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Steph1254 — A Little Bit Of Hope

Published: 2009-10-11 11:14:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 758; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 19
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Description Hurrah for a hope emote fail!

The idea was to have the grey emote be without hope (hence the loss in colour) and then for the green one to come along and give it some words of encouragement, making the hope and colour come back and then toddling off. But now it just looks like some kind of alien invasion.. It's not, I swear!

So err, yeah. I also saw that there was a single white pixel in every single frame when I added the file to dA, so I had to go through and remove this pixel from each frame, woo.

Sorry for the long artist comment by the way, I just figured I'd add a story to the emote.
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Comments: 23

Diesel-McCool [2009-10-11 12:08:25 +0000 UTC]

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Now this has put a really big smile on my face, specially as I ahave also been feeling a little down lately. Even with no voices, this emote brings such a beam of life back into myself and it most certainly will do for anyone else who has a first look at it.

I was wondering what this emote was all about at first but the message was very clear, and boy it's so sweet. The cheery faces, the animation, the colour that springs back into the grey body. It's all spot on. It makes looking at it again and again until you feel much better about yourself something worthwhile. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww" />

The only constructive crit I have here is the fact that it cycles too fast! It's such a sweet emote that it would have been better for it to be a little slower, maybe adding more emotions and possibly a happy tear? It's nothing extremily important but it COULD make this even more better. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww" />

What you have done though is so sweet and full of effort already. YOu should feel very proud of yourself. I personally think this should make its way into the dA emoticon legend. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod" /> There isn't anything like this in there so far.

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Steph1254 In reply to Diesel-McCool [2009-10-11 12:11:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique, its awesome to see you're using your new subscription to an advantage.

And yeah, I agree the cycle is too fast! Are there any parts in particular that you feel should be extended? Just so I know what to edit and such.

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Diesel-McCool In reply to Steph1254 [2009-10-11 12:30:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm so gald you're questioning me about my ctitique. I'm excited about this!

The emote is very nice and sweet, but it would have beeen better if the whole animation where you gain a red colour back was slower, giving that extra awesome sence of sweetness y'know. the part where you go grey is alright. The talking and hope giving from the green emote is very good and I can see what's going on.

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Steph1254 In reply to Diesel-McCool [2009-10-11 17:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Ahh ok, I'll definitely make the time the emote is red longer, then.

Thanks again.

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iluffchinchillas [2010-12-13 21:20:02 +0000 UTC]

awww this one makes me happy :]

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Steph1254 In reply to iluffchinchillas [2010-12-13 22:06:20 +0000 UTC]

Good! That means that the reason I made it for is working then.

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iluffchinchillas In reply to Steph1254 [2010-12-13 23:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Indeed it is! apparently I'm not the only one who feels that way either x3

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Steph1254 In reply to iluffchinchillas [2010-12-16 21:47:21 +0000 UTC]

Seems like it! Which I'm honoured about.

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iluffchinchillas In reply to Steph1254 [2010-12-22 14:23:37 +0000 UTC]

hehe yes, well its true so more than one person ought to agree with me ;D

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Steph1254 In reply to iluffchinchillas [2010-12-24 16:01:01 +0000 UTC]

I'll take your word for it.

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iluffchinchillas In reply to Steph1254 [2010-12-25 13:00:43 +0000 UTC]

thanksies! You have so much faith in me! ;D
Merry Christmas, btw! :]

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Steph1254 In reply to iluffchinchillas [2010-12-27 00:41:25 +0000 UTC]

I do indeed!

And thanks! I hope you had a good one.

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iluffchinchillas In reply to Steph1254 [2010-12-27 18:43:40 +0000 UTC]

awww gee! :]

No problem! I hope the same for you! ;D And I did, indeed, have a wonderful one!

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Steph1254 In reply to iluffchinchillas [2011-01-01 01:02:58 +0000 UTC]

I'll try, thank you!

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iluffchinchillas In reply to Steph1254 [2011-01-03 05:48:22 +0000 UTC]

No problem, girly!

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Steph1254 In reply to iluffchinchillas [2011-01-17 00:06:49 +0000 UTC]

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iluffchinchillas In reply to Steph1254 [2011-01-18 22:34:05 +0000 UTC]

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tehosc [2009-10-12 02:39:08 +0000 UTC]

I like it a lot especially how it's all been laid out. I understand the story and I think it's quite clarified from the first few frames of playing this emoticon.

The only criticism I can make is that the transition is a bit too fast, it just seems that the encouragement doesn't seem very "long-term" and that the words of encouragement fades out a bit too fast.

I'm not quite sure about the emoticon changing colour. It seems like paint has been dropped on him. What about a fade effect?

Perhaps an idea of the receiver (the red guy) lets out a sigh then turns grey. Just a suggestion.

Overall, very good. You have my seal of approval and bukkit.

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Steph1254 In reply to tehosc [2009-10-12 18:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the delay definitely needs to be longer really. And I'll see what I can do about the sigh idea, thanks.

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ManiacalMuffin [2009-10-12 00:57:41 +0000 UTC]

It's not fail. It's adorable~

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Steph1254 In reply to ManiacalMuffin [2009-10-12 18:35:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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BlissfullySarcastic [2009-10-11 12:19:12 +0000 UTC]

I like it.
I see no abduction, just some cuteness. :3

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Steph1254 In reply to BlissfullySarcastic [2009-10-11 12:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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