reply to Pandoramouse [2017-10-28 01:42:36 +0000 UTC]
She definitely did, but Saffron couldn't afford the time or energy to take care of Angelica and was afraid to give her up for adoption because she wasn't sure it would be a safe place for her foal. Perhaps that was a bad choice as well, but also not something she could forsee.
She had a bit more faith and hope in him that perhaps he could do better; she stayed for months to make sure he could take care of her, and she hoped that was enough; she made the wrong choice too, but it was in hope that he could be better. But it's also not her job to fix his mistakes. She's not responsible for his actions in the end; to force him to get a job would to be taking his life out of his hooves again and monitoring him, as if she didn't have a daughter of her own and her own life to deal with.
Unfortunately, it's not just as simple as one solution like that. Everyone has a choice, no one has the foresight to predict everything, and no one can be expected to hold another person's hand throughout their life at the forfeit of their own.
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Pandoramouse In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-28 01:55:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh of course I can see where Fluttershy was coming from, but a baby is not a 'get your shit together' thing, it`s a 'I aready have my shit together' thing. And by having an accidental baby and then being forced to take care of it, she is kind of taking his life out of his hooves.
I actually really want Zephyr to get out of his situation and be happy, get his life together and start over, he has a chance once he`s freed from his abuser, what if he goes under the witness protection program or something? Like shit man what if he became a seapony that`d be funny as hell but also, kinda sweet.
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StarryOak In reply to Pandoramouse [2017-10-28 02:57:33 +0000 UTC]
It's just a matter of ponies being... well, people. They're for lack of a better word, 'human'. They fuck up in situations just like we do; usually though, they have more trust in others than we do. They expect better from each other than we ever would... and it's only recently that they've been wrong. Fluttershy fucked up because she was seeing this from the perspective of someone who has put up with Zephyr's shit all her life, someone who has seen potential, but also nothing but dodging responsibilities and never paying up, she was seeing this as a situation where a mare was taken advantage of and a time to finally have Zephyr take responsibility, but also someone who has a life of her own who can't be expected to be her brother's keeper. She stayed with him for a month or two just to make sure he wouldn't fuck up beyond belief, and hoped that he and their parents would be enough. They weren't. But that's not all her fault.
Saffron fucked up by assuming that Zephyr was even capable of being the father or taking care of her daughter, not for being unable to care for her child, and also somewhat for being unwilling to put her child through the adoption process, partially because where she came from, adoption systems were... less than good, even if main Equestria has a better system, she would not know that firsthoof, nor would it necessarily be up to the standards she unwittingly was holding Zephyr to, believing that growing up with a father was the most important thing (being raised solely by her father)
Zephyr fucked up...well, it's obvious how.
I want him out too, but it's a mixture of faults.
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Pandoramouse In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-28 11:37:27 +0000 UTC]
And I think it's going to take a mixture of rights to fix things.
and by rights I mean Pinkie Pie.
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Pandoramouse In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-28 19:10:49 +0000 UTC]
Or like the rights against abuse being put into action.
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StarryOak In reply to Pandoramouse [2017-10-28 19:12:21 +0000 UTC]
There are, just nobody knows.
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Pandoramouse In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-28 19:22:32 +0000 UTC]
I figured. Do the other members on the farm know?
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StarryOak In reply to Pandoramouse [2017-10-29 06:07:39 +0000 UTC]
Only one, and she's too young to speak out/doesn't know how to.
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Vennyriz22 [2017-10-24 19:44:30 +0000 UTC]
It's pitiful to even look at him. But in all honesty, the way you described the relationship between Zephyr Breeze and Limestone makes it pinpoint accurate (That's the terrifying part)
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StarryOak In reply to Vennyriz22 [2017-10-24 19:46:10 +0000 UTC]
And that's what I was going for.
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Nautilus18 In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-25 07:13:19 +0000 UTC]
Will Rainbow ever admit to Soarin that he isn't Misty Mizzle's father, or will he find that out on his own?
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Nautilus18 In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-27 20:29:20 +0000 UTC]
Damn you and your vague answers.
Translation-I can't wait and love this storyline.
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StarryOak In reply to Nautilus18 [2017-10-27 20:32:28 +0000 UTC]
I know~ I love me too when I get all vague and evil about them.
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Nautilus18 In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-27 20:34:43 +0000 UTC]
I said I love the storyline, not when you of this, someone has to stop you.
'Pulls out foam sword'
And that will be me.
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StarryOak In reply to Nautilus18 [2017-10-27 20:35:44 +0000 UTC]
MWAHAHAHAHAHA
FOOLISH MORTAL
ASSUMING ONE CAN TAKE DOWN SUCH A POWERFUL MISTRESS SUCH AS I?
BRING YOUR WORST, THY FOUL WHELP.
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Nautilus18 In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-27 20:36:46 +0000 UTC]
IT IS ON, prepare for your despise.
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StarryOak In reply to Nautilus18 [2017-10-27 20:48:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh, yes, I already despise you!
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Nautilus18 In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-27 20:50:15 +0000 UTC]
By the way how is everything.
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Nautilus18 In reply to StarryOak [2017-10-27 20:59:29 +0000 UTC]
Me too,
This just popped into my head but how much does Twilight actually sleep in the Miracleverse since she seem to always be writing letters and hovering over her child.
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