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Published: 2012-08-03 23:05:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1064; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 13
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okey..WOO HOOO!!!!
got a title for this one!
i so proud of mahself
but yeah, so this is like my newest drawing ofc, so i would very much appreciate it if i got some criticism on it >.>
dun be scared...i don't bite (all the time)
oh and ofc, if you wish to color this remember to give me credit for the original drawing and send me a link to your colored one, because i would LUV to see it, kthxbai
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Comments: 17
It's my first time doing this but here we go!
Well, I think you could work more on the anatomy, like:
hands- they are too small, if they were proportional, the end of the hand now, would be almost half of the hand itself.
eyes: they are not aligned, and, not feminine or appealing. put some eyelashes on her. (or not, I don't know if it's because of the drawing style)
head: it seems to be on the wrong place, I know the hair is covering the neck, but if I were you, I'd put her neck a bit more in front, like, the center between the shoulders.
The horns seems too big compared to her head size, and, if her face is turned 3/4 the other horn (the left one) should be shorter than the other, so it would be the right perspective.
By the way, the concept, clothes and scenario are good, the things are well positioned.
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Oh hi!
I really liked your drawing, and I'd be glad to colour it (even though I'm still noob at..and it has so many details...maybe one day, who knows?)
feel free to talk to me if you want (lol what)
I like to analyse other's works and feel hapy to tell them things they should improve (:
okok I'm writting too much..
bye \o [?]
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lol, tyvm
and go ahead if you wish, i mean since you called yourself a noob at it, then get some practice with this, just well, im sure i explained what to do if you wish to color it
and LOL, write as much as you want, that is what comments are for!
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Very well done! (:
The lil devil guy is just.....to adorable!!!
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lol, yeah i thought so to after i drew it I was like "hmm, i didn't expect you to be soooo cute xD" tyvm for your comment :>
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Lol, your very welcome!!
Keep up the great work!!!
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aww, shuks! lol
i didn't really put too much in, but tyvm c:
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well, if you didn't put much effort, then you've got so much talent, because it's really cool!!
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lol, aww that's sweet <3
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too be honest, I don't see anything wrong with it.. All I see is the significance of your drawing style.. It's very beautiful!
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tyvm!
all i just want to do is better myself in what i draw
just because well, if feel that it's not the very best, but tyvm for your comment ^^ <3
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