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Published: 2018-10-02 02:45:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 2578; Favourites: 96; Downloads: 4
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WOOOOO FINALLY GOT THIS DONEOkay, so, reasons for updating/remaking?
1. I don't like the old one
2. I decided on a new format
3. I hated the old format
So, the old one was made before I was informed of proper anatomy, like adding joints, defining the thighs more, fixing the boobs, etc. And even if this isn't the bEST anatomy...I still think it at least looks better than the old one. I've become a lot more aware of anatomy and how proportions work now, so that's good. I think this turned out alright, except...holy shit the torso is really long. I don't know why...when I drew the nude version, everything looked fine, even when I zoomed out. Then I started adding the clothes and everything, and...fuck. I messed it all up somehow.
Now, I have a new format for numerous reasons: one, it helps me with anatomy. Yes...there is an uncensored version...and yes, it is my first time drawing...the...yea(CANT WAIT FOR THE MALE CHARACTERS MMMM). I'm really going to need advice on that...but I'm not exactly sure how to upload the uncensored version quite yet. Let me try to figure it out...cuz I don't want it on normal deviantart in my gallery, I want it to be like...you know, an unlisted video sort of thing. Just give me a sec...
Uncensored Version: sta.sh/013v4druvg6k
Two, for some reason, I like this kind of thing better where you have the nude version, undergarments version, and finally full outfit/finished version. Idk why, but I like that kind of style for ref sheets. So I'm using it from now on.
I don't really like drawing the back views for this? Like idk why??? But I don't enjoy it.
Changes made: no back view, three different versions, details (ex. mouth, blush, etc.) off to the side, no heart/soul shown (cuz there isn't really a point to it...I don't think), tail added to details, ENTIRE color palette shown in corner. SO yeah. Hope you like it!
Despite the wacko anatomy...I really like this! i love how it turned out (and for some reason im obSESSED with her polka dot undergarMENTS AAAAAAA-) and im now way more excited to make more ref sheets. btw, my persona and different versions of Allison will be next, not Paul, Fish, etc.
Also, one more thing, if you decide to draw Allison, please use this reference sheet, because the color palette is provided in the corner, the normal colors as well as the colors used for shading. I notice a lot in ref sheets, people dont include the colors used for shading in their refs, and it really bugs me because then I have to just kind of come up with a color of my own for the shading and it could end up looking weird in the end :/ so there's that for ya! And I decided to add a bit of form to the boxes covering theeeee the things to make it stand out a bit more uwu I think it looked cool, heheh.
Okie, byeeeee..!
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Comments: 14
stoned-ocean-420 [2018-10-24 23:59:15 +0000 UTC]
I missed it when she was T H I C C
But I still really like this! You’re one of my favorite youtubers too ^w^
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Dapperzoruaxvaporeon [2018-10-03 00:42:33 +0000 UTC]
I FOUND YOU! wait you don't know who i am. im some girl who really likes your videos! (please dont judge me im really weird.)
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DoodleFreak21 [2018-10-02 14:24:45 +0000 UTC]
I really like how much you've improved! And here is some bootyful constructive criticism. The arms look very well drawn. As for the torso, I recommend zooming out more often and drawing the clothed version first. At least, that's what I do. Also references. As for the legs, they look a little well weird. I also recommend looking up an ASSTON of references. I'm still struggling with anatomy, but I look up references whenever I can! Now with the boobs, they look a little, well, saggy. No offense, but I also recommend looking up references for those as well. References are your best friend. I hope that this will help you with your art and I hope that you continue to improve! Also! I LOVE YOUR ART!!
okay i'm done now
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DrDreamMyst [2018-10-02 08:29:45 +0000 UTC]
HI HI HI HI! Time to give some delicious criticism. Cause yeah, I think you want some?
Ok, so, I would like to say "yes" on the arms. Those arms are looking pretty fine! But like the legs, if you wanna do a digitigrade (aka more like animal legs). Then you should may be find the knee, then the heel. (the most visible "pop out" type of thing on the leg.) Cause cats, they are somehow always on their tippy toes. I dunno why BUT ANYWAYS! (I am very unprofessional, sorry for that.) The leg bends on the knee like always and then think of the longest part (starting with that heel) like a BIIIGGG OL FOOT. Cause that's really what it is... or not Idk... It looks like that to me...
If you don't wanna really do anything like that then ok!!
Onto the body! I like the body looking nice and FIT or something like that I dunno, but them tatter tots, they look a bit too low, if this is like a young child going on their puberty then I don't think they would have them already sagging like your grandma's. Or if this is like an adult... still I don't think they just DROP DOWN TO GROUND!! (Sorry sorry!! Bad joke! I am still very unprofessional...) Anyways to fix that you should maybe put them up higher. Just so it won't look that wonky and another thing that like WowlsOfficial have said. Yeah! Have maybe like the torso a bit smaller! (This is optional you can still have it long so it can be a bit taller.)
I think that's maybe all and I hope this may help you. I am very sorry if it's not all formal and crap but like... I tried?? Not my best, but OH WELL! I hope you can take this... or not... I mean go crazy!! I don't care, this is just some comment and you can be like "Eh, I'll just go ahead and go somewhere else than this or something...." Anyways, why am I still here. ACK! Well bye! Wish you luck on your art near the future!
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WowlsOfficial [2018-10-02 03:07:36 +0000 UTC]
You’re getting a lot better with anatomy. One tip I would have is to make the torso just a bit shorter, and to make it so that there’s no line distinguishing where her thighs end. (It’s kind of hard to explain) it just looks off to me
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