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An original story.Title: Castle in the Light of Hyiero.
Chapter 2: "The Final Battle"
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hmmm...funky colors...
Page summary:
Looks like that Leian dude is about to get his ass handed to him...Receio (one of the main characters) makes his debut into the fight...
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very cool action lines, your lighting is really getting good
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yes ma'am he's been working out...you gotta be in tip top shape to kick a Leian's butt...
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Your effects are pretty badass, motion lines too. Good job.
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thank ya's 
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I know how that is. I'm having the hardest time just trying to get my second page done. I'm just no good at drawing shit get smashed up is all!
Sure, I'll give it a go.
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the effects of energy are increasingly perfect
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my pleasure buddy...great work
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woo hoo.. thanks
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me neither! very addictive, finding a new story that is! ^^
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woooaah! those effects look amazing!! O.o
how the heck do u make the "whoosh" and "waaah"'s?
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haha whoosh and waaahs? i think every effect here was done with one brush but different opacities, flow, and sizes... i think its called a dry brush (i renamed it so i dont remember exactly)... when ur looking at all the brushes to pick, it looks like a a bunch of dots forming a cirlce, its not a sold shape...and also adding "curves" and "levels"...im figuring it all out as i go...im actually not disappointed in how it turned out this time
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it turned out relly good
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so how do i say thank you in norwegian? not like the old proper people though..like everyday use..
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'takk'.. or if you are really thankful, u can say 'tusen takk' ^^
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'TUSEN TAAAAAAAAAKK
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haha i almost said "TAKK" as a sound effect on this page...in the 3rd panel i wrote TAK but at first there were 2 K's... i just changed my mind...
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I use photoshop cs4..cs3 will do the same also 
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I need cs3....badly....hmm after i buy meh guitar... I really do lov it
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haha before i got cs3 i got a guitar too... great minds think alike!!!!
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Haha I just really need that guitar... i do kno some1 who mite be able to find cs3 for free tht mite work i'll ask him
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Looks cool!
I think what you need to work on most is making it more clear what's going on. After the first panel I kind of get lost in the action. I'm not quite sure how to help fix it, but I think that's the issue there- most of the drawings are almost completely obscured by the effects. If you don't want to rework this page, try toning them down a bit on future pages so you can see what's underneath.
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thanks for the advise...yeah im gonna keep it in mind for future pages..i kinda had that issue on page 4 also but it was more intentional...trying to make it look intense somehow turns into confusion with me haha... im still learning to use effects now....thanks dude...
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No problem! Just keep experimenting with them and you'll get it down. The figures are all pretty dynamic already, so you're a good way along!
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Only just started reading this but I think its totally awesome! keep up the great work!
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