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I've heard they're not on speaking termsThis explains a lot..
The quiet days, the difficult ways
The things that you *forgot*
I had suspected who was to blame
But I won't point the finger
It's not my place and doesn't help
To let this stuff just linger.
Instead of listening one ignored
All the gentle prods
And carried on in ignorance
Not even giving nods.
Never to communicate
A dire thing indeed
So much time you both have lost
When both have been in need.
Everyone else, they saw it too
It wasn't only me
They even tried to get through to you
But neither of you would see
How very frequent we screwed our face
In anger and in frustration
At all the times you both turned your back
And there died our anticipation.
Well, here we are, still watching on
Waiting on you two
Hoping that you open the line
And ONE of you gets through.
I Β hear you're not on speaking terms
Your heart and brain my dear
No pointing at the brain
Or the heart that lives in fear.
So come my love, I cherish you
Leave us in pain no longer
Talk to yourself and listen now
Our love will then grow stronger.
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Comments: 18
boot-cheese-3000 [2014-01-07 00:39:30 +0000 UTC]
Now THIS is a very beautiful poem, as crazy as that sounds. It's just that it reminds me of a similar situation that I had recently got myself out of. The pain described in this piece of work is all too real, sorrowful, and unapologetic. I don't recall giving a poem a "Thumbs Up Award" so if I haven't consider yourself the 1st:
yes--me and my oversized thumb just popped your cherry. how does it feel?
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StringOfCurses In reply to boot-cheese-3000 [2014-01-11 14:22:39 +0000 UTC]
TY, there are more on my blog... x
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boot-cheese-3000 In reply to StringOfCurses [2014-01-11 23:09:55 +0000 UTC]
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StringOfCurses In reply to boot-cheese-3000 [2014-01-12 03:52:32 +0000 UTC]
Sure, will note you Β
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boot-cheese-3000 In reply to StringOfCurses [2014-01-12 18:25:01 +0000 UTC]
Note received.
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darksoultea2 [2013-12-10 15:57:35 +0000 UTC]
Excellent! Just brilliant! You are a true craftswoman with words.
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StringOfCurses In reply to darksoultea2 [2013-12-11 13:17:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much x
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Skaramine [2013-12-05 23:51:25 +0000 UTC]
Your talent with poetry is as beautiful as you yourself.
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StringOfCurses In reply to Skaramine [2013-12-06 00:09:15 +0000 UTC]
^_^ bless you, you always say the nicest things, I appreciate that, truly I am humbled by you kind comments about my art x
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Skaramine In reply to StringOfCurses [2013-12-06 00:16:45 +0000 UTC]
That's because you've got endless talent and timeless beauty, milady!
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StringOfCurses In reply to Tiger--photography [2013-12-05 12:17:42 +0000 UTC]
Why does it warrant a sad face?Β
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Tiger--photography In reply to StringOfCurses [2013-12-05 17:46:03 +0000 UTC]
just felt...
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StringOfCurses In reply to Tiger--photography [2013-12-05 18:42:26 +0000 UTC]
Awwww.... well that's a good sign then if people are reacting, that means I'm doing it right
ty x
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Tiger--photography In reply to StringOfCurses [2013-12-05 18:52:26 +0000 UTC]
lol as long as you're ok?
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StringOfCurses In reply to Tiger--photography [2013-12-06 01:45:41 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely Β
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