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Would you please let me know what's wrong?!Please let me know if we can move on
You know I love you and I always will
But I need to know if you want me still
I'm in the car
right in front of your home
I know you're in there
but don't know if you're alone
I see your window
and the light is still turned on
why don't you answer the phone?
Would you please let me know what's wrong?!
Please let me know if we can move on
You know I love you and I always will
But I need to know if you want me still
It's been an hour
since I went for a ride
Now all I'm doin'
is waitin' on the outside
I see your room
and strange shadows on your wall
Baby, why didn't you call?
Would you please let me know what's wrong?!
Please let me know if we can move on
You know I love you and I always will
But I need to know if you want me still
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Comments: 2
Whynotletmelive [2008-02-20 08:06:50 +0000 UTC]
Love the chorus
but i feel like some of the other stanzas dont have enuff sylables or theres to many and it throws u off the flow of the poem.
a great read stil
xo
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StrandedFighter In reply to Whynotletmelive [2008-02-20 15:10:24 +0000 UTC]
okay, thank you
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