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steven-donegani β AvX Tribute: Captain America vs Cyclops
Published: 2012-06-03 01:57:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 7620; Favourites: 212; Downloads: 0
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My piece for the tribute battle at www.ukiuki.comThere are only a couple of days left, so get your buts in gear and take part!
This was a really fun piece to make!
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Thank you so much!
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Awesome! congratz on the win in the contest.
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Thanks a lot man! I was stoked to hear the good news
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Wow man! This is such a cool illust! Amazing entry!
Some small anatomy issues (specially CapΒ΄s head) pretty much due to the perspective and angle but other than that, the perspective is one of the strong points of this illust and the texture on CapΒ΄s shield and CykeΒ΄s optic blast are fantastic!!! Great job man!
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Thank you so much. I messed up in some areas, but I've never draw something like this before so it was a helluva learning process
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ItΒ΄s always good to learn new things from the works you do, that means youΒ΄re improving as an artist! Hope to see more great art like this from you and congrats on doing so well on the contest! ;
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Excellent perspective! This is such a cool picture.
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Thank you Ivanna!
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Awesome work dude... Mine is a bit late xD im working on it... but, i'm thinking i wont make it in time :< I may change it for something more easier to do xD
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I would normally say "challenge yourself", but if you were strained for time, well the beauty of art is you can make shortcuts look good
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Captain America wins hands down.
Awesome work by the way!
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You're welcome!
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ok ill do my best to explain , so your painting doesnt look like you draw with forms ,meanings things can often seem flat and not fall into perspective as they should , at the angle you have the camera and the pose captain america is in you should be able to see parts of his face that you seem to have left out ,such as the inside of the right side of his upper lip ,the way you drew his face is as if you where looking at it from a head level side profile and that view of his face just wouldent be possible in this case as the camera is under his face for 1 and his face is vanishing into perspective , ontop of this you have this huge deltoid muscle with almost no bicep or pecs muscle and seeing as the the chest isnt much deeper in perspective than the deltoid and seeing as the pecs on the actual comic renditions of captain america are bigger than the delt you should pop the chests size a biz and take away from the delt .if you look at the stomach of captain america you can point out where it would anatomically be correct for his chest to be with this said when you compare that estimated chest size of captain america to the size of cyclops chest your sense of space becomes skewed as there chest size is around the same but yet cyclops is obviously much further back witch means you have to eather A: make cyclops smaller witch i dont recommend because he looks perfect as is OR B: chance the proportions on captain america to not only fit himself but to fit in comparison to cyclops .i dont wana sound like i was nit picking lol so im sorry if it came off that way .i admire this painting as i dont paint this style , i like it
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Not at all, any guidance to help make my work better is more than welcome! I'm actually going to take all of this into consideration and make some changes!
Thank you
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lol no problem thanks for even considering the advice ,iv met some really defensive people on here lol
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I get it, some people get defensive because of insecurity in their work, but while I do take great pride in mine, I know it's flawed but can't see it sometimes because I've been working on it for so long I don't notice. Any feedback and advice is always welcome especially when it's delivered in an intelligent manner like you did!
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lol thanks ,always glad 2 help
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love it !!!!! the anatomy on captain america as he falls into perspective looks to be off or flat but WHO CARE WHEN IT LOOKS DOPE
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Uh oh! Can you elaborate for me so I can fix it! I'm still in the honeymoon phase of this drawing!
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