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StraightJacketRed — Mmmm
Published: 2008-05-27 08:31:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 127; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description What am I tasting?
The sweetest fruit in the ochered,
It's juice runs down my throat.
The hottest pepper in Mexico,
My mouth burns in pleasure.
The sourest Candy in the shop,
My face puckers as my friends laugh.
The Bitterest coffee of the brew,
My head zips as it wakes me up.
The Saltiest corn of the theater,
It keeps my munches away as the movie goes on.
The warmest cup of chocolate in winter,
It's smooth texture warms me in the deepest cold.
The Richest Ice-cream in summer,
It guards the heat from my core.
The Thickest dip of the party,
It keeps me entertained during long nights.
The Creamiest cheese of the wheel,
Its taste keeps my sanity home.
The fizziest pop in the fridge,
It tingles my mouth as I play.
The best beer in the pack,
It keeps me patient as I cast my line.
The tangiest pickle in the jar,
It crunches with every bite.
What am I tasting?
The world, How good it is.
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Comments: 2

Dahnza [2009-01-06 09:20:22 +0000 UTC]

I like how you start and end the poem the same. It brings the reader back to your original question, and then you answer it with a personal outlook

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StraightJacketRed In reply to Dahnza [2009-01-06 20:55:33 +0000 UTC]

nummy!

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