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Published: 2006-09-15 01:36:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 344; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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BrokenBattered
Bruised
Angry
Sad
Confused
All of this
Because of you.
You stabbed me
Right in the back
I didn’t think
I could ever hurt this much.
Lied to
Betrayed
Hurt.
Tears
Blood,
Flow freely
I don’t think
I can take it much more
You did this
So quickly
If I let it out
Will it matter?
Will you…
Ever care?
Did I mean
So little to you?
Was what we had
Nothing, after all this time?
Dying
Failing…
Falling.
Fading
Alone
Gone
Dead for now
Dead for forever
It was all you
Toying with me
My heart,
My mind
My emotions,
My life
Fading away
For what you’ve done.
Could you ever
Repent for these sins?
The use and abuse
Will it ever stop?
Tortured
Ripped
Mutilated
Black
Grey
And white
The colors
Of this vile world
In which we
All seem to play a part
Mutilated
By you
Your actions
So vain
You think of you
And only you.
Repercussions
Springs
Faults
Cracks
Holes
Tears
No patch ups
Just the shitty job you’ve done
Falling so fast
Into the voids
Forever
Falling fast
No end
To any of this misery
Is it truly
All right?
For all this
…agony?
Caught up in lies
You’ve created
Tangled up
With no escape
Simply a fly
Caught in your complex web
Devour me
In the worst of ways
And make it go,
Make your torture end.
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Comments: 15
this is amazing! I love it. I can relate to alot of it. you are a great poet. I only wish I could be half as good as you.
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Aw thanks ^_^ I keep writing and writing to get better. My friend keeps encouraging me so she's a big help. Thanks for the add too
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no problem. u deserve it
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Holy hell you did add this on DA
...and I did already review it.
What the frig?
MY memory worries me
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Very nice. The way you set off the words makes them feel stronger, I like how that is set up. But If you don't mind to make it a little easier to read, put a gap between the words and the phrases. But maybe that is just me... You don't have to listen if you don't want.
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I like
Was confused I was just letting it out....I didn't think about anyone else>_>;;;
But thanks^^
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That is fine, I was just letting you know. ^.^
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YOu poetry hater you.....
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I love your spider web thingie!! IT's so cool! You're all talented there Miss Ashlay. It;s all free-form and cool ^^
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>_> I'm so NOT kool...;-;...Like that face....I am gimpyyyyyy...O_O But thank youuuuuu
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