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TobyValentine [2012-04-08 20:51:39 +0000 UTC]
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The lighting is good in general, but the eyes are amazing. The ways that they pop in this photograph is outstanding. The only thing that really needs improving is a more dramatic backdrop for the picture. Something like a city scene, in front of a tree or maybe a rocky beach.
You have great potential as a photographer. If you are not already considering it for a career... then maybe you should. Another thing though is you should try smiling a bit. Or making this model smile a bit. You and/or the model has very full lips and would look amazing smiling and it would make their and/or your eyes pop more. Other than that well done =ROland
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StevenKauk In reply to TobyValentine [2012-04-09 01:46:03 +0000 UTC]
The model is me, and this was a self portrait. Thanks for the critique. ^^
I have many new things since this is pretty old.
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TobyValentine In reply to StevenKauk [2012-04-09 04:28:46 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome and I realized that. I'm going to probably peek at some of your new stuff.
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georgiap247 [2011-04-21 02:00:01 +0000 UTC]
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I love this! It's very original and cute. Your eye for photography is very sharp and once again original! You should try to get more of a background in there to make it more appealing towards the eyes of your viewers. I enjoy the clarity, appeal and how amazing the model is!(hope i don't sound like a weird fangirl >_< ) anywayi hope you keep posting these and work harder towards fame and badassness on deiviantart (lol sorry bout that)
Keep up the good work and i look forward to future post
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rachel201611 [2018-01-27 04:51:59 +0000 UTC]
I think I've fallen in love (I'll never have a chance XD) You're cute, good picture taking my little shadow ...
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Rivendude [2014-08-15 17:05:49 +0000 UTC]
Such beauty is rare and precious. Ā I love your coat and scarf, its very elegant. Ā ^^
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kitka97 [2013-07-20 20:16:57 +0000 UTC]
This pic is really fantastic... I like the colors, lighting and you are absolutley one of a kind! Ā
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JennyMo [2013-07-13 02:35:21 +0000 UTC]
ur so beautiful wish i can find my dream guy like that ^^
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xHolyNunx [2012-12-31 08:58:08 +0000 UTC]
nice photo!
very cute...and smexy i have to say
hhahahah XD
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HaydenTheDemon [2012-08-06 04:05:08 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love this pic. You mind if I use it to base a character of mine off of?
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StevenKauk In reply to CrazyWave23HD [2012-07-19 03:31:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, my hair doesn't look like this anymore though.
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SynysterDemonicRose In reply to StevenKauk [2012-08-26 10:15:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh no! Why not?! Me likey...
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Ammykami In reply to StevenKauk [2012-05-23 18:14:17 +0000 UTC]
Welcome! I love your photos, you have an amazing look.
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ArtMyWorld [2012-05-05 02:11:30 +0000 UTC]
The lighting and editing are fantastic! I would add just a little contrast to the eyes thought (but that's more of a stylistic choice). I like the plainness of the background; it shows me that beauty is everywhere, not just in a perfect place. I especially like seeing the corners of the frames; they feel like home, like there's life behind the subject.
I must say, I absolutely love this composition <3
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StevenKauk In reply to ArtMyWorld [2012-05-05 10:56:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much. This one is quite old. =3
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ArtMyWorld In reply to StevenKauk [2012-05-07 00:44:00 +0000 UTC]
no problem ^-^
agghh I ment to put this as a critique but I realized it too late xD
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TobyValentine [2012-04-08 20:43:02 +0000 UTC]
I love the look. VERY cute! I love the lighting in it too
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BankruptBunny [2012-02-10 05:34:34 +0000 UTC]
You have really cool eyes...and hair....and piercings!
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BankruptBunny In reply to StevenKauk [2012-02-10 22:06:23 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome :3
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s-darkling [2012-02-07 05:41:42 +0000 UTC]
Love it!! May I please feature this piece in my facebook group. [link] I'll be sure to link back to you.
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s-darkling In reply to StevenKauk [2012-02-22 05:57:51 +0000 UTC]
You have been featured thank you for being so smexy!! [link]
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jokerlover000 [2012-01-27 21:59:27 +0000 UTC]
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withinmeloveresides1 [2012-01-13 23:41:20 +0000 UTC]
Very cool jacket and you've got such a pretty face!
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