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StraightJacketRed — Broken Friend Part II
Published: 2008-07-20 07:44:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 473; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description I spoke my mind, I said my words,
but before I could speak, he said unto me.
“I’m sorry for how I acted, I’m sorry that I yelled.
I’m sorry for my hate and sorry for what I said.

I was stressed, I was shattered,
my head hurt, my mind torn a sunder!
My mouth was open wide,
but my mind was closed.”

He begged, he pleaded, hoping I was not mad.
My head was cool, I was no bull.
My mind is always open,
and I said unto him.

“Don’t worry,
I understand, and I’m glad.
You took it out on me,
and not your younger brother.

I was never mad, and never will,
I was scared that I would lose my friend.”
We sat down at the table,
at the party we were at.

We spoke kind words.
We read over books.
We started the game,
knowing everything was well.

We played the game,
I walked home, I was happy,
knowing that it was all good,
with my still broken friend.
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Comments: 11

RayAndEdward [2008-07-21 13:40:42 +0000 UTC]

I like this alot. Yay! I hope you make another one. They are very interesting and definatly make you think.

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StraightJacketRed In reply to RayAndEdward [2008-07-21 18:01:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you! I'm glade that I'm getting people to use their brains!

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RayAndEdward In reply to StraightJacketRed [2008-07-21 18:12:10 +0000 UTC]

owwww. It hurts! I havn't used it at all this summer!

lol jkness

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StraightJacketRed In reply to RayAndEdward [2008-07-21 18:17:42 +0000 UTC]

i thought i heard a rattle in my head... oops! there goes my brain!

lol

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RayAndEdward In reply to StraightJacketRed [2008-07-21 19:32:47 +0000 UTC]

haha!

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CaptainQuirk [2008-07-21 00:58:49 +0000 UTC]

Again, I hope things work out for you. I like how you can combine memories and the present in this poem.

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StraightJacketRed In reply to CaptainQuirk [2008-07-21 02:23:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i don't know how its going to work out, but I'm gonna try to make it work out.

I've pulled miracles out of my ass before, and i can do it again!

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CaptainQuirk In reply to StraightJacketRed [2008-07-21 23:20:46 +0000 UTC]

Good for you! You go for it!

Next time you pull one out, can you please carefully disinfect it and lend it to me? I need a miracle too.

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StraightJacketRed In reply to CaptainQuirk [2008-07-22 00:17:22 +0000 UTC]

i don't know about the disinfecting part lol but i can led you one.

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....

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CaptainQuirk In reply to StraightJacketRed [2008-07-22 16:50:05 +0000 UTC]

That...not....what I had in mind.... You know what? I shouldn't have asked for anything that comes out of someone's ass.

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StraightJacketRed In reply to CaptainQuirk [2008-07-22 21:02:38 +0000 UTC]

lol sorry but i couldn't resist.

sorry!

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