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funny4urface [2021-12-26 04:06:13 +0000 UTC]

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TMDComics [2014-04-18 16:37:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice work! Great colors.

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T5-Comix-Cartoonz [2014-03-15 03:45:27 +0000 UTC]

I've heard of dogs fetching slippers but this is the first dog I've seen who fetches shorts...that people are still wearing.

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Liketheisland [2014-02-26 00:40:35 +0000 UTC]

Not bad; characters and backgrounds stay pretty consistent (except for the height changes on the trees and the blond kid in panel 3), though I feel like the punchline could be funnier. For instance, if the dog could talk, he might turn to the angry guy in the last panel and say, "These shorts are tacky, sir. I'm doing you a favor." Or if you wanted to take the adult humor route, the kid could say "fetch the stick" in the panel 1, and the dog could say, "I thought you said 'fetch the dick'!" in the last panel. Neither joke is hilarious by any means, but you get my point. Just a twist on the expected reactions might add some more humor. Also, the panels are slanted at the top for some reason, the motion lines in panel 2 are unnecessary (readers can just infer the dog has run off), and there's a ton of space for the speech bubble in panel 2; it doesn't need to be confined to the tree. Anyway, that's just what I noticed, for future reference. Hope this helps!  

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Yo-Snap2 [2014-01-18 02:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear!

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EarthVStheDerek [2014-01-15 05:15:27 +0000 UTC]

WARNING!! Incoming bad joke in 3... 2... 1...

Well, that guy certainly ended up being the BUTT of this joke, ha ha.

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