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Spent an eternity creating...Still nothing.
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the architect`s failure. a recurring theme in a new skin.
a few things come to mind as I am reading this (the main advantage with this short form - so much left unsaid, such a huge canvas on which one can still paint) ~
very nice.
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Glad you like it
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Less is more. I ovde je to dokazano. Jaka izjava, jak kontrast izmeΔu ova dva reda. Sjajno.
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Pre bih rekao da nije sve u velicini
Hvala!
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That's quite interesting!
I feel as if.. it's not specifically your purpose and that you strive for something, but you receive nothing in the end... or you could take it literally and look at it as if the person keeps creating but they don't come up with anything 'good', as such.
Depends on how you see it, really.
It's a great piece.
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j/k ofc.
It's the second one. I was trying to explain how some people, no matter how hard they try, or how many time they spent creating something (doesn't really matter what), they're never satisfied, and they consider themselves failures, just because they think it can be better.
Thanks! Glad you like it
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Ah, I see!
That makes sense. =/
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Ah, just the concept, really... it's a sad one.
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Next time, I'll try to write something a bit more positive
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Love it 
I'm seeing a lot of these 6 word stories and this one in particular is inspiring me to have a go at writing some myself
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Glad could I inspired you
Thanks
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I like this very much. ^^
You make me want to write the super short stories! XD
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I like this one more than the prior ones...it's more pensive and less cliche :3.
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Thanks. 
Wait...
prior ones?
I had only one before this one
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Heh, I was referring to our uh...conversation as well XD...
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Hahah, well conversing in six word segments can be difficult too, ya know? (I used 12 just in that sentence 
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Yes, I think I know, since I published two six word stories... (more to come
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Tebe nije tesko nasjmejati...
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Normalno da nije teΕ‘ko. Jako volim kratke priΔe, koje kaΕΎu mnogo viΕ‘e...
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Shvaticu to kao kompliment
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I like it and made a sequel on the top of my head.
Coward
because of that, we never try.
trying to sound clever here, but I really like it. so it's in the collection
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I'm sorry, I didn't quite understood what you wanted to say.
Something that my work inspired you
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not exactly inspire, maybe a little...
just saying it hit me and the 'sequel' is just to sound clever
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Wow, this one smacked me in the face with how well I could relate to it. This was really good.
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Whoops, I didn't mean to hit you
Glad you like it
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it is...its good...even tough it is 6 words..good job.
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Thanks.
I was aiming for 6 words. It's the point in
Visit the group, they're quite awesome
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np...
oh ok..thats what i thought it was..cool
ok..i will
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