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Published: 2010-07-22 03:51:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 719; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 4
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Description ~beza , inspired by Yume Nikki, got this idea to make a surreal RPG, and asked me to design some characters/monsters for it. Here's one that I have dubbed Pinkeye.

I'm not sure if this alone would count for the Surreal category, but I'm tossing it in there anyway. For reasons, read the above description.

And yes, I have learned how to make a transparent background on my own. Now to learn how to do so in a neater manner.

Pinkeye © ~StitchedUpZombie and ~beza I suppose, since the purpose of this thing's creation was his idea in the first place.
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Comments: 18

evanescent1 [2010-10-02 07:09:46 +0000 UTC]

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Very interesting creature design you have here! I agree in that it is surreal, as you wouldn't expect an eye on something to open up and eat you (it looks like a mouth?).

I like the colors, as they give off this sort of sickly feeling, like a monster from a game should if it's intended to be scary or unsettling. I've never played Yume Nikki, so I can't say much for the amount of inspiration, but I do enjoy the design you've got in the works. I would suggest maybe some more definition or devotion to a purpose (Is it supposed to be scary? Deceptively cute?) in its design, as at the moment it seems to be riding the fence on several different types of enemies you'd normally find in an RPG.

That isn't entirely bad in this stage, as it leaves a lot of room for development and expansion to be a finalized creature for this project. I'd very much suggest collaborating more on this, as you seem to know where you're going with it. Good luck on the game, you two!

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StitchedUpZombie In reply to evanescent1 [2010-10-02 07:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Woo, my first critique in this format. X3

I kind of like "deceptively cute", to be honest. The main things I was going for were "unusual" and "weird" - whether or not it's scary as is can be decided by the audience.

Maybe I was subconsciously going for "creepy cute"? I tend to combine things most people find attractive with things mostly considered repulsive. All I know is that my brother wanted "weird", "dreamlike", "surreal", etc., and my brain shat this out.

Thank you for the critique. Very much appreciated, it is!

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altergromit [2011-05-22 11:08:31 +0000 UTC]

Kind of cute!

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StitchedUpZombie In reply to altergromit [2011-05-23 03:56:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. c:

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altergromit In reply to StitchedUpZombie [2011-05-23 06:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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ThePal [2010-09-20 14:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I really like the style of this pic, it something over it.

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StitchedUpZombie In reply to ThePal [2010-09-21 01:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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OCEANSCENTED [2010-07-29 06:09:46 +0000 UTC]

A surreal RPG? That sounds awesome. Like Earthbound.

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StitchedUpZombie In reply to OCEANSCENTED [2010-07-30 02:58:13 +0000 UTC]

Considering that Yume Nikki has some shout outs to Earthbound in it, I think it was inspired somewhat by it.

I'm just taking TVtropes' word for it though. I've never played Earthbound, though I do know a few things about it.

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OCEANSCENTED In reply to StitchedUpZombie [2010-07-30 04:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Earthbound is pretty surreal. So you got it.

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beza [2010-07-24 22:00:56 +0000 UTC]

It was also inspired by shin megami tensei and zelda.

Yeah, this will work.

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StitchedUpZombie In reply to beza [2010-07-25 02:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.

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plushie-mutant [2010-07-23 02:25:43 +0000 UTC]

I WANT TO SQUISH HIS LITTLE FA- UPPER MASS PORTION.

(Beza's making a game? Bitchin'.)

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StitchedUpZombie In reply to plushie-mutant [2010-07-23 08:10:34 +0000 UTC]

He reminds me of Sid from Ice Age. XD Except as a cyclops with no legs and only stubs for arms.

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plushie-mutant In reply to StitchedUpZombie [2010-07-23 17:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Other than that.X>

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stefy-coool [2010-07-22 15:03:26 +0000 UTC]

lol wierd but cool~ ><

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StitchedUpZombie In reply to stefy-coool [2010-07-22 15:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Such is the usual effect I go for. Thank you.

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stefy-coool In reply to StitchedUpZombie [2010-07-23 04:10:18 +0000 UTC]

Welcome~ ^^

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