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StrandedFighter β€” no competition
Published: 2008-02-19 20:15:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description You haven't changed, that's what I know now
You try to make me cheat, that's what I figured out
You don't understand that I'm serious 'bout him
You're no competition, he will always win
'Cause he is everything you'll never be
And I got the feeling he's the one for me
You made me weak long time ago
But that time's over, that's what you should know
Being friends would be alright with me
but being more is something I can't see
You said you're a fool 'cause you've let me go
I'm sorry for you, but it's too late now you know
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Comments: 5

SirMischa [2008-02-23 22:58:43 +0000 UTC]

Ich weiß ja nich um wen's geht und so weiter, aber das Gedicht lÀsst mich "Hallelujah!!!" rufen

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StrandedFighter In reply to SirMischa [2008-02-24 11:05:00 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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Whynotletmelive [2008-02-20 08:10:40 +0000 UTC]

i really like it
great werk
the onli thing that put me off is how the first two lines dont rhyme but the rest does
after that it deveolps a great flow
good werk
xo

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StrandedFighter In reply to Whynotletmelive [2008-02-20 15:11:04 +0000 UTC]

thx again

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Etsugua [2008-02-19 20:30:40 +0000 UTC]

I like this one, it's strong

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