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Published: 2017-03-14 22:29:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 567; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 2
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Here is the 3rd artwork of 's OC Aurora that I totally didn't promise to draw like half a year ago and oh god I am terrible when ti comes to time management and getting stuff done ;o;So yeah, apologies for the way too long wait, I already know that he likes it so that's good ovo
The sketch for this was from December, same with the style and I didn't want to overly change it cause I wanted it to fit to the style of the other 2 artworks so yeah
Had fun with the effects cause I haven't really drawn particle effects yet... I think?
Had a ton of stuff to do last week and basically didn't draw anything or played any game at all which was quite frustrating cause I was really motivated back then
And some credits for now:
Aurora belongs to
Goatmonsters are from the game Undertale by Toby Fox
This artwork was made using PaintTool Sai
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Heya Steve! Overall I love this piece, especially the colors ovo Just a few things I could point out: The scarf seems a bit thin, I have two scarves and they're a bit thicker but it might just be my preference. It works but I was just wondering about having his right hand out while his right leg is out too, seems a little odd when considering natural movement. Although I can see what you were going for I feel like the shading could be a bit better to separate the foreground parts of the body to the background ones (like the leg at the back)... of course the light ball in his hand lights up that part of the leg, that's where it gets difficult to critique haha.
As I said before your use of color is really nice and I can see the 3d feel coming through such as with the hair and clothing. The lighting Around the light balls and powers are nice plus the expression gives the artwork an essence of story to it. Keep it up Steve e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Hey! Thanks a lot for the critique and the compliments! :3
Oh yeah that is true, I drew it basically paperthin in the sketch that I made back in december and forgot to fix that when I finally finished it then
It is a bit unstable but works ^^
And yeah, I know what you mean with the shading but it is kinda especially hard here not only cause you have two lightsources cause you also have the one with cold colors in the front and the one with warm colors in the back which is quite weird to work with
Thanks again for taking the time to write this and the compliments! ^^
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AMAZING! I love how this looks. I wish I could draw like this. I can't believe how great this looks. You should become a professional artist. Same with Aurora. Please keep this up because I would love to see more. I can't wait to see what comes next. Please post more. I love Undertale and would like to see more fan art. You are really great at this and I would love to see more of what you can do. I hope you make much more art in the future. I also love the affects you put on this piece. Like I said before. AMAZING!!!
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Thanks
I'm mainly just a writer.
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Thank you a lot for all the compliments, it really means a lot to me! ;o;
Oh I am actually kinda on my way to become a professional artist, so it is actually not unlikely that I will be able to call myself that in a few years ^^
And I'll probably draw some more Undertale stuff sometime, I basically draw what I feel like drawing and some Undertale things every now and then would be neat :3
So again, thank you a ton for this! ^^
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It's amazing! All I can say is to add a little aqua the the picture, a little more variety in color to the background, and a little more shine to the oc. Apart from that, there's not much else! XD But I guess you could also add some shine to the background, and also add a horizon or color difference that distinguishes the floor and the rest from each other. And, ... you could also add more shadowing on the floor, since you kinda missed the shadow for right (front) arm. And idk what else, maybe add some more detail around the face... I think it's awesome.
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Thanks a lot for the critique and all the compliments! ^^
Oh yeah, I forgot to put in a horizon and some more colors in the background, kinda got lazy with that
I'll have to see when I can get around to trying that out but thanks a lot for the feedback! :3
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Yw!
For the right hand, I meant a light that fades into shadow, sry. XD
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Oh ok, I'll have to see wether I get around to fix that ^^
Thanks again!
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Your coloring is so pretty as usual +o+
One thing that bothers me is the way that Aurora is tilted. Like, Not just tilted as if his body is gonna fall to one side (which, well... is sort of a problem after looking at it), but if I took a piece of paper that was facing forward, Aurora would look like that piece of paper tilted slightly back (and I can't show what I'm talking about if it's unclear bc dA thinks my comment is spam if I do). I feel like it has something to do with the way you shaded, but I can't give proper contructive criticism on how to improve it with two light sources. ;^;
Anyway, I've been meaning to drop by and say that, but I had several things that were grabbing my attention.
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Thanks ovo
Yeah I kinda screwed up the positioning cause I tried to make it look like he is kinda leaning forwards while running but that didn't work out so well and the lighting isn't helping it at all since there is a lightsource behind him too
It's ok, no worries ^^
I'm way too late with replies myself too
VERY cool! You've got some pretty sweet lighting there!
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I mean, I would write a critique, but all I need to do is this.
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Oh thanks xD
I'd actually prefer it when people would point out what I did wrong or what looks off but apparently there is not much wrong with this here even tho I see several mistakes myself
i swear it's just Asriel
Nah just kidding. But it looks like Storyshift Asriel for real --> Β
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Really XD? I know he's really awesome and likable, like Asriel, but he isn't Asriel. XD
After all, we don't see SS Asriel using Ice or Lighting magic, or wearing a scarf, or a Delta Rune jumper. XD
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The scarf kinda looked like SS!Asriel's bandana tho
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You sure? It's blue and yellow though, instead of rainbow colored.
And it's a scarf, not a bandana.
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The coloring of his clothes is similar
Anyway, nevermind. Just reminded me of him
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I see. I'm not annoyed about the comparison, in case you thought I was.
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Oh I've heard several people saying that, you're not alone with that opinion
Never seen that guy before, I have like not seen a single Undertale AU so far besides MysteryTale from my friend Kamex, rip me ;o;
But woah he looks cute! ovo
Oh yeah and I didn't design this character, that was ^^
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Aurora: You goat to be kidding me!That's a really baaaaaaaaad goat joke! X3
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"Clearly not if you're using it yourself. : p"
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Aurora: Since I'm a Goat Monster, I'm allowed to make Goat puns about myself and other Goats. XP
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"Indeed you are."
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Aurora: With my ice magic, I'm the coolestΒ Goat around! X3
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"Cryokinesis huh? I have pyrokinesis, umbrakinesis, aurakinesis, and electrokinesis."
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Aurora: That's a lot.
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"Yeah. I'm better in some than others." Vaddix gently sits beside Aurora.
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(What species is he?)
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//He's an anthro Lucario.
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(I see.)
Aurora: *Creates an Ice Sword.* What do you think of that?
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"Nice," he says as he materializes a cookie.
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Aurora: How did you do that!?
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"I can open up a link between my room and myself." I offer the cookie.
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Aurora: I see. What flavor is the cookie?
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"Chocolate chip."
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Indeed xD
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... In Undertale, they don't make that noise. lol
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