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step-into-darkness — CLH chapter 1:Genesis. + Cover
Published: 2010-01-17 07:39:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 6322; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 83
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Original story titled: Castle in the Light of Hyiero.Chapter 1: "Genesis"
Chapter 2 part 1: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 3 part 2: [link]
Dont be surprised if my characters change their design out of nowhere...none of them are written in stone, so u may see things change about them halfway through a chapter or something, who knows... and from page 1 to page 10 u can see i improved, but im not gonna go back and fix anything...i wanna track my improvements along the way....
An action packed Chapter 2 is on the way... We're gonna see some kick ass fight scenes...
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this part is really good, now i'm going to get addicted
i really liked it
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i dont know if u saw the link to chapter 2's first page in artist comments...its there..i did the first and second page for chapt 2 so far.. and im glad u liked it, really... it means im on a good path.. if u like it so far ull really like it once it gets into the real story..
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yes i saw it , ;D
and i like it really, and i'm going to fav it, so take after i can go and see the rest ;D
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Wow very well done...there are a couple perspective issues but over all really good. The story is very well done and I enjoyed reading it.
The light effects with the arrow was really neat!
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thanks a lot, i appreciate it...that arrow scene gave me a migraine tryna figure out how i wanted to do it....im still realatively new to digital coloring..Hopefull those perspective issues u mentioned are in the beginning somewhere and not towards the end...ive gotten better over these last 10 pages... i uploaded page 1 of chap2 already and ill be uploading page 2 by tomorrow...thanks again..
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Yah a lot of artists have trouble with perspective. It's just something you have to practice. I still have problems with perspective too. Keep at it and I'm looking forward to reading the next page.
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thank you 
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waaaaah i like this!! please don't get pisceans killed! the storyline is very unique and you gotta teach me hot to make those speechballons!! very very nice! 
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HAha, dont worry, the Picese have a big role to play in the story at some point... Everyone Taurus that reads this comes back asking why they died, LOL... i tell them it was just one, there are many Taureans out there...
Speach bubbles now... there are 2 ways i can think to do it, though ive only done 1 of them.. the one i do is:
1) Write the text first so i see what size the bubble needs to be.
2) use the circle tool with a fill color.
3) create a new layer and zoom in reeeeal close to draw the point that extends off to the person talking...i do the outline, then i fill it and color in any areas that might have been missed...
4)then i merge the bubble and the point together (they should be the same color), and add a stroke around it...
The other way im thinking is probably more accurate but im too stubborn to do it haha...
do 1) and 2) like before...
Then, use the line tool to make a triangle shape (this will be the extended point), merge all 3 lines...fill the triangle with color, go to edit> Transform> skew and u'll be able to curve the point in any direction u need..then do 4) like before ... one day i wont be such a tight ass and ill try this one..
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looks like you've got yourself a new fan! I love this comic!
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thanks...im trying...chapter 2 and 3 will be more exciting and reveal more of the story..and from there who knows...
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lol i cant wait to read the rest
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thanks dude, i appreciate it...id love to already be on the forth chapter like u, but since im learning as i go with this, its takin FOREVER...
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Hey don't worry about it man, it takes me about two and a half weeks for me to get a whole chapter done, on account of me only to be able to do one page a day.
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very cool! that arrow sequence blew my mind!
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wow, thanks...thats the response i was hopeing for but i didnt think anyone saw it that way..im still kinda new to coloring...im already doing the second chapter, so hopefully u will like that one as well...ttyl
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gread job dude! keep it up and you will be a master!!!
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thanks a lot...i shall walk this path to masterdom proudly (just pretend masterdom is a real word)...
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*imagines something waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay dirtier!!
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LOL, aaaah yeah i try to stay AWAY from that path as much as possibe..its a lonely one...2's company, 3's a crowed, 1 shouldnt happen unless uve got absolutely nothing better to do..well, unless the company or crowd likes it
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Awesome idea. I can't wait to read more. :3
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This isn't bad.. I feel sad for the innocent Scorpio guy that was killed, seeing as i'm a Scorpio.. And you kept it in moderately good shape as a comic. Now, i'm not trying to be "that guy", but I did want to point out that in the fourth pannel, when the Saggitarian guy showed that he was an Omen, you drew the same picture in the camera to the right of him, while it should have been mirrored. I read your Artist's Comments, and I know you don't plan to change anything, but learn from them, but I'm just like that, ya know? I'm not trying to be offensive.
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haha yeah i noticed.. im a jackass... in my other pic titled "view", i drew some birds flying over the ocean and forgot to turn the reflections upside down... it looked like birds were flying under water...eventually i figured it out and fixed it... but this reflection thing ( as SIMPLE a concept as it is to understand) throws me off...lol.. i get it, but i forget to do it...
but im glad u like it...and dont worry, the next scorpio we see is gonna kick the ever living crap outta somebody... u shall be redeemed... thanks again man
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You're not a jackass. Everybody has their weaknesses while drawing. Mine's hands and feet. And I hope to read the next one soon!
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woooooooooo hooooooooooo
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iiiihihiiii cookie cookie
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HAHAHAHAHA i swear this is based off of my dogs... i love that music...
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that video is like my life xD
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hahaha...if ur ever in america u can join in the circle with m dogs then...
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'm translating gradually
stopped on page 5
when finished leave my comments
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oh yeah, the guy on the last page named Receio is Brazilian... One day i will probably ask u to translate stuff from english to Portuguese for me if u dont mind...i want him to speak the language in the story sometimes...
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