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Long ago, before the time of nightmare moon, and the world was untamed and the everfree forest covered most of the world, a horrible tragedy unfolded, a tale of much blood, and a tale of lost hope. The story begins at the dawn of a new day, raised by Celestia slowly, as the light poured over the world, shining light on everything, chasing away the last remnants of slumber, the world awoke to what appeared to be yet another day. One pony though, had been watching the sun since the first rays of light touched the earth. She was a beautiful mare with lavender eyes dull and listless, her mane a deep forest viridian and her pelt a bright grassy green. Her eyes belied the hatred and depression behind them, the mare a shell of what she should be as a young pony. Instead of the bright face and cheery smiles her pony brethren shared, her face was cold like a stone. As she watched the sun rise, her eyes narrowed, thinking of the Alicorn who raised it. Celestia. That name haunted her every day she heard it. The goddess who ruled this world. The goddess who had forced the world under her grasp. The mare wished there was another way, another path she could take, leaving behind her the blind sheep that Celestia led. As these thoughts swirled in her head, another figure materialized behind her, at first an outline, and then a shadow, and finally a pale visage of a tall earth pony mare, the mares eyes pure red, her body slim and tall, yet for all its beauty, there was something off. “I know what you want, Three leaf.” It smiled, its sharp teeth glistening. To be continued...-----------------
This is a crappy story explaining the origins of sunnytown, the main setting in the wonderfully creepy game story of the blanks. Now I know its a pile of shit.. But its my pile of shit. I plan to add more to this part before the next so it doest suck ass as much as it does now EDIT: Those who care about my crappy story, good news, part two will soon be out!
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Comments: 16
Vuldari [2011-09-03 04:29:52 +0000 UTC]
Hunh ...
After playing "Story of the Blanks", and getting a grasp on the vague details of the story, my mind immediately began to form ideas for the ORIGIN story to the whole thing.
Surprisingly, based on the little bit of your interpretation you have shared so far, it seems our ideas are (almost) identical so far ... though my thoughts focus more around Gray Hoof than Three Leaf.
Regardless of your unenthusiastic appraisal of your own work thus far, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
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StarryOak In reply to Vuldari [2011-09-03 04:34:52 +0000 UTC]
Maybe we should bounce ideas off eachother so I can get up off me fat ass
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Donitz [2011-07-14 22:28:47 +0000 UTC]
Intriguing start. Looking forward to the next part!
And a really nice image too
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weirdnwild91 [2011-07-14 07:08:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's one nice way to start out the story. c8
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StarryOak In reply to weirdnwild91 [2011-07-14 11:35:37 +0000 UTC]
Im going to update the story a bit, it needs a little rewriting. But thanks a lot
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DrawDrawJessi [2011-07-13 16:04:56 +0000 UTC]
AWWW thats a realy nice picture you've got.
Great work.
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StarryOak In reply to DrawDrawJessi [2011-07-13 18:32:18 +0000 UTC]
Dont worry, the story will look better than it does now
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DrawDrawJessi In reply to StarryOak [2011-07-13 19:20:28 +0000 UTC]
OOOOOOO hope it goes well
Oh hey
Are you gonna do the story on de Blob, Arty, and my offspring OCS ----> [link] ?
If not thats fine by me.
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StarryOak In reply to DrawDrawJessi [2011-07-13 19:30:28 +0000 UTC]
Yes, but its a comic that is the whole blob story, and the epilough comicwill have the triplets
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StarryOak In reply to DrawDrawJessi [2011-07-14 00:19:37 +0000 UTC]
i hope. Itll be a mix between my style and the lineart style of sonic battle
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